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  1. rewski84

    Wings

    "....The pleasant woman returned, three different blades in her hands. "Okay, Mr. Wells. Let's figure out what is going to work for you." Orson took a breath and smiled at her. "Okay."...." I've read this story twice now and am on my third go round when I noticed the tidbit above. I don't want to give anything away for people just starting to read your stories, so I'll be as general as possible -- Was this a typo, or a hint for these two later on down the road? Thank you for your stories!
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    Chapter 28

    Essell's attitude is starting to grate on me. Entitled much? For a scientist, he sure has many preconceived notions about a race that he, as a human, had no previous knowledge of. I get that the situation he's in is somewhat precarious, and given the fact that he's a, 'first-contact', I just think he'd be a little bit more open minded and not be so selfish. He wants to find out more about "four arms" but in his mind his goal is still to report his findings to whatever federation he owes allegiance to. I hope he sees the light soon. Great chapter, as usual. πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘
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    Bound

    Thanks for the new story. As you mentioned, stories have to be told -- even the darker ones. Can't wait to see where you'll take us next. πŸ‘ Happy New Year! 🍾πŸ₯‚πŸ₯³
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    Chapter 16

    What a fabulous way to start my Christmas morning. Thank you for the chapter update -- can't wait to hear about the interview, and hoping Muriel gets brought down a peg or two. Happy Holidays! πŸŽ…πŸŽ„β˜ƒοΈπŸŽπŸ₯³
  5. Hi Laura -- Thank you for this wonderful story! There is, however, one thing that keeps nagging at me. It's Anita. A backstory on her would be nice, since it's not clear what her m.o. was. Was it revenge?
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    Weird Day

    Great start, Laura. You definitely have my interest all perked up for your latest not-a-comedy mystery. hehe... πŸ˜‚
  7. Thank you, Wayne. This isn't so much a review as it is to convey my gratitude for your story. Yes, this one was particularly difficult to finish and was definitely an emotional roller coaster. I woke up around 2:30 this morning in tears, having dreamt of Tad's final moments. Me having been in Markus' shoes and you having mentioned that it only takes one person to make a difference... well, thank you for being that person not only to me, but to many others, as well. Thanks again.
  8. Thank you for a beautiful journey, Wayne. I'm just sorry it had to end here (for now...). Looking forward to seeing everyone make their appearances in your future stories. Lastly, please give Harlan an HEA. I think he deserves one at this point. Thanks again. Drew
  9. Happy Birthday!

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      rewski84

      Thank you! ❀

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    Chapter 1

    Just wondering about about Nico's last name. I thought he wanted it to be Kellan. Chandler is good too, so no big deal. Again, just wondering. Anyhoo -- am loving this series. Thank you!
  11. Great chapter, Cole. Overall, I think this story is shaping out to be your best yet. I also have to tell you that I'm currently tearing my hair out trying to glean as many clues as I'm able from the previous chapters. Unfortunately, I'm like other previous comments -- somewhat clueless. Great job!
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    Chapter 9

    Excellent chapter, as usual. Just waiting for the other shoe to drop...
  13. Thank you for a great story! I just hope this isn't the end, because I'm pretty sure Richard has at least a couple more attempts in him. Rejected bitches be like that sometimes. πŸ˜‰ And of course, a follow-up on Jared is a must. Thanks again!
  14. This story (and sequel) definitely sets the standard to base all stories by, regardless of genre. The storyline is compelling and beautifully written. The characters don't disappoint: they captivate you and take you along for a ride through all that they experience. You'll want to be Shay. You'll want to experience Mira. And you'll definitely WANT a certain Russian...
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    Chapter One

    Your storyline is way more than interesting enough that I suspect more readers will eventually pick up on this tale of yours. However, there are too many grammatical errors and misspellings sprinkled throughout that might also turn away a good number of others. It can get pretty frustrating rereading certain lines and passages just to try to comprehend what you're trying to convey. That being said, please continue the story, and I hope you find success in getting an editor or two to help you all the way to the end. Thank you for sharing.
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