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  1. northie

    Chapter 1: Caught

    See - you've got me reading Westerns again. ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ˜„ But really, it's the age-old truth that families can fuck you up, projecting their issues onto someone else and so disrupting that individual's life for a long, long time. I love that your beast is figurative. It's real alright, just not in a way that you can touch it. Can love conquer all? It's comforting to think so.
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    Chapter 1

    Hmmm... Somewhere they can plot the overthrow of everything human? ๐Ÿช๐Ÿช
  3. Excellent. And really spot-on with sharp, oh-so-real dialogue. I love writing with anthropomorphic characters - there's so much scope for playing around. This was so fun.
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    Chapter 1

    Yep - go, camels! ๐Ÿช Thanks, Thirdly, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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    Chapter 1

    ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Sometimes the shortest comments are the best. Glad it got to you...
  6. The huge camel strode across miles of bleak, reddish, dusty Martian landscape, its multi-jointed legs and splayed feet making light work of the long journey from Mariner Valley to some benighted research outpost on Terra Arabia. Of course, it wasn't actually a living, breathing camel. Bent Dodgson, safe, comfortable, and evidently bored out his mind, stretched in the utilitarian pressurised cabin secured to the back of the leadโ€ฆanimal. There he went again. It was kinda forgivable. The manu
  7. Bent Dodgson loves his camels. He also loves his fairy wings. On his latest trip across Mars, these two things seemingly collide with deadly consequences.
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    Deeper Dive

    I love horror and/or suspense with this kind of narrative distance. You learn at the pace of the narrator with plenty of gaps left for you to fill with your own fevered imagination. ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ˜„ Great stuff.
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    Chapter 1

    Being very much a dog person, you should be unsurprised to learn I enjoyed your story. ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿ˜„ Well done.
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    Lovesquatch

    This was great. A joy to read. Humour, cheffing, the great outdoors, and how to make the best mushroom broth ever. And your own personal Sasquatch.
  11. Anthos are absolutely the time for experiments. ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿ˜„ I loved this. A seemingly quite simple, quiet slice of life piece. Yet there's plenty to enjoy, admire, with subtle, hidden depths that reveal themselves after thought or a repeat read or two.
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    Looking Ahead

    Poetry, Secret Author, Anthology, Prompt would be my choices. It's a juggling act between keeping people engaged and not overcommitting authors (and readers).
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    One More Week!

    Yep, well, still hoping my space camels on Mars'll make it in time...
  14. Your verse about mosquitoes got to me the most. ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿ˜„ Their whining and crooning has actually been quite absent this summer as it's been so dry. Something to celebrate amidst the drought.
  15. My original (only vaguely relevant) story has been put to one side and will be replaced ๐Ÿคž๐Ÿคž by a much shorter effort. We shall see...
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    Chapter 1

    My editor was another one who assumed the backdrop was WW2. I deliberately tried to avoid anything that would place it in any one particular time period. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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    Chapter 1

    Yes, it is, but it can be so, so difficult. The story's complete as it is. Sorry...
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    Chapter 1

    I loved reading your comments - they made me grin.
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you! Your enthusiasm makes me smile. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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    Chapter 1

    Yep... ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿ˜ฌ
  22. northie

    Chapter 1

    I'm very pleased this short story made such an impression on you. Thank you!
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks for reading and commenting. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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    Chapter 1

    I'm glad you enjoyed the story but it's finished. Sorry...
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks, Gary. Something rather different from me as befits the situation. ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿ˜„ I expanded on a prompt response from ages ago. It was one of those that hadn't felt finished.
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