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  1. JayT

    Starting Spot

    Oh I completely agree, but Riley will later have it in his head that Carter didn't say anything on top of Aaron's comment about not being worried about himself, he's worrying about Carter.
  2. JayT

    Starting Spot

    every insult Riley threw out was based on Trey's sense of entitlement Trey insulted Riley's character and his relationship with Carter
  3. JayT

    Starting Spot

    the coach even said Trey knew coming in the spot was always Riley's
  4. JayT

    Starting Spot

    Trey insulted Riley worse than any smack talking Riley said... he first questioned how Carter could put up with him then he flat out said Riley was below what Carter's standards should be... he said he's so below you... that was effing bullcrap (have to keep things TV-PG on here) and worse Carter didn't say anything to defend Riley which is bs
  5. JayT

    Chapter 21

    I knew Hans would pull some strings and get these two boneheads to pull their heads out of their asses long enough to hear something besides "He held a gun to my head.." "He ran away from me and sent me back the phone I bought him after i held a gun to his head, so maybe he had a reason to run away. now that I think about it, but I'll never admit it because I always have to win" (Wow I really made Klause into a whiny little bitch huh)
  6. JayT

    Resistance

    my Riley is so lost right now... he needs to call Eli for some help and guidance
  7. I've been on the Alex bandwagon for awhile now.....I think I got on board when he helped Robbie hide from Don
  8. JayT

    That Summer's Day

    Gorillaz.....hehehe....
  9. you know I realized earlier while reading that PALM SPRINGS could be a metaphor a handjob lol get it PALM makes SPRINGS hahahaha
  10. I wouldn't mind seeing Robbie with Alex....they would be good for each other....Alex would chill Robbie out when he gets all high-strung and Robbie would show Alex that someone can actually like him as a person and not want something from him
  11. JayT

    ATGB II

    I would think Christina would have better taste in guys....it would've been hilarious if there had been a "CJ!" moment while out with the megadouche
  12. @jkwsquirrel thank you for the critique. I hear what you are saying and agree. These are things I've been working on. I write better reports/research papers than creative pieces...and TJ is the second creative piece I've attempted. I've learned a lot about slowing down and allowing the story to evolve naturally. I'm glad you're enjoying the story...there's more to come
  13. JayT

    Chapter 20

    I don't remember what chapter I said it in, but I'll say it again, It's sad when two emotionally stunted people fall in love and neither of them knows what to do about it
  14. SInce granddad signed away custody rights, there really shouldn't be a case at all. He chose to turn his back on Rob, no judge is going to ignore that.
  15. JayT

    Pleasant Surprises

    He does seem to care about his kids a little and he's smart enough to leave his car at work when he's too drunk to drive. The thing that worries me is the gun. I have feeling it's going to come back up again sometime in the future and maybe not in a good way....I hope to hell that I'm wrong
  16. JayT

    Pleasant Surprises

    Damn he's a douche....that's all I have to say about that
  17. JayT

    A Moonlit Romp

    I freaking loved how you gave Horus' hair the traits of ruffled feathers.
  18. I'm wondering if it has something to do with the fact he postdates chapters
  19. Let me just say, I feel your pain Hunter. I'm a native Texan and in the next month or so I'm going to be moving to deep woods East Texas and living in a small town called Rusk. I'm originally from southeast Texas and my natural accent (which I dropped when I moved to the Dallas area almost 30 years ago) always comes back when I visit either east Texas or southeast Texas. anyone north of Dallas pretty much has an accent to me.
  20. JayT

    The Last Screw

    FINALLY!!!!!! she stood up for her son and the principal grew a pair and stood up to everyone like he should have done in the beginning....That History teacher is a douchebag and a half....Billy needs to take him down a peg or ten
  21. JayT

    ATGB I

    Oh the boys are back!!! I miss my Harley though....I wanna know how he's doing in school and if he's fallen in love with something with two legs instead of two wheels
  22. JayT

    Getting Settled

    I think Noah is okay with the IDEA of BIlly and Nick...in actuality, jealousy might rear its ugly head...Nick's response the shower was exactly what thought it would be. I felt sorry for him...I hope Billy doesn't start to treat Nick differently when he finds out he's a foster kid, and Nick needs to honest with Billy about that for any hope in the future. If he starts out on a lie, he'll have to keep building on it and things could spiral out of control.
  23. JayT

    Chapter 19

    if only this were some romance story, but I think Hans is going to swoop in and kick both Jake's and Klause's asses
  24. JayT

    Chapter 19

    Jake's going to into a depression missing Klause, Diaz is going to figure everything out and convince Jake to go back to Klause because he wants what's best for his brother....or something like that
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