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Settling In, and an Oh No!
RainbowPhoenixWI commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Settling In, and an Oh No!
I gotta say, asides from being intense, I love the fact that you're able to cover the necessary in a way that is very not likely to cause flash backs. Well that and I'm loving your style over character development. Just remember, you start massively pulling heart strings and you're getting the dog house. 😝😝😝- 49 comments
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Shhhhhh, haven't you learned from other comment sections? Don't give evil artists ideas, and this one is almost as evil as they come.
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That reminds me, has anyone figured out the silver eye thing. I done reread everything and couldn't find nothing. Not even a hint of a reference.
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Patience is a virtue and I want it now darn it.
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Well that ended intriguing. This makes me wonder how big of a web the group has now stepped into. By the by @Justin4Fun I'm very tempted to hire you to write the D&D adventures I run. Your in depth plots would make Lloth proud, lol.
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Yes sir Do I have to? 😭😭😭😭😭 Edit * woot, first on two, I win 😁😁
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Amazing adventure. I can best describe this as an intense roller coaster of heart strings and hand grenades. The author definitely plays your heart strings better than Kenny G plays the soprano. Well handled personal situations and perfect touches of humor to keep you going, as well as some of the best 4th wall breaks I've ever seen or read. No matter what genre you like, this has some of everything. A must read for everyone.
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And yes you're grounded too @drsawzall, I'm making a special dog house for you, joined to both @weinerdog and @kbois. Introducing me to a story like this, and getting me written up at work, Holy frick nuggets. 😁😝😁😝😁😝😁
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You can say that again. Now I have to see if I can make the world's longest word.
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Dangnabflibbinrollercoasterheartstringsnaggingbirdlickingroosterjabbingpignagging son of a bisquick stealing horse mongering steel toed frog kissing beatnik loving cracked 8 track of a 45 bent needle dingle berried ......... hold on I gotta catch my breath. .... DOG HOUSE NOW ...... GROUNDED ..... yes you can steal @weinerdog's pillow on your way. Holy fricken heart strings and hand grenades was that a ride. Last time i had this many tears happy and sad I was reading some of Stonies work. Which reminds me, I still demand a happy tears reaction button.
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I'm just glad I don't have to deal with the torture of waiting for a chapter to drop to conclude a cliffhanger. One of the few perks to being late to the party. All serious, this story is a great ride so far. Intense and driving. I keep getting torn between threatening you with a dog house, or offering you the pull out and big fluffy cushions.
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@weinerdog I'm blaming you. I just got written up at work for reading 😭😭😭 how dare you introduce me to such an intense story .... actually I think it was one of the doctors that tagged me, but I'm still blaming you. Note to self, do not be on the phone reading when the corporate manager shows up to rent a room at 4 in the morning 🤣🤣🤣
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OK, I guess you can get a free pass on getting sent to the dog house ..... this time. Asides from how well you play the strings, I'm loving how beautifully and adorably you keep breaking the 4th wall. That and how well you are describing the hearts and minds of the kids. It's not easy, even for someone who's lived it, to get the mindsets and fears right. You are definitely nailing it in this story.
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Yup, I was right to put you in the dog house, you evil heart string yanking artist.
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Well I'll be hornswaggled by a ferklumped duck. I guess get me flabbergasted and I might be able to reach that limit. ...... does the comment section even allow that many characters in a single post? I really really really feel the need to test this now. *edit* woot, first on 2 😁😁😁
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Challenge accepted 😁😁
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Thank the gods I don't work tonight, lol
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Well now I have 66 chapters to catch up on. Judging by your reaction this must be a dang good read. 😝😝😝 don't worry, I have a spare doghouse already to threaten a new to me artist with 😁😁
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When they were gone, Jenny looked at me and asked, “Did you just join the mafia?” Sicilians and potential death? There better not be any powdered wine glasses, giants, or Spaniards...... R.O.U.S's are totally fine though, and a guy named Max.
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Don't forget the shock collar, just don't let me have the control. 😝😝😝
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Man, you are gonna make me go back and reread everything to see if I can find the answers to all my questions. I'm half tempted to put you in the dog house right out the gate on principle now 😢
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Awww man, I'm not even done with the spreadsheet of characters from the previous books yet 😭😭😭😭
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I do my best to make Gabby Johnson proud 😝😝😝
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Dang nabbit, where is my happy tears reaction button. Someone needs to get on installing that. You're lucky I like your work or you'd be getting another dog house for this one ....... I really should create a rating system around that. All serious, totally flabbergasted and ferclumped. Definitely getting added to my favorites.
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Older sci-fi is better anyway. A lot better world building and much better depth to characters
