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Thanks for the comment. The next chapter should be up in a week or so
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They are so saccharine, they give everyone a toothache.
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I personally love the way Sean can turn cocky TJ into a huge pile of mush with just a look.
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Thank you..there's a wild ride ahead for you...You're going to meet some interesting people who essentially become a family of sorts.
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There's no proof. If you think back to the first week of school, it might be the same move Rogers used to tackle Sean during practise....I wonder if they had been practising the move so it looked like Smith tried to block the lineman but pushed past him anyways??? Aww true....we can't forget about the phone call TJ has no clue is coming....and the possible meeting??? funny thing.....they both want to essentially apologize to each other but neither thinks the other would/should forgive them.
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HA! you think I'm going to be nice and make things easy for him?? Have you thought about all the storylines? We have Sean dealing with sports and a concussion, Josh's custody hearing, Kevin's dad's trial, John being a possible stalker, that should get us through the first semester....then we have to apply for colleges in the next few weeks, unless they're holding out for a sports scholarship, auditions for the musical, putting the musical on stage, and remember TJ"s birth mother is out in the world somewhere, he might want to meet her...oh what if Robert proposes to Lori (or gets her pregnant first) and that's hardly everything I have planned...
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This chapter did have the feels huh? I loved TJ's cocky way of handling their fight.
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Thank you! I enjoyed writing this one....I think they resolved their second fight well.
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TJ Chapter 9 The EMT’s stabilized Sean’s right arm as best they could in a splint, then strapped him to a backboard. I couldn’t stop the tears falling from my eyes. When the EMT’s started wheeling Sean towards the ambulance, I tried to follow them. Coach Wilson said they wouldn’t allow me to ride with him so not to even try. The whole thing took about fifteen minutes. I turned to run to my car and ran directly into Robert. I vaguely remember hearing him tell Coach Wilson to let Kevin
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Chase/Chasity is going to be a close friend to TJ, I think. Chapter 9 should be up in a couple of days, by the end of the week at the latest. I'm just waiting on my editor to get it back to me.
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okay @Aceinthehole fans......who do you thin k Ryder's tattoo artist is??? hehehe
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Chapter 103 The Painful Truth
JayT commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 103 The Painful Truth
the reason Alex propositioned Nathan was to try to break them up so he could get Robbie... he wanted Nathan to cheat on Robbie with him so he could break them up... not the best thought out plan but desperate times call for desperate measures... obviously though Nathan did considerate it and talked to Alex because if Alex did it the same way it was an anonymous letter... how did Nathan know who it was from... y'all need to not be so quick to judge Alex he was going through a very hard time -
Wolfie!!!!! I've missed you!!!! Chapter 9 is in process and should be up soon. Think of it this way: Sean would be the Alpha of the group, TJ the Alpha-mate. Kevin would be the Beta and Mark would be the Enforcer (along with Patrick).
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Chapter 102 A student for a Day
JayT commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 102 A student for a Day
Nathan better keep his grubby paws off Alex....eww no,...I think Nathan is going to end up cheating on Robbie if he hasn't already. -
John is about to show his true colors, and they aren't pretty rainbow colors. But I understand where you're coming from. I've been there too. But then I learned to love myself and discovered the greatest love of all. Shit now Whitney's stuck in my head. Dammit!
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Thanks for the comment. So far, most of the school with the exception of a few, have been accepting of TJ and Sean.. I think the GSA will act mainly as a safe harbor for everyone to be themselves without fear of retaliation.
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TJ needs to accept the fact that Robert is his father/sperm donor, but his dad died in a car wreck a few months ago. Robert will always be Robert to him, never Dad except that one time on the first day of school. Sean is about to face something he's not ready for.
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I try...I honestly do. Sometimes I just hit a wall and have horrible writer's block. John is a d-bag no doubt
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The thing about Sean is, he wants everyone to be safe, and try to get along. He doesn't like confrontation unless it's on the field or when absolutely needed. He normally wants to be the peacemaker. He didn't want John getting hurt by going to the party Smith and Rogers were throwing, and we all know he would've been jumped. Also, the John who Sean knew from the previous summer isn't the same John who came back and Sean's trying to reconcile the two. John's only at the table because Stacey and Jarrod are "talking" and John's her cousin and he doesn't know anyone else.
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John will gets what's coming to him. I promise
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Yeah, the ending for this chapter and the events following were major points on my original outline. Sean's in for some changes he might not be ready to face. Like TJ said, he's working on accepting Robert's role in his life. The only problem is, it's only been about two and half maybe three months since his parents died and doesn't seem like any of them have really grieved. Also I'm not sure if you've noticed, but the way TJ speaks in the story has gotten more and more cynical. He might need to learn you can't just laugh everything off as a big joke. We'll see. I'm well over half-way finished with Chapter 9 so i'll just have to finish it up, send to Kitt for edits and it will be here soonish.
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TJ Chapter 8 While Mark was putting himself away, John stood up. Mark looked at John sheepishly and said, “I didn’t mean to say that a while ago. I’m not gay. I’m sorry.” And he honestly did look sorry. John looked at him and I thought I might’ve seen a human emotion cross his face and even reach his eyes. I think Mark saw it too. That is until his resting bitch face returned and he said, “I just had your dick in my mouth and you shot down my throat. That’s pretty gay.” “I’m not
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I agree....but first Adrian and his cousin need to meet up since they're both out there in space somewhere.
