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Another banger of a story Headstall! Smashed it through within four hours last night! A very realistic story - I must say (currently in my outer circle of friends there is this love triangle thing going on with three guys and well it's not the prettiest thing on Earth very relatable in that sense). I think the epilogue - although epilogue-y kind of stuck out from the ups and downs and twists and turns in the story - more suburban if you wish and almost like the happily ever after in the m/m romance. Personally, I think the story would have ended better at the 11th chapter and instead of the (supposed) hand job scene, i would have definitely ended it with a bang, literally - but with more detail of course! But that's just me! Another great story and I look forward to reading another one of your great stories soon!

Such a great story! I read it all in under a day! I didn't reread the first story, but I remember it enough to get a sense of where things were - and I distinctly remember me blowing my nose! Now I am blowing my nose again, because they finally got their happy ending! I look forward to read your other stories and see where they will take me, but I will definitely revisit Ryan and Erik's journey again in the future! ps. I think it would have been nice if you included more detail on the aftermath when Ryan left New York... you hinted it in the 'Friendsgiving' chapter, but I think if you expanded on it, i would have loved to see what Ryan's reaction would have been like.

I cannot wait to read the second part, and you better not let me down Mr.! However, I love how you slowly revealed each of the characters characteristics and slowly built upon them. I definitely think you have equally built on the characters of both Erik and Ryan - and in some ways they are pretty similar, yet at the same time, they aren't. I do see that they are yin and yang and they match perfectly together (they have the same core, like the psychological struggle of being in the porn industry, and obviously that challenge of trying to decipher whether their chemistry on camera was real or not, but they have a different outlook on life and that is what makes a big difference in their personalities), but I have hope that you are able to find a way to get them together for that happy ending!

Its 2am right now and I have a tissue in my hand! How could you do this! I went in there thinking it was going to be something sexy, fluffy and a feel good novella! Not something so sad and heartbreaking! Why! I can just feel the pain and anguish in both the characters! (Although the whole plot line for the porno shoot does sound like a Cocky Boys production haha)! I definitely enjoyed it and I am going to find the second part of this, and it better have a happy ending! ps. I loved your style of writing and everything BUT, damn you do know how to pull a few heartstrings and draw out the emotions!

Great story that you have written there! It's short, but it is oh so realistic that I loved it so much! Nothing like a typical over dramatic GA story where it feels as though you want to rip your heart out in alliance with the protagonist, but at the same time, you are able to get so much in seven chapters! It is a sad but true fact that there are many Sean O'Grady's out and about and that it is very hard for the victim to get what Tait got out at the end - a supportive friend/lover, a kind ex-lover as well as ex-lovers new boyfriend as well as everything out of a divorce/legal proceedings. I dare say, I would have pegged this as a light-hearted story where love conquers all, with a very serious undertone. Bravo!!

I loved this story! The characters and the emotions and the undertone of sadness got squished by happiness and love. It wasn't a tear jerker or anything (on my part), but I honestly couldn't stop reading it! Now I am off to read your other stories, since I loved this one so much! Bravo!

I love the story overall, but I feel as though the story is a bit... skeletal... if it makes sense to you. I like the story line and the plot and the uniqueness of the werevamp aspect. Even the description of Richard is bare and it takes a lot of interpretation and imagination to sort of assume where you are coming from. Like I know he has thick black hair, but is it wavy, straight or curly? I know his body is muscular, but how muscular? Body builder status or the classic model good looks sort of muscular? Also it took a lot of thought to realise that Simon is a successful author, living in a townhouse, but where? I also think the love scene was rushed, yes I know what would happen, but it would be nice to actually read it in more detail. I am not sure if you intended it this way or you just left it out, but luckily I have a good imagination so I can fill in the blanks, but to other readers, maybe they won't really think the same way. Like I said I love the story but I just find it to be a bit bare at places. Hope you don't mind my critique!

Clem sounds like the all time dream guy. Big, rugged, masculine, handsome, but on the inside, he is sweet, caring, sensitive. Oh god! Nate on the other hand, he sounds like an all round douche who takes advantage of poor Clem! I hope Clem finds someone who truly deserves him later on!

Came here from your recommendation of your other story! I am loving the first chapter and will definitely put it on my reading list! I am the type to cycle through whole stories in about a day or so, so I will wait for you to complete the story first and read it all in one hit I am liking the action in it and Kellan sounds hot!

This is for the overall story - but overall I LOVED IT! I only started it last night around 11.30pm and I finished it just now! Its hard nowadays for me to find perfectly written stories, and I feel as though this is a new favourite of mine! I would have loved to read the scene where Jarred bottomed for the first time and maybe more steam, but in this case, I felt there was just the right amount of sex in there. I look forward to reading more of their journey. Maybe even Harlen and Craig's story too? Although that would be a pretty sad one, but this can be a sequel to that one. Just a few ideas here and there! Great story overall!!!!

Why do authors always make the angsty characters soften up so quickly? If it was me 10 years down the track, I would still be mad at Eddie.

From my last chapter review to now... I have finished this story with that nice warm feeling. I loved this story and I love how Ezra and Hendrik interact with one another. Yes it may be a bit cliche, yes it may be a bit corny and yes it is highly unrealistic, but the story is just so well written that it gives somebody like me hope that this may happen to me one day too. Overall a gazillion stars for this story. Had me laughing, worried, slightly cringing, and finally having a huge 'aw' moment here and there. By far one of my new favourite stories and definitely going to be rereading it sometime in the future.

Probably not allowed swear on here, but I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY! OMG! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! And I only just started last night and now I am here!

At first I was skeptical about reading a werewolf/fantasy based story (automatically thinking werewolves = Twilight) but boy was I wrong. I think I preferred the beginning part of the story where Parker and Colton were just beginning to date, but the change in the story and how Colt turns Parker into a werewolf, adds a wonderful twist to the story. I cannot wait to read the second book! Mind you I just started this afternoon and I have already read 30 chapters! Great work!

Lovely story! I always think that stories are just like television series. You either get into them or you don't. For your story, I must say I surely got into this one! Just the right amount of sex, romance, drama, it makes for the perfect blend! I can't wait to read all of your other available stories soon!