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RainbowPhoenixWI

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  1. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 9

    Well, I guess intense would be the right word.
  2. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Prologue

    What? Read a story in order? But that just spoils the fun 😱😱😱 I'm just hoping this one is amazing as the first 😁
  3. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Prologue

    Well that's an interesting starting point. Definitely caught my attention right away.
  4. RainbowPhoenixWI

    14: Finley

    All I'm gonna say is don't ever trusted a gnome when he says "I fixed the trap, you can go through the door now" Not saying another word, one of my players also reads on here. ..... granted I do wonder what kind of tinkered devices would accumulate in a den full of gnomes. That or getting stuck inside a Rube-Goldberg machine would be like.
  5. RainbowPhoenixWI

    14: Finley

    Well that makes for a fun mental twist. Makes me wonder what I'm gonna do with the dragon in my d&d campaign that I made hoard insane gnomes.
  6. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 8

    Well now you've gone and done it. Now it really must be canon.
  7. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 8

    I try not to think too much. It often results in thinking cramps, and damages my poor Polish blond brain.
  8. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 8

    Well that was an intense discovery. I will admit that with all the anagrams, and the plethora of B's, that there wasn't a BDSM slipped in there somewhere ..... floor 2B, first left and down the hall
  9. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 8

    Yay, you waited to post till I was off work. Now I won't get written up for reading on the clock again. I'm gonna go read now, bbs.
  10. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 12

    Great build up of intensity. I hope the two are able to get their darkness purged soon. I'm slowly getting the feeling they are going to have to accept the darkness in order to control it inside of themselves though.
  11. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 7

    Lmfao, I had a DM do that once for a campaign. I cried worse than Lucy when she gets caught 😭😭😭
  12. We'll have to wait and see. At least the intrigue is worth the wait.
  13. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 7

    That just makes me wonder how many characters I'm gonna have to add to my flow chart. 😭😭😭 granted the interconnected characters make it fun, but still,
  14. That's why they invented re-reading. I had to go back and skim through the previous chapters so I could remember what was going on, lol. I'm so happy to see this story going back up. @ColumbusGuy, thanks for your perseverance. I'm happy for you to have found a way to get this ship rocking.
  15. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 14

    Dot Matrix was the best character from Spaceballs. 😁😁 the virgin alarm was definitely amusing
  16. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 14

    Lol, I think covid would have happened to us with or with out bats. I'm in the party the believes intentional lab release for population control. Our governments have admitted to doing stuff like that before. The US government especially is notorious for stunts like that. But back to bats and diseases, did you know that they are guaranteed to have rabies, cancer, and a few other lethal diseases. However their metabolism is so fast that they suffer no effects from them. Even if you wash the bat, and wash your hands you are guaranteed to catch something if you handle one with your bare hands. They are totally one of the world's most interesting creatures. And great at pest control. 😁😁
  17. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 11

    Well that was a flabbersmacked ending to the chapter. I swear you enjoy leaving a chapter ending with no less than a thousand questions up in the air. I would definitely be scared to leave you in charge of writing a movie or theater script
  18. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 5

    That was just plain adorable and heart warming. So chill compared to what I've been reading lately. I could definitely see putting my feet up on a fire and reading the occasional check in on these characters.
  19. Yup, lol, and if he keeps pulling heart strings I'm installing an electric fence 😁😝😁😝
  20. Hey now, I'm nice every other Tuesday..... or was that Fridays? I'll figure it out next week, dang nab kids .... get off my lawn 😡😡😡😝😝😝
  21. One of the best stories I've read. Perfectly handled material and great characters. I'm not gonna rest until I get everyone I know to read this
  22. Yup, you're official any evil artist 😁😭😁😭😁😭😁😭😁😭😁😭😁😭😁😭😁😭😁😭😁😭😁😭 You're permanently in the dog house.
  23. Well this was a joyous find. The quick pace definitely makes it an excellent ride, with a few head snaps and a lot of feel goods and tummy tickles.
  24. RainbowPhoenixWI

    Chapter 21

    Man, you trying to take away all the fun 😭😭😭😭 we've all been patiently waiting to see if he was gonna bolt and run or not 😭😭😭 lol. Don't make me put a basement in your dog house now 😝😝😝😝 Wait .... didn't I already threaten you with a basement ...... I claim suffering from CRS and oldtimers syndrome
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