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Jack and Vince are Theo's current pack, so I'm not surprised that both would be a reminder of that past. I do think Theodore is finally understanding that the way forward can't happen without his two companions by his side. I'm also curious as to where this hunger they're experiencing is actually coming from. It can't be just from Jack's observation of further integrating into Theo's pack, can it? That said, I'm definitely looking forward to more clues. Great chapter!

I'm not writing Brad off per se, since he is -- as you put it -- integral. However, he and Bella have chosen each other (for better or worse), and in the end, we all must move on. I just hope Lyn is able to remove those blinders he's got on, get over his feelings of betrayal, and find a way to salvage what he and Alexander seemed headed towards. But, the mind is very powerful -- and ruthless -- with its use of self doubt. Who knows. Still hoping for that HEA, though. 🤞🤞🤞

Agreed. I do hope that there might be a chance for Lyn and Alexander to talk at least once more though, and hopefully find an HEA somewhere in the midst of this mess.

Oh Mistress Laura, will you please, PLEASE remove that stick of dynamite that you lodged up in Pembroke's ass? I want to get to the trifecta mating already! 😂

Eggplant is also Jed's favorite? And that's where Perry gets it from? Ooh, I think I just started having "daddy" issues. 😁

I do believe it's time for the dynamic duo of Rybalt and Slicky to make their appearance together. Rawr! 🦸😻

Not sure why, but as soon as I read the part about Beckett's vision of Valrinda flying above him in chains, I automatically thought it was a plan to get into the city. Weird.

LOVE IT! ❤️ Can't wait to see where this story goes. I'm definitely looking forward to more. Thank you!

Thank you for this wonderful update. I was hoping "Amal" would eventually see the light (and therefore, live) but with what basically amounts to a kill on sight order, that doesn't seem to be in the cards for him. I'm not much into physics, but I find "There is no distance" profound. Here's my take: In the vast arena that is the universe, space is abundant. Physically, you see nothing but distance. In the realm of subatomic particles, there is still a space between particles (or layers), no matter how small. I remember not so long ago when electrons, photons, and neutrons were the smallest particles around. Then came quarks. Then bosons. Then -- well, there's still that space between them, right? To answer your question regarding the whereabouts of Shay and the gang: is it far fetched to wonder if they teleported to a space between a layer? Is this even probable based on where your thought process is taking us? It's the only action I could think of where the Herald wouldn't be able to track and follow. And since anything is possible with Shay...

Although this is the end, "Gimme too much!!!" is what a certain 6-year old niece in my family says when she wants more of something. In this case, I'm stealing that phrase to let you know that yes -- more, please! ❤ This is a beautiful, well-written story. Thank you!

Cinnamon and cedar? Definitely something earthy or woodsy.

Wow -- I'm not much for commenting, but I do have to say this first chapter is... Beautiful. Sobering. Touching. Familiar. The last one in a somewhat indirect but personal way. Thank you. Looking forward to more.

Dearest Stellar -- First, let me apologize for not commenting as much as I should have, given how many times I've read and reread your stories. I realize recently how important comments and reactions are from your readers, and yet I've failed you by infrequently commenting, or just not commenting at all. I for one do not feel in any way entitled to demand your next chapter. I'm selfish in that I lose myself in the worlds you create -- as escape from a life so mundane and boringly common -- and yet I can't even put my own two cents' worth to validate what you so freely provide. I am sorry. Secondly, I'll wait for however long it takes for the next chapter of Lucid Truth and whatever else you have brewing on the back burners. And if Spirit Of Fire left many unsatisfied with the ending, it is only because we want more. At least I do. If I haven't said this before, then I'll happily say it here: You're one of the best unpublished writers I've come across on this site. That right there, is lucid truth. Have a wonderful evening! 😊

Absolutely!!! Pwetty pweeze?

Excellent start. This is a genre I also typically do not normally delve into unless magic or the supernatural is involved. But, I'm already looking forward to the next chapter. 😊

I'm beginning to wonder if the body might possibly be Trevor? The only reports of his whereabouts have been through Sylvia and Brenda via Jenny. Also, if Jenny's involvement goes back to the time when Trevor was still in the picture then he would've have known something or would have also been involved somehow. I can't picture him just being able to walk away from this mess just because he found someone to settle down with and psycho-bitch Jenny being okay with that. If the others involved were coerced or blackmailed into silence, well then occam's razor, perhaps? Just a thought. Can't wait for Monday!

Thank you for a most excellent chapter! 🌞 I still think Jonathan is a bit TOO jaded, almost bordering on being melodramatic. Not sure why he still insists on their current situation as nothing more than a hookup. I think Maddox has been more than up front with his feelings. BUT THEN AGAIN, the longer you have Jonathan resisting and dragging things out the longer this story will be, and we'll be no closer to the end. And that's a good thing in my book. 😁

Poetic justice meeting six degrees of separation, and wrapped tightly in an emotional roller coaster. And beautifully written, to boot. I'm selfishly wishing it were just a little longer, not wanting a good read to end. Very selfish, indeed. Also, I'm sorry/not sorry in advance for being unforgiving, but I'm still angry at Celia, by the way... 😡🙄 Thank you! ❤

I just started reading this story -- but holy cow -- What. A. Bitch. Hate is a strong word, but the only other feeling I have for Celia is a fury reserved for a select few. Bitter, hateful, spiteful, delusional -- the list goes on. 🤬 I'm really looking forward to the part of this story when karma pays her a visit.

A brand new, EXCELLENT chapter to start my day? Yes, please! What a great way to start my morning. Thank you! 🌞

I hope this makes sense, but does the timeline question also cover the possibility that the crate Ben and Zev saw being carried into the mine might actually be Elijah inside it? I know the story timeline went back a little when it switched from Wayne, Sandy, and Elijah, to Ben and Zev. Just wondering if that was enough time for the kidnapping to occur, and that "slight buzzing noise" Ben got when the crate was brought in, have something to do with his connection to Elijah, or from a nearby security camera? If I were knee deep in illicit activities, I'd certainly have camera surveillance beyond my borders, at least a couple miles out. Their wolf scents (Ben and Zev), couple with snow tracks and the noise from the snowmobile would certainly be enough to garner or activate some kind of alarm around the perimeter of the mine. I'm loving this story -- can't wait for the next chapter! ❤

I pray they find Nyx soon -- very soon! I've no doubt that Shay will get closer to a sense of "completeness" of wanting a family with Nyx in the picture. 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽

I've always been into nonhuman/supernatural stories, and this one is very promising. I especially like your added spin on werewolf hierarchy (kappa and lambda). Usually, all protectors, enforcers and warriors of any type fall under the rank of beta, so kudos for the distinction. Looking forward to reading more. 🌞

Thank you so much for the backfill. Although I suspected (and therefore, assumed) as much, your timeline explanations for all the divergent paths for each character and how they're truly connected really solidifies the greater picture. For me, that is both the current picture and all the possibilities your story can take as it unfolds moving forward. Thank you! ❤

This is a fantastic short story. I am wishing it were longer, though. The confrontation between Rowan's father and Pieter just seemed a bit too brief for an "epic" battle between the forces of good and evil. Might there be a continuation of some sort in the future? Again, well done. 😊