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  1. JayT

    Chapter 12

    TJ Chapter 12 Robert tried to avoid being in the same room as Sean and me for the rest of the day on Saturday. I’m not sure if it was because of what he walked in on or the fact I asked him why Lori had been at the house so early that morning, which he conveniently neglected to answer. After clearing it with our boyfriends and Jacob, Josh and I decided to let him have the house to himself and we all spent the night at Sean and Kevin’s. We spent the whole evening hanging out, just the fou
  2. JayT

    Chapter 4

    I personally love the irony of Josh being a cam model but saying he doesn't like being treated like an object. Add in the fact pretty much the only person who talked to him in a private session ends up being Gavin. The Hawaii trip could end up being FUBARed or it could end up being a wonderful experience for everyone. Good job, you must have gotten an awesome editor hehehe. I'm glad I have the opportunity to help you and you have the patience to deal with my new schedule.
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    Chapter 11

    Like I said before, he's still his loveable narcissistic self, only a bit more mature. He's learning actions have both consequences and/or rewards.
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    Chapter 11

    I thought the guys needed a grandmotherly type of person and this was the perfect opportunity to work her in the story. She'll be back. I loved writing her character.
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    Chapter 11

    It makes me happy when my boys are happy, so there shouldn't be too much drama in the future, well I can't promise that, but everyone will end up happy hopefully.
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    Chapter 11

    Thank you for the feedback...Chapter 12 is about halfway finished, so hopefully it will be up soon
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    Chapter 11

    If he hadn't surrounded himself with people like Sean and Josh and Chase and Chasity and Ethan I don't think he would be as self aware as he is. He's grown as much as he has because of his new family more than anything.
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    Chapter 11

    I think this chapter showed how much TJ really has grown in just a few months. He's still slightly narcissistic....okay maybe more than slightly....but he's loveable. Thanks for the comment!
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    Chapter 11

    TJ Chapter 11 Tuesday morning, I reluctantly walked into the school, half-expecting John to cause some big scene. Surprisingly, nothing happened. He walked into the classroom for first period just before the bell rang and left as soon as class was finished. Josh let me know John didn’t sit with the group at our table during lunch and he didn’t see where he had gone instead. I did notice him in the hallways speaking to some people I didn’t know, but since he wasn’t around me or anyone I l
  10. JayT

    Chapter 1

    so you're going to make like Douchermad again aren't you? (well, maybe not like, maybe feel sorry for at least) I was still peed at him at the end of the last book. Good start
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    Chapter 10

    At least TJ admitted to the fact he jumps to conclusions, well as close to an admission as he'll ever get. I think the only person John's going to cause a problem for will be himself.
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    Chapter 9

    TJ jumps to conclusions and want to run and hide whenever things don't go his way. The next chapter will show just how much he's grown.
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    Chapter 8

    There were some hard issues in this chapter. More is revealed in the next chapter.
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    Chapter 7

    I lived in Port Neches till I was 13, then moved up to the DFW area. I didn't service the jocks so much, just the guys my age in the neighborhood.
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    Chapter 5

    Because one line in the New Testament was mistranslated, you have parents believing gay people go to Hell. In 1 Corinthians 6:9, the word homosexual was used instead of male prostitute.
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    Chapter 4

    They are a great way to introduce anti-bullying techniques in schools.
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    Chapter 3

    Oh yeah...she likes showing her ugly side
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    Chapter 2

    Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks! foreshadowing...
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    Chapter 9

    I'm still wondering why Rory is going to Alpha and not his older brother. A couple of chapters ago you said Toph was going to be the next Beta because he's the current Beta's oldest son. Wouldn't that mean Rory's older brother would be the next Alpha?
  21. I did a review for this story for the Classic Author blog just over a year ago. I love this story and have read it three times I think.
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    Chapter 7

    I'm curious, why is Rory the next Alpha and not his older brother? Since Topher is the next Beta being the eldest son of the current Beta, I would think the Alpha's eldest son would be the next Alpha.
  23. Robbie seriously needs to ask Alex about the accusations Nathan made against him. There's three sides to every story. In this case: Nathan's side, Alex's side, and somewhere in the middle, the actual side.
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    Chapter 10

    where has that behavior led many people??? getting hurt or hurting themselves with drugs alcohol or other things
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    Chapter 10

    Sean didn't want there to be a problem so he ignored John and who says TJ didn't save the picture??? hehehe
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