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Chapter 1 - The incident
mfa607 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The incident
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Excellent chapter! Thank you.
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Love this! Thank you for sharing!
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Chapter 1: The Paolas seem happy. What could go wrong?
mfa607 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Paolas seem happy. What could go wrong?
What a great start to part 2 of this story! Hope you’re feeling better and that we don’t have to wait too long for more, thank you! -
So, I’m a complete Zach fan (yes a minority I think) so I give him props for his apology. Yes he’s a douche sometimes. Amazing chapter, thank you!
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Claire was a complete surprise, but entitled management are rarely successful, especially a second time around Thanks for the chapter!
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Great chapter! He made it! Like others have said, waiting for the shoe to drop. Thank you!
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Great chapter! Love Greece.
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Completely tragic...hopefully Ben survives and he and David reunite and wreak havoc on his 'family'. Jim and Elena deserve a bitter end...Jerome is completely oblivious to Elena's machinations...she's pure evil. Great chapter and end to what's part 1 (i hope!). Here's to hoping we don't have to wait too long for the next part of this story. Thank you!
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Cindy….🤦♂️ Great chapter and thank you!
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What a great wrap! So glad you found the way to finish this amazing tale. I can’t wait for the epilogue. I will genuinely miss these characters. Thank you!
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LOVE IT! I have visions of Jim, Claudia and Elena burning....Jerome needs to suffer too! Great chapter - other than Ben having cancer..
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That was perfect! Thank you!
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Great chapter! Thank you!
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AWESOME! Thank you!
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Thank you! First a birthday day blowie and then a family blowup! Great chapter. I’m glad Ash is beginning to address some of his demons.
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Awesome chapter ! Have to say though, I’m a Mike fan…..
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May or may not have tried mushrooms...hopscotch may have been a lot of fun...I also can say I hypothetically never retched....LOL! Great chapter!! Will! Give 'em hell! Travis' parent is .... I can't even. Thank you!
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Great chapter! I cannot wait until Ben comes back stronger....Elena and now Jim are like two of a kind..the apple certainly hasn't fallen far from the tree. So disappointed in Jerome....he's been there in some ways supporting the abuse of Ben by Elena and now he shuns him...so sad. I can't wait for more! Thank you!
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If you search by author there are two other stories in the series.
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Great chapter! I'm glad Carl is feeling more comfortable. A Spartan here...thanks for working Michigan State in!
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Amazing! We know know a bit more of why Ash can be so self deprecating and Leslie’s downward spiral. Fortunately, Ashley is a strong little girl, wiser than her age. Thank you!
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Chapter 5: They finally meet. What's the way forward?
mfa607 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: They finally meet. What's the way forward?
I am! I still think Elena needs to meet up with a moving truck...would be too quick of an ending for her...it needs to be painful. LOL! -
Chapter 5: They finally meet. What's the way forward?
mfa607 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: They finally meet. What's the way forward?
I can definitely see some drama coming…..can’t wait! Great chapter, thank you! -
The Interrogation of Michael Anthony Loggerman, Cadet
mfa607 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Interrogation of Michael Anthony Loggerman, Cadet
Oh boy…😢 Cant wait to see what comes next! Thank you!
