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Nisa is tiresome and she needs to open her eyes. If she isn't careful she is going to get herself hurt, or at the very least shamed. Kastan and Jihan are both trying to be gentle in letting her know her attentions aren't wanted or needed. I'm glad Temu seems to be gaining a great deal of respect for Jihan, and what he is trying to do. I think it probably helped when Jihan went to the farms and was actively trying to help them save the crops from flooding, rather than sitting back giving orders, and telling everyone else what to do. By the end of the chapter, he is actively trying to help, when he asks permission to take tools from the manor to the farms. Kastan acknowledged, at the first of the chapter, that neither he nor his men, are any good at business management and logistics.

I continued to get brief flashes of information from my captive demon, her resistance made it difficult for me to extract a coherent picture. As her resistance slowly gave way, I was able to get more and more information, and what I discovered were not only sickening and disturbing, but alarming as well. I wonder what Chris discovered?

I have wondered myself, if Havar could be working with the demons, to create tension to use as leverage, to get Patri to cast the Astra Spell, or have Chris cast the spell. Either way, Havar is a snake to be watched closely.

I to have read the entire story multiple times, as well as certain chapters even more. I read the arrival in the realm multiple times, and more specifically Patri's private talk with Victor. The chapter with the ascension I read probably five or six times in its entirety, and the actual ascension even more. I loved it when he invoked the different houses. I love this story, there are a lot of very powerful scenes in it. I also like how there are certain threads that go throughout the entire story. In my opinion, that's one of the things that makes a good story into a great story. Because the author is from another country, and American English isn't his native language, I sometimes trip over the grammar. Sometimes it takes me a few minutes to figure out what he is meaning, but even with that, this is one of my favorite stories.

It seems he is getting busy quickly to deal with the demon threat, and seems to be taking his new position seriously! That's a good thing!

Awesomeness!!! I look forward to seeing what Chris can do with his new position. He seems to be getting a good start.

His sessions with the elves gets more difficult each time, yet nobody has made him use his spell casting abilities before Ethnar. I think he needs to have more training sessions with his great grandfather. I also think Ethnar needs to win a few more times, to help drive home the lesson that he is not invincible.

Agreed!!! The session with Ethnar helped, or maybe a better word would be forced, Chris to grow! He needed that, nobody else was really challenging him. The simple fact that Ethnar beat him, proved to Chris that he is not invincible, which is a feeling that not really being challenged seemed to be instilling in him, he needed to have his eyes opened to that as well.

Patri tweaks Victor again. That was funny.

AWESOME!!! That's the only word I know to describe it!

I love Patri!!! He just scared the stuff out of Victor, and then laughed and told "Just kidding!" I don't think he was kidding at all!

I have been reading this story. I have laughed, and cried as the story has developed. Its a great story!