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    Chapter 7

    A brilliant chapter, it is a pity that some people who did not get opportunities to advance themselves will also deny their children the opportunity when it arises, which is very sad but this happens all to often
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    Chapter 6

    Interesting chapter, I think that we are all guilty of being sqeamish about some foods but there is a saying act local eat local
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    Chapter 5

    Great chapter, they are in for a great partnership,
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    Chapter 1

    Interesting start to this New story, drama and sadness, good to read a story from a fellow South African, I am from the east of Johannesburg,
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    Pies With Lies

    Wow awesome chapter, from battling with the flour, to what seems to be ice breaking between them, interesting times
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    Chapter 4

    Great chapter, there seems to be a lot of excitement about what they may potentially find
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    Chapter 3

    Awesome chapter, interesting times at the dig ahead I am sure something will appear
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    Chapter 2

    Great chapter, I hope that they do going something significant, I like that his class is envious,
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    Chapter 1

    Interesting chapter, it looks like we are in for a wild ride in this story
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    Prologue

    Interesting start to this New story
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    Chapter 3

    Great chapter and ending to really feel good story, thanks again.
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    Chapter 7

    Oh sh*t , and here he is all alone with a pack of possible killers. A great chapter
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    Chapter 2

    Awesome chapter, love is amazing when you are lucky and fortunate to find it, I hope that they stick to it, interesting developments ahead no doubt
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    Chapter 1

    Interesting start to this story, I think there is more to the captain than meets the eye
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    Chapter 14

    I have serious doubts about that , here in South Africa it is not such a good idea, it would not last before it got ransacked ,stolen or burnt down
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    Chapter 2

    A Great and entertaining story, it certainly got the juices going, thanks
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    Chapter 14

    An excellent ending to this amazing story, I have cried and laughed with everyone in this story , so thank you again for such a great story, I await the next one
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    The Untouchables

    Awesome chapter, I hope that Sacha gets his act together and gets with the program. Interesting times ahead
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    Chapter 13

    Amazing chapter, karma is a b*tch that farm manager got his very just rewards, the family is definitely getting better with everything they do , I wonder what happened to the baker who tried to copy them?
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    Chapter 12

    Another awesome chapter, these boys are so full of love and compassion, Jim has helped set them up for life and I am sure they will pass on their experience to help others
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    Chapter 10

    Great chapter, I am glad that Jake is doing well, he certainly has expanded his family,
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    Chapter 9

    Amazing chapter, he and the boys have taken the catering truck to new heights, and it seems to be getting better and better,
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    Chapter 8

    Awesome chapter, things are going well , I suppose the baker decided to cut into the business, to get a share of the business. I think that either he gives up or the boys buy him out
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    Chapter 7

    Awesome chapter, they are going from strength to strength, they make a really great team, onwards and upwards
  25. Great chapter, Tyler is going through hell , no doubt he should not have answered the phone, however some sh*t is going to hit the door.. I can't wait for the next chapter
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