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Well shizznit, that entire chapter was unexpected. For some reason I feel sorry for Doptus. For starters now being stuck with Jolanda is gonna be interesting to say the least. I would normally throw you in the dog house by now, but i'm still processing the shock and ponderment
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Do I have to admit that you're right? 😝😝😝 not gonna lie, the best part is that it's so hard to predict where he is going. I'm almost tempted to start taking notes and creating diagrams and all that nonsense.
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Right. I wanna know what it is 😭😭😭 It doesn't help that our dear Lupus ties stories into other stories into other plots more delicately and intricately than Stephen Kings attempt at a mass legacy. Way too many questions that I can't divine the answers to. *insert mock angry face here*
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Holy fricken jibber of a monkey spanke. You're grounded. Turn things upside down and make me happy to see faceless. So warped and evil. Total sadness over the seers though, that's gonna be a massive loss. That's gonna build into an interesting twist of an escape attempt. All your moving pieces lined up to collide....... are we about to hit the storm of the century, or a butt ton of near misses .... very tempted to preemptively throw you in the dog house. I do feel sorry for Zdain, all the pieces moving in his direction, his hearts about to get shredded.
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Gotta say, I love when Elyssa shows up. Kinda a love/hate. She truly loves her children, yet at the same time is one heck of a vicious snake. How you manage to keep such a complex character straight with our screwing up one of her many motives is truly amazing.
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That was an interesting and enjoyable addition to the cast. I was expecting more espionage from the outside, rathar than a surprise from with in. You're definitely raising the bar on intrigue with this chapter.
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Melgy to the rescue. I feel sorry for anyone that tries standing in her way. At this point I'd be scared The Moirai would flee from her in terror.
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So what i'm hearing ... is next time i'm on the east coast, if I let you drive it's MY beer that's getting spilt and we're finding at least a random elk that isn't where it should be ..... 😝😝😝
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Well that just gave me a thinking cramp ..... doesn't help that I believe all creatures have some form of being sentient. Fricken dolphins and thanking us for fish .... I do wonder how they pilot their spaceships.
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No shit, lol. I mean i could start putting you in @weinerdog basement ..... I mean then you would have everyone's missing left shoes for company 🤷♂️😁
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I love it .... please tell me it comes with a torture chamber I can borrow for when artists pull my heart strings or pull the wool over my eyes? I would say for evil cliffhangers, but then I would never get a break 😭😭😭
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What the .... you are definitely evil and cruel. Lovely story, but i'm still throwing you in the dog house. Making me tear up and all that jazz. My heart damn near shattered on the last line. 💔
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Well that's a fiddle smack. Using a wolfwere instead of a werewolf was simply adorable. I guess I can be nice and upgrade your doghouse. But i'm still mad you made my heart strings vibberate a smidge 😝
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Day After Day, Until Today
RainbowPhoenixWI commented on astone2292's story chapter in Day After Day, Until Today
Dang you, now I want pimento loaf.🤤 None of the deli's around here carry it anymore 😢 -
Marriage of a Lifetime!
RainbowPhoenixWI commented on astone2292's story chapter in Marriage of a Lifetime!
That's it, get in your dog house. How dare you make my coffee fly out of my nose twice. 😭😭 -
My money is on Josel killing Renn after Zdain has been fully stockholmed. I do admit I wonder what is up with the Redeemers. The poor party has jumped from the frying pan into the fire and accidently landed in the soup pot. At this point i'm expecting a fudged up family reunion for poor Josel that would satisfy a drama queen on complexity. Holy frick has this artist gone of the rails into wilds.
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That's it, doghouse, you're grounded 😭😭😭 wtf mate, holy shake up. I thought I knew where you were going. But no, ya had to double whammy on the stop. You're lucky I adore your art, or I would be so mad at you.
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Just remember, if I can predict where you're going you get the doghouse next to @weinerdog ..... if you get me gobsmacked I might be nice and put you behind @drsawzall ...... side track ....... does anyone know where i put the map of the dog pound so I know where i'm putting these people? ......
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Lmfao, oh my stars, I was literally just jamming to that song while folding sheets at work.
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I vote for transporting Renn to Alfred Hitchcock's "The Birds". That one is fun to imagine 😁😁😁
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I love how all the layers are coming together from all the sides of the story. Your weaving is intense as always. Almost tempted to throw you in the dog house for pulling heart strings, .... almost. Such a great job at building up towards a thunderstorm. Your ability to build up the tension and anticipation over the last couple of chapters has been amazing. No lighting or squall line yet, but the thunder is getting louder. You're still an evil artist. 😝😍
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I'm totally blaming you. New comment, and now I've been rereading the entire series for the last 4 hours. All your fault, how dare you bring joy and awesome art back into my life 😝😝😝
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Flattery will get you nowhere ... OK, it almost works. I'll be nice and put you next to @drsawzall instead of someone else, but you're still in the dog house 😝😝
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Fricken unexpected flim flam of a jibber jabber. I'm putting you in the dog house you evil, cruel, heart string plucking artist. Surprising the frick out of me and potentionally setting up a royal cluster for Zdain. You are most definitely grounded. 💜💜 All serious, very well done. I can honestly say you lay so many intense layers of intrigue. I've never reread a series so many times looking for bread crumbs I've missed somehow.
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Awww man, you found you're soapbox? I thought I had weinerdog bury it good this time 😭😭 That's one thing I will give the states, if you can find the means, you can escape the class you were born into. As to the story, I definitely agree, the Redeemers definitely give me the goose bumps. There are so many secrets flying around now .....
