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  1. scrubber6620

    Chapter 16

    and I will pull out in time--lol
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    Chapter 16

    Well--great minds think alike --or so I have been told It is an old way out of what appears to be an insolvable dilemma or deadend
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    Chapter 16

    Ok--for something right out of the box This chapter was really a nightmare Elijah OR Kage had. It was not reality. This morning both will wake up and start the morning out for real Both will be terribly scared
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    Chapter 16

    Hey--Saturday will just be a way station on the crisis path This trauma should last for at least a few more chapters before things calm down till another cliffie happens
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    Chapter 102

    Damn--Ases and Bouncer left Essell to forage and now Essell is alone with something approaching making heavy sounds in the bushes/ Is Essell done for? Is he ready to be kidnapped or killed? Has Garjah escaped? Who is the traitor?
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    Chapter 16

    The more this goes on.... The more I want revenge. I am ready for Huntington to get a nasty, messy, painful shocking ending when his time comes--like Sonny was machined gunned down as he drove up to the toll booth in the Godfather. After all we were told he is the Godfather of shifters.
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    Chapter 16

    So who will save Kage and be the calvary ? The Montana pups ? Elijah for any number of reasons? Backup from Kage's boss who knew Trevor was a plant and spy and did not tell Kage to not reveal he knew Trevor worked for Huntington,? A mysterious savior?
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    Chapter 16

    Captain Renault said to Rick in Casablanca "I am shocked, shocked" ---and so am I ----that you would play us this way a leave us in despair with little hope for the lovers and heroes So Kage and Elijah were overconfident, and Huntington is truly a bastard and not clueless--mmmm My only comfort is the realization that there are many more chapters --so mixing metaphors, the calvary has to be coming soon to keep this going
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    Chapter 7

    Ok--the first murder attempt failed--There may be others. --He is not going to get the prize without enemies wanting him gone or dead or maybe captured and placed far away and missing in a secret prison-like the czars of old. Vanus is going to have fame and fortune and a demon protector. Vanus is not subject to bribes. I can think of some suggested new steps by his enemies. The obvious choice to control him or use him is to kidnap Jill to hold her safety over Vanus. Or, his enemy or enemies can introduce exciting, appealing sexual partners to fill him with wrong ideas and do whatever is needed to please him . They want to find him a marriage partner they control. The enemy sponsored one who marries him can inherit the estate when Vanus is killed.
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    Chapter 7

    Wow--what a shocking set of events-- Vanus's Uncle Charlie appears as if alive again and gives Vanus the shaft of power and symbolism belonging to the head of the family, Vanus is fully scared facing and unknown force inside his mansion who becomes immersed in a seemingly fight to the death against a behemoth monster who turns out to be a demon. The demon thinks Vanus is Henry, another uncle, who put the demon in a box and tormented him. The demon is seeking retribution. However , Henry was exiled from the family and is presumed dead now. The demon does not accept that Vanus is not Henry until Mr. Fritz arrives and points out the close resemblance Vanus has to his mother. He apologizes and asks Vanus to kill him, the guardian of the patriarch. The demon almost killed the one he is dedicated to protecting. Vanus refuses to kill him and wants him to take up his security role. So, Vanus was set up to be killed by a vengeful demon. Someone next door to Vanus's bedroom was making noise that woke Vanus up late at night. It appears they wanted to find and open a box to release the killer demon or at least make it possible soon and then run away first so the demon who not attack them . The person could hope the demon would look for Vanus right away before midnight. However, the bad guy waited too long to act or could not find the box in time. Vanus was able to be given the protecting staff at midnight before the demon could attack him. The two most obvious suspects are Henry who may not be dead and Julian who wants to be the patriarch and deny Vanus his rightful claim. And it is just after midnight--what terrible things will happen later in the day?
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    Chapter 63

    The visitors from Italy left with good feelings all around. Colin and Armand will return later to Italy to see them. Colin and Armand like having Thomas stay over during the weekend. They decide to seek to adopt Thomas who is fitting in with everyone in their inner circle. They do not know, though, if the agency will like a same sex couple adopt a male. Armand has not told them his partner is male. If this story is true to life, then no state supervised and regulated agency in present day liberal Connecticut would ban a same sex adoption.
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    Chapter 15

    Yes, but using California or Pacific Standard Time , it is just over 31 hours till Wednesday..
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    Chapter 23

    Rafe continues to impress and grow. He showed he can take extreme situations and not buckle like others in his student group. He found out surprisingly he can fly and needs to improve this ability. Rafe made a friend out of a vampire team member and kept up his contest with Zoel. He sharply understood Zoel cannot be trusted since he is not obeying his alpha. Rafe's ending destruction of a large metal plate shocked everyone. He was still mad at Zoel and the plate was not going to stop him. Rafe is going to be the talk of the school. Rumors will expand his reputation. Some might even be true.
  14. What an enchanting interlude. No drama or serious problems to solve The wedding was happy, simple and inclusive. The mood was so upbeat. The goddess Terik made sure Vince's parents were present in spirit. Vincent and Mason completed their relationship in the shifter world by being officially married. Soon they will be on a honeymoon far away. All is right for them in these moments-mmm. Any problems seem so distant and really out of their minds,
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    Chapter 6

    Oh My--Vanus and Jill have to spend alone the night in the creepy old family mansion with few creature comforts, no staff, no food and a foreboding atmosphere and deadly history. Assuming Vanus lives through the night , he can begin to collect his inheritance the next day. Vanus has seen a painting of his uncle and he looks sinister. Who will Vanus meet to contest the will or his assumption as the head of the family?
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    Chapter 41

    No one, I think, has yet mentioned JJ's trauma from being sexually abused by an older man who controlled him as his skating teacher. JJ thought the man loved him and they were acting appropriately. JJ did not know what real love is. The teacher died ( may have been killed) and many parents were very mad at him. Are there implications from his sexual abuse history that might influence his relationships where he might seek strong friendships, sexual play or even love? I am over my head on this matter but happening at a young age at a criitical period in his life has to be a strong influencing factor on his behavior and ways of being satisfied. I suggest. This is one more reason JJ could be emotionally stunted and not able to have healthy relationships. His other mental health issues might cover up the impact of his sexual trauma which could be long lasting,
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    Chapter 41

    BTW, Cam Squires has taken over Will's body and mind and he has not thought about Zach. The wake-up sex time and any breakfast conversation should be revealing and fun. Will can be so playful and loves to shock. He and Cam should be preoccupied with each other till they separate. I wonder if Zach and Will could run into each other at Darius's UCLA fraternity party. Will is going to the 3:00 PM pre-party and may well have a great time and be preoccupied and already sated flirting and playing with other hot guys if and when Zach and his GF shows up later at night. He might not be bothered to see Zach. Unless Zach sends him signals or makes a move in private, I expect Will should realize and accept Zach has moved on and not into him anymore for whatever reason. Zach inattention could cross off one item from Will's Gap Year bucket list. We will see what Zach does.....
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    Chapter 41

    Impunity said--" Looking forward to when Cam figures out who Will is. I kind of hope it's at some future business meeting with Stef and Cody. " Maybe Will might be disclosed sooner than estimated above. Cam seems to not have been interested in Will's name before sex, I am betting Cam is going to be startled in the morning when Will says he does not need a Uber to get home. He could say he has a home 8 houses down and intends to go surfing later. Cam could finally ask will who he really his. Or, Cam could say he wants to see Will again after fantastic sex and they could exchange phone numbers and when Cam rings him to verify he will see his full name is Will Schulter. I am expected that Cam will not practice BDSM as Will expressed a worry about earlier and Will is going to be impressed and agree with Cody's statement that he is one of the two best tops in Hollywood. Cody is the other one. Cam could have risked his deal if he hurt Will. Will could sing Cam's praises to Stef.
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    Chapter 41

    Classic Will "I did a few more hits, then I went back up and rejoined the party, first hitting the bar, then wandering upstairs to do some coke. I went down and stood by the bar, my mood stoked by the blow I’d done. If I’d been at a ‘movie’ party, and there had been celebrities there, everyone would know who I was, but in this venue I was anonymous. It was a total rush." Will enjoyed some drugs but was not consumed or controlled by them. Will attracted his great prize, Cam, by being himself and not by being a Schulter. Likewise, Cam was not known to him as a bigwig, yet. Will was worthy on his own and relished the rush as he said. He was definitely hot and sought. He attracted the right guy on his own terms. Like Darius says, Will has game. 17 and so ready to be fucked by a magnificent top. What a great life !
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    Chapter 15

    Yes--you are expected to be social ! You cannot help it. In my humble opinion, you are well liked and a fun participant helping us really enjoy what you write BTW--I am drinking a diet tonic right now--it also helps to fight malaria--lol
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    Chapter 15

    kbois said- "Believe it or not, I'm on the wagon for a little while. My weight loss journey is stalled on a plateau" Try diet tonic water with a lime or lemon--tonic water normally has lots of calories-you will not miss the vodka It is refreshing and if you are at a social gathering no one will seek to give you an alcoholic drink since they think you already have one.
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    Chapter 41

    I remember from a past discussion about JJ in this series that Sussanah was thought of as a gold digger who saw JJ as her refuge and benefactor. She expected him to have lots of money at his disposal. Gosh, he had a Maybach. She also was a lesbian and had not been into sex with males. She fled England to find a new life since she could not live as she wanted there. If she fully connected with JJ ( as a sexual partner or wife) he might eventually be her cover for a female partner. JJ does not have a clue about her motives and would not expect her to dominate him eventually as she is expected to now by Daius and Will. It could be quite pathetic and others will pity him. He will lose out and be hurt badly by Sussanah. I also remember that unlike Will, JJ did not have control over his trust funds. If she finds out that JJ is not able to give her a lavish lifestyle, she might look out for another ticket to high society. Will and JJ can casually let her know about JJ's reduced circumstances. I am sure. I imagine JJ would like to see Darius but Will could be another matter. How can they delicately help JJ?
  23. I assume Jonathan has a trust fund set up early and maybe at birth. It is what very wealthy people to for their family members from the start to handle money and end conflict. All the assets are likely handled professionally and comprehensively. Tax matters are closely watched. I imagine he has no say over what is done with his trust funds or receive part or all of money from it until he meets certain conditions--usually competing some adult rite--like graduating college or reaching a certain age--18, 22, 25, 30? If Jonathan had access to some funds he might be free to leaved college after finals and even taken the finals online or without going back to his dorm room and then quietly take a gap year away. Jonathan would have options.
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    Chapter 41

    OK--Now the JJ fans will get their due Darius has convinced Will to go with him next weekend to save JJ from being pussy whipped by the first girl he wants, Sussanah. Darius sharply knows she wants JJ as her ticket to high society and riches and will dominate JJ to his detriment. After convincing, Will agrees to go and try to help JJ and fuck Patrick, Will being Will becomes a sexual favorite of two hot guys at the party. He misses Cody, but exchanges BJ's with a Green Day band member. Will has the bigger cock. Then Will connects with one of the best tops in Hollywood and only sexual competitor to Cody. He is Cam Squires, the man who wants to bring in Cody and start a huge comprehensive talent company with the help of Stef. He charms Will and does not know who he is. Will knows who he is and yearns for his sexual prowess. Will appeals to him by just being damn sexy. Cam takes Will to his home in his new Bentley. Will states what he wants from Cam--- “I want you to fuck me and light my body on fire,” I said to him, in my sultriest tone. “I can definitely do that,” he said, and led me into his house. I am sure they will blow each others minds and have a divine time I can see Will telling Cam he doesn't need a drive home. He can walk to his home since it is close by. Cam might be shocked to find out he fucked Stef's grandson. I hope Cam treats him well.
  25. Tonyr asked you---Let me ask you: Is Jonathan a ‘trust fund brat’ ? Tkx. I met a trust fund brat of a well known historically seriously wealthy family. He said his trust fund was set up at birth by the legion of experts that handled his whole family's money. It was a normal step and he was not singled out for special treatment. Nothing was left to chance and taxes were aggressively avoided.
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