FieldMan

Keep hoping

But...for how long?

Don't you dare

Please, they're not good, they're awesome! This is where I got the "strike-sick leave-pregnancy leave" combo

Hey, I got to keep our reputation intact Do you know Palmashow? They do an awesome job on this matter. Time to sleep for me G'night buddy!

FRENCHIES, UNITE! When? Well I don't know, tomorrow I'm on strike, then I'm sick until 1st March, then I'm in pregnancy paid leave, then [...]

As long as of one us is crowned, I'm happy

I just beat you, clochette

Comsie, Comsie !! The very second I saw the update...I pushed my course material aside and stopped studying to rush myself into this new chapter And I'm not disappointed at all. The "big sandwich" sounded appealing, but hehe I'm very happy he didn't fall for it and stayed faithful to his cutie. The whole part where he's struggling inside is very good, and as realistic as it can be. Many thanks!

(Catching up ) Welcome folks!

This is so fucked up

I'd love to see a spinoff about Cody. His character is really interesting: witty, cheeky, with a heavy background, but still a big heart behind his defense mechanisms. I'm sure it'd be very entertaining

Hey, Just thought I'd drop by. You be sure to have a warm welcome from Athens, from a frenchie. Trunks, trunks. Avo.

Re-reading the stories again, I now notice how much the "story telling style" differs from one another. Especially when it comes to the first part of these stories, the whole path until they get together. Some, like "Jesse 101", are really long, teasing the reader; while entertaining him very well. And others, like the TWD fanfic, or the excellent "A class by himself", are really nicely told. Every so gently, but not as slowly as the one mentionned above; and I don't know why, but something in this way makes it the perfect balance. This one though, is a bit too straight-forward for my tastes. Don't take me wrong, I still like the way it's written, the way the story is told; but the "rush" just makes it less entertaining. You don't have this slow anticipation that builds up in the reader, and personaly I don't really get as much "thrilled" by R&R eventualy sharing their feelings for the first time as I was when it came to Derrick & Tanner, or Jesse and Tristan. I'm just like "yea okay, why not", while other stories made me "OMG ! Eventualy ! That rox !" and eventualy, popping a few champain bottles with my homies to celebrate it. Well anyway, I'm not even sure anybody hangs in this chapter reviews anymore, but I just felt like giving my reader opinion. Which is still a good one - and it doesn't involve any trunk.

Duh, the left pic looks like the guy got stung by a bee or got hit "right in the kisser" ^^ Great chapter anyway, as always !

Yea, I'm me again. The guy with the trunks-fetish. Be it me or one of my friend, that Johnson guy would definitely end up, with his minions, in a very bad posture. What are friends and basements done, if not for helping you settling things with your bullies? I might get too pasionnate about this story, but as in real life, there's no way I'd let bullies make a bitch of me or one of my bros; and a good turnabout, as well in the story as in life, it'd be interesting to witness the new speech of these bullies once tied up to a pipe. Hah. If this story would have been a bit more anchored in reality (twisted up one, I agree), all the bully thing would have ended in a couple of chapters. Comsie, make a story about 2 ballsy friends in a suburb; I'm sure it'll be damn interesting =D

Yep. The trunk. Definitely.

Ahhhh, ya know. If I was in Derrick position, and that rich babe, as sweet he was, started making me his bitch and threatening me and Tanner, well. At first, I'd be his bitch. I mean, I'd be the guilty one, right ? I'd be the one who screwed it up. But, ya know, if he still gets his kick out this after a few days/weeks, I'd maybe - who do I fool ? I will - take measures to keep his mouth shut. Like, you know, nothing too extreme. Just try once more to discuss the matter, and if he plays the smartass; try again the discussion with his punkass in the trunk of one of my friend's car. And since he'd keep playing badass, we'd have *another* discussion, somehow unfortunately common where I live. With him tied to a tree, in a forest, by a lovely night wrapped in the moon light. A friendly discussion, just to settle things once for all; to incite him to let go of the threat and play it nicely on the "I'm his bitch" stuff. Like, alright, be an asshole, I deserved it, but don't cross the line (Heh, am not a monster, am still the guilty one!) I mean, friends, what are they for; if not for helping you having a friendly discussion with your bully? Kids - don't try this at home.

Hey Comsie ! I'm following your writings since the very first chapter of GFD; was present on the oh so old IRC channel dedicated to your stories (among other things, hah). You really rocks. It's been something like 2 or 3 years that I hadn't read your stories, and I'm glad to see that you're still working on it. By the way, I'm not a native speaker, and most of my english has been learnt from you. As singular as it may seem, you're the main reason I can state "fluent english" in my resume and go for international jobs. I was a kiddo when I first read your stories, and hell did it help me for any narrative stories homework I had to do back then. Anyway, that said, I think I speak on behalf of the biggest part of your readers by saying : PLEASE, don't you just stop on a cliffhanger like that. Be it about this story of the one about the fanfic of The Walking Dead, it's very, very, very frustrating. Like, will Evan be faithul ? If not, how will he get away with it ? Will eventually Gordon "give up" ? C'mon, I really want to know what happens next. Please don't make us wait too long ! Avo.