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  1. rewski84

    Siblings

    Thank you so much for the backfill. Although I suspected (and therefore, assumed) as much, your timeline explanations for all the divergent paths for each character and how they're truly connected really solidifies the greater picture. For me, that is both the current picture and all the possibilities your story can take as it unfolds moving forward. Thank you! ❀
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    Jus Sanguinis

    This is a fantastic short story. I am wishing it were longer, though. The confrontation between Rowan's father and Pieter just seemed a bit too brief for an "epic" battle between the forces of good and evil. Might there be a continuation of some sort in the future? Again, well done. 😊
  3. rewski84

    Siblings

    Thank you for the update. I must say, though, that whether events happen -- by coincidence or by "well-arranged temporal conditions" (as you mentioned above) -- really makes no difference considering that it all boils down to your imaginative ingenuity and writing style. Truth. I'm surprised your stories aren't published. If you have published books somewhere, please provide a link. On a different subject: After having reread the first two books, I'm saddened that Shay (and Mira, to an extent) will never experience physically growing into manhood. Being infinitely and eternally stuck in a 14-yr old body has a price. I'm just glad that he and Mira have each other forever. You know how some people pick a character out of stories and begin a hero-worship relationship with them? Yeah, can't do that to a kid character even though he's biologically over 200 years old. I'll stick to Konstantin. πŸ˜‰ (Sigh). Leave it to me to always fall for the straight guy... Anyhow, thank you again for bringing us back to Shay's and Mira's world.
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    Chapter 43

    This whole story is all about him, so there is that. However, that's not the point. He just comes across as someone who is self centered and selfish. Manic depressive also comes to mind. He has a soulmate, and they've bonded. He often treats Garjah as someone he desperately needs and then in a blink of an eye, he does a 180 and treats him like shit. As I mentioned before, a little growing up would be helpful -- for all concerned.
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    Chapter 43

    Essell is a self centered, it's-all-about-me, whiney bitch. I thought that when he and Garjah officially mated, he'd have a hallelujah moment (sigh). Please, please, make him grow up a little...
  6. rewski84

    Wings

    "....The pleasant woman returned, three different blades in her hands. "Okay, Mr. Wells. Let's figure out what is going to work for you." Orson took a breath and smiled at her. "Okay."...." I've read this story twice now and am on my third go round when I noticed the tidbit above. I don't want to give anything away for people just starting to read your stories, so I'll be as general as possible -- Was this a typo, or a hint for these two later on down the road? Thank you for your stories!
  7. rewski84

    Chapter 28

    Essell's attitude is starting to grate on me. Entitled much? For a scientist, he sure has many preconceived notions about a race that he, as a human, had no previous knowledge of. I get that the situation he's in is somewhat precarious, and given the fact that he's a, 'first-contact', I just think he'd be a little bit more open minded and not be so selfish. He wants to find out more about "four arms" but in his mind his goal is still to report his findings to whatever federation he owes allegiance to. I hope he sees the light soon. Great chapter, as usual. πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘
  8. rewski84

    Bound

    Thanks for the new story. As you mentioned, stories have to be told -- even the darker ones. Can't wait to see where you'll take us next. πŸ‘ Happy New Year! 🍾πŸ₯‚πŸ₯³
  9. rewski84

    Chapter 16

    What a fabulous way to start my Christmas morning. Thank you for the chapter update -- can't wait to hear about the interview, and hoping Muriel gets brought down a peg or two. Happy Holidays! πŸŽ…πŸŽ„β˜ƒοΈπŸŽπŸ₯³
  10. Hi Laura -- Thank you for this wonderful story! There is, however, one thing that keeps nagging at me. It's Anita. A backstory on her would be nice, since it's not clear what her m.o. was. Was it revenge?
  11. rewski84

    Weird Day

    Great start, Laura. You definitely have my interest all perked up for your latest not-a-comedy mystery. hehe... πŸ˜‚
  12. Thank you, Wayne. This isn't so much a review as it is to convey my gratitude for your story. Yes, this one was particularly difficult to finish and was definitely an emotional roller coaster. I woke up around 2:30 this morning in tears, having dreamt of Tad's final moments. Me having been in Markus' shoes and you having mentioned that it only takes one person to make a difference... well, thank you for being that person not only to me, but to many others, as well. Thanks again.
  13. Thank you for a beautiful journey, Wayne. I'm just sorry it had to end here (for now...). Looking forward to seeing everyone make their appearances in your future stories. Lastly, please give Harlan an HEA. I think he deserves one at this point. Thanks again. Drew
  14. Happy Birthday!

    1. rewski84

      rewski84

      Thank you! ❀

  15. rewski84

    Chapter 1

    Just wondering about about Nico's last name. I thought he wanted it to be Kellan. Chandler is good too, so no big deal. Again, just wondering. Anyhoo -- am loving this series. Thank you!
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