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  1. JayT

    Chapter 11

    It makes me happy when my boys are happy, so there shouldn't be too much drama in the future, well I can't promise that, but everyone will end up happy hopefully.
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    Chapter 11

    Thank you for the feedback...Chapter 12 is about halfway finished, so hopefully it will be up soon
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    Chapter 11

    If he hadn't surrounded himself with people like Sean and Josh and Chase and Chasity and Ethan I don't think he would be as self aware as he is. He's grown as much as he has because of his new family more than anything.
  4. JayT

    Chapter 11

    I think this chapter showed how much TJ really has grown in just a few months. He's still slightly narcissistic....okay maybe more than slightly....but he's loveable. Thanks for the comment!
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    Chapter 11

    TJ Chapter 11 Tuesday morning, I reluctantly walked into the school, half-expecting John to cause some big scene. Surprisingly, nothing happened. He walked into the classroom for first period just before the bell rang and left as soon as class was finished. Josh let me know John didn’t sit with the group at our table during lunch and he didn’t see where he had gone instead. I did notice him in the hallways speaking to some people I didn’t know, but since he wasn’t around me or anyone I l
  6. JayT

    Chapter 1

    so you're going to make like Douchermad again aren't you? (well, maybe not like, maybe feel sorry for at least) I was still peed at him at the end of the last book. Good start
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    Chapter 10

    At least TJ admitted to the fact he jumps to conclusions, well as close to an admission as he'll ever get. I think the only person John's going to cause a problem for will be himself.
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    Chapter 9

    TJ jumps to conclusions and want to run and hide whenever things don't go his way. The next chapter will show just how much he's grown.
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    Chapter 8

    There were some hard issues in this chapter. More is revealed in the next chapter.
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    Chapter 7

    I lived in Port Neches till I was 13, then moved up to the DFW area. I didn't service the jocks so much, just the guys my age in the neighborhood.
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    Chapter 5

    Because one line in the New Testament was mistranslated, you have parents believing gay people go to Hell. In 1 Corinthians 6:9, the word homosexual was used instead of male prostitute.
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    Chapter 4

    They are a great way to introduce anti-bullying techniques in schools.
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    Chapter 3

    Oh yeah...she likes showing her ugly side
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    Chapter 2

    Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks! foreshadowing...
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    Chapter 9

    I'm still wondering why Rory is going to Alpha and not his older brother. A couple of chapters ago you said Toph was going to be the next Beta because he's the current Beta's oldest son. Wouldn't that mean Rory's older brother would be the next Alpha?
  17. I did a review for this story for the Classic Author blog just over a year ago. I love this story and have read it three times I think.
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    Chapter 7

    I'm curious, why is Rory the next Alpha and not his older brother? Since Topher is the next Beta being the eldest son of the current Beta, I would think the Alpha's eldest son would be the next Alpha.
  19. Robbie seriously needs to ask Alex about the accusations Nathan made against him. There's three sides to every story. In this case: Nathan's side, Alex's side, and somewhere in the middle, the actual side.
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    Chapter 10

    where has that behavior led many people??? getting hurt or hurting themselves with drugs alcohol or other things
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    Chapter 10

    Sean didn't want there to be a problem so he ignored John and who says TJ didn't save the picture??? hehehe
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    Chapter 10

    she is nothing but a greedy bitch
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    Chapter 10

    yes Mel was a gold digger.... John might not take this rejection well... glad you enjoyed it
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    Chapter 10

    the Lupe Rodriguez thing really happened with me as Lupe lol
  25. JayT

    Chapter 10

    seriously... that wasn't even really Rory, it was a clone of the real thing made from Plastiq or something thank you for comment it made me smile
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