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Chapter 6: Improper Interrogation
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 6: Improper Interrogation
Awesome just bloody awesome, this was a brilliant chapter, more intense and colourful, I can't wait for the next chapter -
Great chapter, so hopefully the adventure continues
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Ok thanks but I was talking the trip back to the states
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Great story, I suppose all good things do come to an end ,
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Awesome chapter, great surprise for his parents, and a great new experience for the boys, fun times ahead
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Great chapter, and a really good trap to catch that "uncle", he deserves to be punished, I think that a much bigger house is necessary
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Awesome chapter, things are going well with everyone
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No I wish I did , then I could have won the lottery, your stories are just so very good
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Great chapter, so they are together again, interesting times ahead with the refurbishment and the new yacht, they are going to need patience with everything and themselves.
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Great chapter, so he is now firmly based in Italy, I would seem that he will be needing larger lodgings soon , the more the merrier
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Maybe in my dreams,
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Great chapter so the uncle was totally in the wrong and got his Dues via a court order, great, now it seems that he will take the adoption route, with buying a house
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Interesting start to this story
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Great chapter, he is certainly going to becoming a father at the looks of it , more despicable family, no matter where you go they are the same
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I think you may be correct,
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Great chapter, he certainly made the interviews work for him , now onto the secret holiday which no doubt he will not be alone
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Interesting start to this story, I think something is going to happen before he leaves europe.
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Interesting chapter, it seems all the worms are climbing out of the holes , nobody seems to be in the right mind, but interesting times ahead no doubt
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Interesting ending, I agree we have certainly messed up the planet , and we have so called leaders who are absolute idiots who are just digging us into a bigger hole, however nature knows how to dish out crap as and when is needed
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Interesting chapter a bit confusing but it all makes sense I hope torn is going to be fine
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Interesting chapter, no is no but I hope that they can sort out the issue, I wonder what is going to happen when they get to their destination
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Great chapter, so the gang shrinks a bit , sad to lose some of the gang , but the journey continues
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Chapter 5: Reckless Reveal
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 5: Reckless Reveal
Awesome chapter, not a good way to find out but I am glad that they settled that issue , now onto really meeting with mother -
Amazing chapter, 2 thorns who definitely need to have their points chopped off , awesome that Chris soundly defeated the 4 "elite" soldiers, his sparring match with his grandfather was brilliant, that Chris repaired the damage was just just pure magic , I think that the humans will see that better together than apart and that Havar and the congressmen are needing to be taken down quite a few notches.
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Great chapter, so his troup is expanding quite rapidly, he is really quite compassionate
