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WolfM

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  1. Happy Anniversary for a year of the new AAA. It's a great selections of authors and always wonderful to see their responses. Thanks to all who participate and make this possible.
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    Chapter 8

    Yep, you'll have to keep reading to find your answers Sometimes just hinting about it is just as hot. I don't mind writing a full on sex scene, but it isn't always needed. It's a good mating/joining process no matter if their lycan or Native American. I still don't know how I managed to go through the last chapter without missing a single week. Each chapter was in process for three to four weeks before posting, but it was a lot of work.
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    Chapter 7

    Vision, strength, especially smell and hearing are all heightened in the lycan. If their in their animal or human form, the senses are about equal for them. Blow a dog whistle and I lycan is sure to hear it. As for "other" abilities, I'll leave that to your imagination, but I will say, stamina is also improved.
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    Chapter 20

    Thank you so much, Normischell When I originally wrote this, I thought I was doing a good job. Posting a new chapter every week, I know there were things I was missing. Carlos has done a wonderful job of editing and teaching me what I need to be watching for. This gives me a chance to fill in details I didn't realize I'd missed. I read over that WOW wiki page several times when I was trying to decide on Ethan's true nature.
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    Chapter 6

    Thanks Backwoods
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    Currents

    Thank you tim Floated in line with one leg of the pier for a half hour without paddling to stay in place.
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    Currents

    Thank you Jeff. A little Beach Boys while surfing is always a good thing.
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    Currents

    Thank you AC. I really need to spend more time learning the different aspects of poetry. Being able to successfully compose new styles will be fun I think.
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    Tanka #2

    This makes me smile and reminds me of all the times I've laid somewhere watching a web take form. Well done.
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    Tanka #1

    This is beautiful!
  11. The evil mistress strikes again; Mother Nature shows her perverse joy to torment. Under sunless skies our group waits and talks; Our surfboards bobbing in the small swells. We sit, feet dangling in the cold water; Watching little crabs crawl up the piers leg. Even the current seems to be against us; Holding us still in its clawed grip. Though the number of wetsuits today is small; The camaraderie of the waves keepers binds us. Hopefulness
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    Journal 20

    Thank you as always, Mikedup. No clue when or if a book 3 will come out. It's still in the rough early stages. If I could get the characters to play nice like Chris did it this, it would be ready soon. lol.
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    Chapter 4

    Thank you Backwoods
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    Chapter 4

    Thank you, Backwoods Two slightly separate consciences in the same mind, but yes, with their own perception of the world. Each able to guide and counsel the other to form a whole.
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    Chapter 10

    Great chapter. From my own experience I can understand TJ's trust issues. It's difficult to see or hear something and not jump to the wrong conclusion. Unlike in the hospital, TJ handled this one well, with the assistance of Josh talking him down. Sean did the right thing when he found there was a problem. If I were TJ, the only thing I would have done different would have been to save the full body picture in front of the mirror. Even if he gets to see the real thing, at least the mental image I get would be nice to keep
  16. Happy 16. Thank you to everyone to manages the site, writes, edits and reads. It's a group effort and one I'm proud to be a part of.
  17. Thanks for putting this together, Carlos. It's always wonderful to see.
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    Journal 20

    Thank you rbenn and welcome back.
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    Chapter 9

    Really liked this chapter. Damn you though... Your description of the accident on the field: his head snapped back, the sound of bone breaking, him lying there with his head at an odd angle. I really thought you broke Sean's neck and I'm very happy you didn't. I like Sean's character and he's going to have to give up a lot of things, but unless he was planning on going to college on a football or baseball scholarship, it might not be that big of a deal in the long run. You gotta love TJ and the way he does things. Sometimes though, you want to smack the &^#$ out of him for going overboard. I know he's still got a lot of problems, but he hit the lottery when he met Sean Can't wait for chapter 10.
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    Chapter 2

    Originally I hadn't planned on having a mirror chapter to the 1st from the wolf's POV. Hopefully I'll turn you to the genre
  21. WolfM

    Chapter 1

    Thanks Bankwoods Yeah, go with what works and build off that. Hope you enjoy it.
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    Chapter 50

    Thank you Ezz
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    Journal 20

    Thank you Ezz. This story did expand a little over the first version of its rough draft. I did consider taking it further with the two. Since it was about Chris and his journey to find his new place in life, it seemed the appropriate place to end it. I have thought about doing a short story or two that might give them some additional time, but we'll have to see.
  24. Thanks to the editing work of Carlos Hazday, Running with the Pack chapters 1 through 10 are now in their final edited version. This edit qualifies as a major re-write, both from the amount of errors that are being fixed as well as new content. I will most likely post in groups of five to ten chapters when they are completed.
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    Chapter 8

    It was great to see this, and chapter 7 which I had missed. You did great on this chapter. Mark sounds like an interesting addition to the group. I can't wait for chapter 9 since that is one hell of a cliffhanger you left us with.
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