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  1. scrubber6620

    Chapter 17

    OK kbois I am beginning to value you more, Your fan pain inducing shock from killing one of the two love birds was not gratuitous or mean hearted. Losing Kage takes time to process I admire your reasoning when explained and reactions to your fans. It is clear and your promptly addressed the concerns of your fans. You did not take things personally even when we pushed back and tried to find a HEA solution to the reunited pair in the future. One author I like on Nifty stopped writing for years after the way he let bad guys torment one of his two main characters in a sexual awakening story. He had 10 more chapters to add that had all the bad guys ruined publicly and the love birds happy and reunited. The outcry was so bad he stopped publishing any more stories till recently. And then you said you were a band mom. I like them and appreciate their support. I enjoyed playing clarinet through high school and college in marching bands, I love looking up bands on YouTube. The Bands of the Royal Marines are my fav.
  2. scrubber6620

    Chapter 17

    Anton_Cloche I am very taken by the hope you bring to this story. Thank you "As Kage began his 'death spiral' as it where, he was able to cast off the (evil) darkness as an assassin, find his inner goodness, and as he 'ascended' he pierced Eli's heart to leave a 'good' piece of him in Eli, and take a small sliver of Eli's good 'shifter' with him... ... But is that small sliver of Eli's 'shifter' enough to save Kage and let him recreate himself? Not necessarily as a 'shadow', but as a different one, with the same body but for good? Who knows "
  3. scrubber6620

    Chapter 42

    Mark in the last chapter you wrote----Darius was called by JJ for advice. Why not Will? Darius chuckled. “He’s all into Susannah and called in the heterosexual cavalry for some advice.” That made all of us laugh. “What does he need advice about?” Stef asked. “They are both such dorks,” Darius said, shaking his head at them. “They have no game at all. JJ is trying to figure out how to get into her pants but has no clue how to do it. I mean, she’s living there with him. How hard is it to close that deal? I agree with centexhairysub, I think Darius is the person that Will is going to call. Plus, he fits Mark's hint about who Will is going to call--"someone in the younger generation who is a relationship sage."
  4. scrubber6620

    Chapter 17

    Plus , I am glad you are not killing Elijah off by the end. Then you said-- "Not by the end of this story....." Wow, you know how to torment. But. Elijah can still lead a long life and die in his old age in your final part of your trilogy. I am pushing for a happy ending again.
  5. scrubber6620

    Chapter 17

    Run away to Montana with Tyler, Elijah Trevor is coming after you--
  6. scrubber6620

    Chapter 17

    This statement by you puts this all in perspective for me. I see your focus. + "Absolutely true. I went into this knowing it was Elijah's story. Yes, it's a continuation of Spirit Wolves, but it's not a continuation of the Sentinel's story. I've never written a story so quickly as this one. It was just there. " Plus , I am glad you are not killing Elijah off by the end.
  7. scrubber6620

    Chapter 42

    I was taken by the highs and lows in this chapter. Plus, they came non-stop and fast. This is not a haiku--- Great sex then rejection Chatting and gossiping about OK sexual partners, Then a shocking realization of who fucked who Recovery sought Friends adored. Friends helped and harmed Guilt building after what happened sunk in. Lessons learned ? If Will gets enough helpful advice to assuage his guilt and pain , he will be ready for a good time at the upcoming frat party. After Cam's treachery and acting behind Jeff's back, I think Will should be reluctant to go down that path again with another guy in a relationship if he meets Zach.
  8. scrubber6620

    Chapter 17

    The assassin hired to kill deGaulle in the Day of the Jackal set a very high price. He said he would be targeted for death after he killed deGaulle and would have to hide away and not be able to kill any other individuals. I hope Trevor got a really big payout and is in hiding. Huntington will not be able to protect him from retribution. I hope his death is very painful.
  9. scrubber6620

    Chapter 17

    "Elijah got ready for bed and after pulling the covers over him he opened the screen on Kage’s phone. Without knowing why, other than a gut feeling compelling him, he hit the contact for ‘B’, tapped the message sign and typed out Kage is dead, then hit send before he could change his mind. He stared at the screen until it timed out and went dark." What is B going to do? I bet he will contact Elijah and find out Kage just said Trevor. B will also be looking to get his revenge for Kage's death
  10. scrubber6620

    Chapter 17

    How about some Shifter mage from the Montana hierarchy finding a way to bring Kage's double or a similar supernatural being back from the part in Elijah's heart ? They can live together later without B being any wiser and with the new version of Kage's essence not under B's control
  11. scrubber6620

    Chapter 17

    Damn--since he is truly dead--get revenge Elijah Take the laptop from the Chevy,. Go with Tyler to Montana and hand over it to the shifters. Let them take out Huntington and Trevor and find the missing pups
  12. scrubber6620

    Chapter 17

    Casablanca was filmed with two endings The first one was so hated by the audience the producer had to change it. The one we see today where the lady leaves Rick and goes with the Nazi fighter hero is beloved--Rick says the famous line--"We will always have Paris." He is a tragic hero. I want a new ending of Kage--He is not dead. B can resurrect him. He is so powerful.
  13. scrubber6620

    Chapter 42

    Mark--You surprised me again. Will is used by a shallow, uncaring, me-focused, Hollywood stud. Will wanted and expected more from his sexual partner. Will was educated in the sordid ways of sexual lives in Hollywood. He was a single use sexual partner. Great sex was not a basis for more and at least a night and morning of passion So, great sex and being a awesome bottom was not enough. Cam said thank you and essentially told Will he was done and had work to do. Damn--I did not expect this level of shallowness. What a self absorbed prick! Sounds like a stereotypical high profile Hollywood leader who is all about himself and then moves on. He only reacts differently later when his deal is threatened. Will left Cam's home in a huff and Cam did not care how Will was going to get from his place. They were no longer an item. They met later surfing--surprising Cam who still doesn't know who Will is. They exchanged numbers but Cam did not check out who Will was and did not read his full name. If he had, then the name Schulter would have rung a bell. Cam had moved on and did not care about his last night's piece of ass. Will walked into his home after surfing to see Cam and Cody talking and shocked Cam by seeing hiim Will told Cody how inferior his last evening's sex was. When Cody told Cam who Will was after he left to dress Can finally realized the shit he was in. Doing damage control for his big deal with Stef, he worked through Cody to get Will to go to lunch with him and stop the hemorrhaging. Nothing is as it seems. Cam tells him at lunch that he was cold after having sex once since he felt guilty because he has an unnamed BF. Will is totally shocked. It is a line by a practiced liar and Will is distracted After lunch at home , Will finds out Cam's boyfriend is his good friend Jeff. Jeff is open talking to Will and trusts him. Jeff thinks Cam and he are so into each other and are exclusive. Will does not tell Jeff he just had sex with Cam. Will feels outraged and betrayed and after leaving Jeff's room goes after Cody for not telling him what was happening. Cody begs off saying he needs his Cam deal and did not tell Will earlier so he would not shred Cam. Will is an unwitting, now very mad pawn in a power game--Surprise1 Hollywood is a pit of vipers. Will ends in a very troubling quandary about Cam and Jeff and his role as a sexual partner to Cam. He needs to make sense of this, His obvious choices for serious advice were unavailable when he reaches out to them. Will thought to himself----"there was really only one guy left who could help me out, so I called him.' We are left with questions--Who is the sage and what advice will he give? Is it Patrick? Maybe not---Is it the stud and former sexual partner of Will who is new head of the New York office of Stef's firm? He might tell Will he has to grow up. Sex with power players is messy and ego driven and people lie all the time to get what they want. Most of them are users. He has to let Jeff learn on his own, He is a big boy. He knows the Hollywood scene. He will not be ignorant for long. Cam will cheat again with others. Jeff may not. Stories will get out. If Will wants to stay sane he cannot have sex with Cam again now that he knows about Jeff or his guilt will multiply. Will has a moral code, but many others do not follow his. He has learned a painful lesson,
  14. No matter what happens to the blackmail threat, Jonathan is traumatized. He is going to need the support of his friends, the love of Maddox along with passionate sex and professional outside help, I suggest.
  15. Kitt , I agree a lawsuit potentially could bring great pain to Jonathan and his friends and take a long time. A threat of a lawsuit is another matter. Never the less, I bet Jonathan as the outed guy would be sympathetic to a jury. He looks good and wholesome and that does not hurt We are talking about college kids and maybe with parents who can be frightened off by the need to hire expensive lawyers. Revenge porn and slander laws would be taken seriously by a jury who mostly would not favor the guys bringing shame and negative publicity by outing Jonathan. Smart lawyers and any related insurance companies should try to avoid court with a jury that might not favor their side and get a deal and handle it quickly and quietly with a non-disclosure agreement at settlement
  16. I can see Drew secretly taking vids of his sexual activities with Jonathan and not telling him. He might like it as evidence of a conquest or just good porn. He was in control and he used Jonathan. He was on drugs too. I bet Drew is still very mad at Jonathan and knows where he is. Jonathan's dad has pressured Drew to confess and accept Jonathan back. He wanted Jonathan to see Drew when he came home. But Jonathan rejected the plan to see Drew. Plus, I still think Drew was partly behind the harassment Jonathan got at his old campus. It was cruel and went on too long. I think Drew wanted then and wants now to disgrace and hurt Jonathan. Remember Drew had said Jonathan was the aggressor and turned him gay. Drew could joyfully join others in hurting him. Jonathan folded and did not fight back. He wants to walk away this time, too. He has friends now who can help him unlike before
  17. How could Hanna get the cock sucking vid?
  18. Two bright spots--- Ray and Maddox's mom are the best people in this chapter. Ray is going to back Jonathan and try to keep him here., Maddox's mother changes her mind and now backs Maddox being with Jonathan She wants to meet him. Maddox has even more reason to fight for Jonathan. I bet it could be a very happy Christmas if things work out right.
  19. Damn. if it is not one thing , it is another Just when you think they both are going to reconcile, Jonathan gets a nuclear bomb threat of a cock sucking vid and story release, He fears it will be a replay of the long torment he went through at his last school, He tells Ray he is leaving after the semester ends. He puts off Maddox when he returns to his dorm and has not yet told him he is leaving. After Maddox gets jealous over Rusty, the cock sucking video will be too much to forgive in Jonathan's mind. Jonathan is going to tum away. Ray argues with him and is going to find a way to keep him. When Maddox hears about the threat, I bet he will try to keep Jonathan here. The exaggerated series of problems with sex toys, ect at the last campus that lasted so long was too much. Jonathan hoped his sexual and other problems with Drew would blow over, but it kept on being so painful. But this continuing mess seems odd for what happened. I smell a rat. Was Drew behind the attacks on Jonathan? He has guys who bought drugs from him. Did he have a crew that wanted to hurt and harass Jonathan? And this cock sucking video--Jonathan is scared but not thinking straight. How would anyone at Sunny Hill have such a vid? Is Drew continuing to attack Jonathan and maybe linking up with Conor? Drew should be mad at Jonathan since his parents are pushing him to accept blame for their actions at the last college. He may hate Jonathan even more. Jonathan has one or more serious enemies. Jonathan needs to sit back and analyze his threat and eventually work with others for solutions. Maddox should be in his corner. Is he up to it? He might have time after finals ?Can he fight fire with fire ? Can he get a cock sucking or naked sexually suggestive vid of Connor? Can someone fake wanting to be with Connor and take compromising vids?
  20. scrubber6620

    Chapter 64

    Armand is committed to make a painting of the parents of Thomas. It is not an easy road, and he has had to be a serious, dedicated detective to get some likenesses. After a while, Armand is finally able to start painting. Thomas should be very grateful. The eventual painting has to be placed carefully in a personal space so no one will try to buy it later.
  21. scrubber6620

    Chapter 16

    So are you saying it is the fault of kbois that we are talking about dick size? I thought gay boys could talk about cocks anytime without prompting--so it is our nature to bring the subject up--lol I am going back now to watch cocks on Xhamster
  22. scrubber6620

    Chapter 16

    Hmm--Hollywood stars and exaggerated cock size I wonder who is rumored to be shorted by nature while considered to be a stud but pics --maybe faked or not-show otherwise--Collin Farrell , Brad Pitt ?
  23. scrubber6620

    Chapter 8

    More evidence that things are not what they seem to be. Fritz has not been fully forthcoming to Vanus. He did not warn him of problems in the house. The fight with the demon helped make Vanus lose confidence in his current role as impending head of the family. Vanus assumes Henry is behind his attack and out the demon in the box for 20 years and made him very mad. Vanus thinks Henry snuck in the house last night and started the events that let the demon out to try to kill him. Jill is being a loyal friend and doing her best to encourage Vanus to not give up. He worries for her safety. Vanus and the demon met in the family graveyard. They agree to not like each other and Vanus realizes he has to find out what is going on for himself. The demon said Uncle Charlie was far too vain to have hanged himself. He had to have been killed. Vanus has to accept he is facing unknown dangers. The demon, Bazzelthorpe, warned him about not relying on others and that he should fear Henry “Then you must take matters into your hands and find out on your own,” Bazzelthorpe said. “Trust me when I say Henry is far more monstrous than I am, orphan. It is his nature, it always has been.”
  24. scrubber6620

    Chapter 16

    a body in a casket will be a body double I am starting a new Jack Reacher mystery series book. In the beginning he is viewed naked with a blown apart chest on a slab in a morgue Reacher cannot be dead there are over 310 pages to go. So, I am interested in the trick Reacher used. Kage and/or Trevor might have a trick or two they are following.
  25. scrubber6620

    Chapter 16

    100 comments and Dallas is the reason--
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