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Will is learning about wolves in Hollywood and being a very good friend to Jeff who needs his advice Will also is demonstrating he is becoming uncommonly mature and self-aware. I did not expect to find out he would reflect upon the impact of his relationship with Zach in this way after kissing him.... “Yeah, so we can have our first Sunday night conversation in person,” I said. “I’ll see you tonight,” he said, and gave me a kiss. He walked out of the room leaving me smiling, in a blissful state. I knew this wouldn’t last, and that I’d probably have hell to pay emotionally, but these moments with him were worth it. Will is helping Jeff and realizing the limits of his time with Zach. Impressive----
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Oh No kbois--a knife! Scary! Time to talk the conflict down and back to being good friends, isn't it ?
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Armand has really expanded his assistance and it is being well received. He arranged for bunk beds to be placed in the orphanage and arranged a full time work routine for James at the club. James will be staying with Armand and the family. Armand is exploring adopting James, too. Coiin is planning the baseball outing that can take place before the trip to Italy, I wonder how you say goat in Italian? They will have to explain their US activities to their Italian friends.
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I like raven1's conjecture that the Fae might be able to help come up with a cure for the hybrids. Maybe, as suggested, Cassel can broker help. A Fae Prince protecting Huntington might cause the Fae King to accept some responsibility and to be open to providing a magical cure. So far, regular medical research is not finding a promising solution. Sebastian and crew are at a dead end on ways to cure the hybrids.
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The rebels found Garjah in the security building. But, they have to wait a day to try to rescue him. Essell is tormented. I think they should find a way to turn the bugs and bouncer on the Kardoval and chew them up.
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So, Collin and Armand are called uncles by the kids at the orphanage. They are liked and respected and now after a new meeting are fitting very well with Pat or Mrs. Anderson, the director of the orphanage. It seems James will be accepted and be able to learn much from Marcel in the club's kitchen. I am sure James will blossom in his new role. The baseball team's name got everyone to laugh. Goats -hmmm-Wait till the kids at the orphanage hear the name.
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Elijah seemed on top of a basic plan to get the pups--surprisingly “What exactly are you thinking?” Hunter asked. “Teams,” Elijah interjected, the idea hitting him clearly. “Exactly where I was going,” Sebastian said. “Give me your thoughts, Elijah.” The plan seemed to materialize out of nowhere in his head. “Teams of two...." Could this be from the spark that Kage left in his heart ? Kage could be helping him get the pups back.
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Tyler and Elijah joined a supportive, happy community of supernaturals. Elijah felt better with them now. Tyler was his natural gregarious self and fit in. The computer records have been translated basically by Zev. 76 hybrid pups have been bought. Tyler and Zev are working on finalizing locations and put them on a spreadsheet which could take a day. The rest are strategizing about the pups--pickup and housing/medical recovery. They need lots of plans and protocols to do the recovery right from getting info on identities from the parents to what to do when approaching the locations and taking them back. There will be a few two person teams so as to not get attention and bring Huntington back into defending his actions. Elijah wants Tyler and him to be on a team that goes after pups housed by humans. The pups inability to communicate by voice or hands means will complicate the process once they are found. Sebastian wants to house the recovered pups in an unused wing of the lodge with their parents. This is going to be a difficult effort that has to be carefully planned and executed. At some point, Huntington should find out and the good guys will need to be very aware of the dangers. Sebastian is going all out to lead the process and care back on his pack lands. Elijah and Tyler are going to be thrust into dangerous situations from the start. I am glad you are at peace and remembering the good qualities of your late mother. She lives on in you. The sensitive, touching way you write this story reflects well on you and her. You had to have grown up in a family where love ruled.
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kbois said-- "I'm not sure if Tyler is ready for a wolfie mate. Elijah still has a lot of healing to do. " Hope is fathering the wish that they both soon get on the path to finding someone special. I can see Elijah needing time to health and maybe he will need to see justice is done for Kage before he can close their chapter. Seeing him die before your eyes has to be traumatic and then to have a traitor kill him was doubly painful. As for Tyler, he is a horny boy. He can have sex without it leading to marriage. Others could feel the same way. As Billy Crystal said cynically--"Women need a reason to have sex. Men just need a place." Tyler has lots of hot men and places now around him.
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Success-- the family has grown by two boys with little difficulty. GG encouraged Armand as he became momentarily worried. Armand continued to play a happy patron of the orphanage and kids. He sponsored a great picnic meal, and he considered how else to help when he learned of an issue. He is open to providing bunk beds and finding a soon to leave young man with a potential job at the club. I imagine the mood at the orphanage is very upbeat. Colin and Armand will have a wonderful, larger family to take to Italy.
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Chapter 30: Tricky Tussle
scrubber6620 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 30: Tricky Tussle
Each couple was tested and learned much. Lovers were cemented. Cyrus won after a tough battle with the teaching shadow mage. Yakob needed rest afterwards. Vincent beat Elaine and explained being tired after his rigorous bouts with other shadow mages, Elaine is helping his to focus on his own pool of magic, not his stored magic in his bracelet. He is getting better prepared for Stefano. Dirk and Ingles finally made love and it was glorious and life affirming-plus wonderfully described, too. You really have to like how great and harmonious a couple they have become.- 40 comments
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The three new "sons" are fitting in with each other and their almost patents. Tommy is accepting his new "brothers " easily. They went clothes and furniture shopping, and things went smoothly. The boys want to dress alike to show they are brothers. Colin and Armand are planning on taking them to Italy. All these efforts are progressing nicely without knowing what the law and a judge decides. Will Colin and Armand be able to adopt two more young boys?
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Hmm--Vampires sucking first year's blood out. Now Zoel has had his blood sucked out. He seems to have failed the vampires-- Zoel said--“I-I’m tryin’. I’m, uh, trying my best for… you…” What is going on! The good guys become humanitarians and save Zoel and take him to his clubhouse. But they are perplexed.
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kbois said "Tyler has a bit of horn dog in him. " Then he will fit in easily with the wolf shifters and their love of hot sex. He should be very pleased soon.
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I want to remember this insight Mark you gave to us and look for this change and then find out what it means..... " Will knows Zach can be a dick, but Zach isn't a dick when he's with Will, and that has to make Will pretty special. It's when that changes that Will is going to have a revelation." Zach has helped Will realize he does not have to be a victim and be pushed around. He can stand up for himself when guys try to control him or hurt him
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Collin and Armand's hearts keep growing. They are deeply touched by two boys. GG agrees. It seems their family will grow by two if they are allowed to adopt two more young boys. In addition, children at the orphanage are having fuller lives with the interest of Collin and Armand.
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Sex--some possible opportunities for Will I expect Will to search out hot guys at the two upcoming parties and Taylor should find out. He will not go after Zach at the parties and further convince Taylor he is not into Zach sexually. There is a great potential for Will and Zach have hot phone sex when they call Sunday nights. Mark could spice the sessions up with them exchanging erotic vids and pics or more. Let your imagination wander !
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Besides the mind expanding sex and passion like no other--Zach gives something to Will. Zach is not just a one-sided user who some think views Will as a second fuck boy Zach tells Will--- “You’re all pissed off at these dudes and they’re playing you. Shit, your family could send any or all of those guys screaming out of town like a little bitch,” he said. He was telling me to quit playing the victim, and to explain shit to these guys. It was amazing how he could sometimes do this, just reach in my brain and rearrange things, and making things so much clearer. “I got it,” I said. I stood up and kissed him. “Thanks.” And will acted upon Zach's recommendation and things worked out much better. I have a feeling Zach and Will might grow apart as they live far apart and their lives move in different directions. They still could have that special spark and love, but it remains to be seen how time and distance influence them. Zach has a fuck boy in the dorm and has to stay in the closet for years. Will has Patrick in NY who he can see while at Harvard . Will also might find several hot guys to fool around with at college and eventually might find someone at Harvard to capture his mind and body
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Since Elijah seems to be a good friend and not a playmate, then Tyler might be open to finding a hot wolf shifter as he moves about. Tyler is no longer scared of them Anyone wolf shifter interested in Tyler will have two advantages, not available to Tyler. A wolf shifter can easily show Tyler his naked body when he shifts going about his daily or evening activities. Tyler will look and be fascinated as he just did. Tyler has said he has had a long dry spell between relationships. Tyler can find out who is single and hot. Plus, the wolf shifter can sense or smell Tyler should he be turned in by him and be given a green light to get close if the wolf shifter is also interested. It will be a two way decision.
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Thank you---This is a wonderful, feel-good chapter. It is welcomed after all the pain the boys went through and how seriously Tyler was worried, Elijah seems to be getting emotionally better. Tyler needed his help and was scared of wolf-shifters, Sebastian and crew put Elijah and Tyler at ease, Tyler loved seeing the guys shift and play outside. He was described as very impressed by their naked bodies---hmm. Are you suggesting a transition by Tyler into guys? With expert help, the wolves broke into the laptop, The data is confusing and needs to be studied. Sebastian is using his network to checkout the Fae and Cassiel and Huntington. Tyler and Elijah are being taken to visit Rosalie and Silas. I bet there is a potential for these two wise shifters to see something special in them for shifters, if it exists. I appreciate your kindness in publishing this story while you are facing your own serious challenges. I hope your mother and those around her can find peace and only be reminded of the good things in her life.
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Notice the irony in the introductory statement to this story--- "Vanus Kaufman has diamond eyes; everyone thinks he's a daemon" Vanus is not a demon, but he is trying to bond with one who is his new protector. He needs this demon.
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Hey, according to this story Will is connected to the loss of privacy in the US and possibly the world. His talk with Zach and Jake just helped him learn part of what was possible. He wisely wants rules. Daddydavek said-- "2004 and its news that their dumb cell phones can be tracked. 2022 and all our phones have family locator apps and Google and Amazon track everything. " Will's gigantic fortune ,as Stef predicted, is likely to be built on his angel or very early stage investment in what becomes Facebook and now Meta. He holds a 5% ownership. If he keeps up with Facebook, he will learn how it aggressively "monetizes" the data on its members and sells all it can learn about people to others and becomes wildly financially successful. Others , like Stef's investment in Linkedin, have found ways to market and sell data about their website users
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Vanus and Jill spoke honestly to the demon and he returned the favor and all better understood each other. Respect is building. The demon sees Vanus's mother in him and is favorably touched. They are better prepared to face the future and find answers. I hope the high priestess can give Vanus some useful information. The driver is an unknown factor. Will he help Vanus or be a spy for Henry?
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In Love With A Time Traveler
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In Love With A Time Traveler
As for Drew winning over Jonathan, it will not work. Drew is confident and thinks having Jonathan's parents in his corner assures he will win Jonathan over with their pressure. Drew has acted so condescending and arrogant assuming Jonathan will give into him as before that he is upsetting Jonathan. Maddox has shown him what he wants in a boy friend and Drew cannot measure up. If Drew has ulterior personal gain motives and Jonathan finds these out when matters heat up. Johathan will be even more opposed to Drew. I am looking forward to the big confrontation at the home I still assume Jonathan has a trust fund set up at his birth--like very wealthy people do- that will kick in when he reaches a certain age or meets some threshold point. He can wait out any short-term problems. -
Great clarity and Will comes out on top. Near term crises are averted. Zach helps Will see he needs to change from a victim role to a dominate power player who will not take guff. Will puts his new attitude into action and forces Cam to tell Jeff the truth or his life will be hell courtesy of Will. Zach is tracked to the hotel. Taylor calls him. Will gets on the phone with her and disarms her and says Zach and he are just buds hanging out. Will points out he will see her soon at two upcoming parties They figure out Zach is being tracked by his phone. In fact, the dad has all his kids and ex-wife tracked. Working later with Jake, Will insures Zach gets a new phone to prevent him being tracked. BTW, Will finds out from Jake he is being tracked for his safety and says rules have to be defined on the usage of his data soon. Will and Cody talk at the Malibu home and Cody comes around to Will's position on Jeff. After being asked by Stef, Will agrees to stay in LA until Wednesday and will attend meetings with Stef and a fashion show. More chances to be educated by Stef. Expect Stef to ask Will about the dust up he has caused with Cam Will is upbeat since he called Patrick who happily wants to see him next weekend and attend some events Jeff is returning to the Malibu home after talking with Cam Mark, I am impressed how you showed Will growing and finding better solutions for himself and others without going nuclear and remaining true to his principles. The Zach crisis has been deferred.
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