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Damn--the drug usage and Will stays coherent until the end when things got dicey. I was scared for him as he got into the limo. At least he was smart enough to plan ahead and knew he would get wasted He leads a charmed life. I bet tomorrow morning will be painful. Whether he sought it out or not, he succeeded in two ways--He sucked off and was fucked by a frat dude and was a good-hearted sexual therapist to him. Plus , he played gay-straight sex games with Taylor to show he was a smooth gay guy and lowered any suspicions she had about Zach. His hormones did kick in at the dance part and matters got hot. I bet she felt his hard cock close to her and was pleased she was so sexy that she turned on a gay guy. Zach was at the hotel mad at Will for the way he went after his girl, but Will could not focus on him and had to focus on vomiting in the toilet, Did Will ruin their intended sexual event? Is this his peak drug/alcohol usage this week? Will he be more restrained the upcoming events--one more party, more sex with guys and the fashion week show?
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Kit makes friends in high places and has wonderful in Europe experiences. He survived a serious winter accident and kept his balance and good humor after a prolonged medical recovery. His good friend, Marcus, stays true to him and easily reconnects. Just when things seem to become stable, Kit and his uncle have to return to Australia to attend a funeral. The boss of his uncle is not happy but agrees to let him travel. Will this turn out to be a problem?
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kbois--what do the hybrid pups look like? We are told they have a wolf's head and paws for hands. Is their lower body--ass, cock and balls, legs and feet -human? We know they are stuck and cannot shift. If so, the human side could appeal to the buyer as an exotic, dangerous, young individual as a product of a lab experiment and not a wolf shifter. The existence of wolf shifters might not be compromised. This half wolf-half human individual would be an exotic fuck toy. The buyer might not be into bestiality and into a new type of sexual plaything.
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Well. other supernaturals could chase Tyler--he is handsome and sexy and loves sex. Somehow , I can see Tyler as a mate for a wolf shifter who will relate well to other wolf shifters. He is a stud and strong and trustworthy. I can't see Tyler being in love with a tricky fae or threatening. blood sucking vampire, However. he has yet to meet other types of shifters. You showed him being drawn to Logan, You can also show him drawn to other types of shifters.
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Chapter 31: Getting Gelato
scrubber6620 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 31: Getting Gelato
This was a great chapter--full of fun, love, friendship, standing for your values and growing. Your recent two fairytale short stories showed you can concisely make points and entertain. This longer and multi-issue chapter left me pleased and happy and kept my interest. I hope Vincent passed his written test and is ready for Japan. It is a very different country. If the culture influences the packs, Vincent will need a solid intro. and follow RJ's advice. I have been to Japan 4 times on business and things operate differently in many ways. Cyrus left an impression. Vincent did leave Kap's dad with a questioning ending--who is his son's mate? He will find out when Kap visits.- 27 comments
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Chapter 31: Getting Gelato
scrubber6620 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 31: Getting Gelato
Vincent has a Kia Soul--Come on--what a misplaced car for him. Most around here are driven by teenagers- 27 comments
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frosenblum said--- "Don't forget about earthquakes in California. " Yep--that is the big long-term fear with all the fault lines But right now, I am worried about the high heat--officially 109 here but unofficial on my backyard thermometer 116. Either temp is deadly We are under a requested slowdown of power usage ( do use not appliances at certain times, set your inside temp to 80 and do not charge your electric car) with a possibility of shutdowns if the power demands are too high. The very high heat is expected through Friday.
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kbois said "Things will work out however they are meant to. What will happen has already been written. While I can't say I've never edited because of comments, I can say I've never drastically changed an outcome. " That is good to know. My worry is not that you will add something in response to comments--but that you might take out something because your fans thought it was going to happen. You might want to show you are unpredictable. For example, you might show Tyler not getting a shifter mate since so many can picture it. But, I can say I really value your extensive, ongoing willingness to engage and verbally tussle with your fans. You make your stories more powerful and help us see textures and issues that could be missed if you did not comment. The story is yours. You help us to be concerned about the characters.
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The longer the pups are kept hybrid they could be terribly sexually and physically abused and injured to enforce compliance and at the end severe punishment ( think branding, cutting, whipping, electric shocking, body part removal.. castrating, anal stretching to eventual ruined prolapsing ass hole, enforced solitary confinement, sensory depravation. So the longer the hybrids are kept, it might well be the greater the chance they hybrids could might lose their mind and human side and all hope and turn feral. The teams will have to be careful and judge the pups when they find them. They could try to hurt/kill their rescuers. At the least they cannot talk and communicate so the rescuers will not have the normal cues to evaluate their hybrids.
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OK--if they are already feral like in a prison population, do we see civilized behavior develop or do we see actual or developing gangs, power struggles, violence, killings, sexual dominance, widespread drug usage, etc? Hey, suicide happens and sometimes in max security prisons.
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As for putting two or more feral pups together to civilize them---ever read Lord of the Flies? The title is a translation of Beelzebub ( AKA Satan). Normal kids stranded by just themselves on a desert island after a plane crash lose all decency and turn feral and become violent and brutal toward each other.
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What a fun baseball game for all--baaa. Colin and Armand really are making the kids in the orphaned happy. The toy goats were a wonderful addition. James does not want a gf. Marylou must gave seen him cooking at the club and selected him. He will have to be firm with his position. I hope Marcel will back him up against Marylou when the boys are in Italy.
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You portrayed a very healthy attitude about sex in the pack. Hooking up is Ok and not frowned a upon if both consents. I am sure Elijah is happy for Tyler and wants him to be pleased. If there was any doubt that Elijah might want to have sex with Tyler, this partnering with Logan answered that possibility, No! Elijah was not jealous of Tyler and Logan. We are told he needs more healing before he can think of another guy being in bed with him. Logan and Tyler connected at breakfast and things went forward. Logan offered after a wonderful sexual experience a short-term partnering with Tyler. He wanted lots more sex with him before he let to find the pups. Tyler agreed and wanted to top Logan next time. They might get very creative and sexually playful as they become more experienced with each other's bodies and likes. Just a chance for only a week of hot sex after long dry spells might make things more intense, Logan was not like a human gay wolf who lived for the conquest, kicked out a guy after sex and did not look back. Tyler wondered what would happen after they fucked. Logan made him glad with his actions and offer for a week of being devoted to just each other. Both seem to be in this relationship for the intense physical rewards without any emotional attachments. Will it stay this way? Will Logan worry about Tyler when he leaves and faces danger?
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It is encouraging to find out your good efforts were appreciated. Sometimes people can be wary of newcomers helping out. You write with a generous spirit and concern for your characters, so you are telling us that you act in person the same way. I expected it to be so. Living in California, we do not fear nature's wrath from tornados--just forest and grass fires. The human tragedies from those are shown on the news. So far, the stories are just that and have not hit me directly.
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Success on two fronts--finding the pups location and Tyler finding a guy to have hot sex with for a week The plan for the teams is looking good and more study is needed. No one moves out without full information on the pups and owners. Dealing with feral pups was the toughest question. Killing them won't be easy. Tyler and Elijah will need to get their minds into what they are doing. It is going to be so different and then seeing half wolves-half humans in distress will be shocking. Tyler and Logan hit it off almost from the start of the day. They noticed each other and got closer. Elijah and Logan's twin noticed the attraction and smiled and did not object. Later, Logan and Tyler had great sex well described. Both gave wonderful blow jobs. Both are open to topping and bottoming. Tyler was fucked first and it was awesome. He said---" Glory be to God, Logan could seriously fuck." Tyler had not been with a guy for two years and loved his experience. Logan did all the right things before, during and afterwards. They both wanted more and agree to be friends with benefits for the week until the teams went on the road. Both Tyler and Logan are saying they just want uncomplicated great sex. Tyler even mentioned that Logan's mate might be out there . Tyler knows about shifters having mates and will not interfere. I will say they are unexpectedly very compatible and might miss each other when they separate if their sex keeps being this good. We will see how the week progresses. I hope your efforts to help your residents meets with a good level of success. Perhaps, those without insurance can get some government help. You must be hearing many tragic stories and your mental wellbeing might be challenged, too. I hope you can find peace.
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Looks like Will and Zack should have more hot sex Sunday night. Then Will is open to Stef's schedule Monday-Wednesday with some time for more sex. Is the Anders-Hayes acquisition happening early in the week and might Stef bring Will along? Is it time for Stef to meet again with Cam and should Stef bring Will along? Should Stef discuss Will's activities with Cam and learn or confirm how easily it is for Cam to lie when the facts are painful. Could Stef make some changes in the potential deal to get independent verification of Cam's company statements? Is it possible that Will could know some of the key players at the Wednesday fashion show--like Belona and JJ? I can see Hollywood stars be present to secure deals for clothes to wear at public events--like the Academy Awards.
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You must be very busy with the upheaval and sad personal tragedies from the tornado. I lived in the Midwest a while ago and saw funnels and they were scary. My cousin's town in Missouri was devastated by one. I hope any needed FEMA and government and non-profit relief aid has arrived. Real recovery can take a long while.
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Hmm--for some reason, I want to bake and eat some fresh out of the oven gingerbread. I have a mix in my kitchen. I love how it tastes. I hope the little gingerbread twink gets away in his realm. People, though, will be sad.
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Armand is taking care of many details and realizes he needs to get back to painting. The group leaves for Italy in 2 weeks, I bet the upcoming bus trip and viewing of the baseball game will be great fun for everyone. The kids in the orphanage are so pleased with their excursions. Colin and Armand are thoughtful supporters. Armand is securing James's future. Colin and Armand will be his guardians till he is 21 and he will be working at the club.
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Kit's world becomes wider. What great opportunities with his closet friend, Marcus. He will be living in grand style in a story book principality networking and enjoying a wide range of people. After some intense social life, Marcus and Kit can return to relaxing and exploring on their school holiday. He will have interesting tales to tell his uncle
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Good Guys Do Date Bad Boys, After All
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good Guys Do Date Bad Boys, After All
With Drew incensed, how about the cock sucking video being released when the next semester begins at Sunny Hill even without Jonathan being present? Drew will want to hurt him publicly. If Jonathan holds off attending and finds out the video is released, he might as well register late and start the semester. Ray, Maddox, Rusty and the crew can stand behind Jonathan -
Good Guys Do Date Bad Boys, After All
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good Guys Do Date Bad Boys, After All
Kitt, I like the idea of the riding crop for their sexual delight--adding spice and a bit of pain. But can they use it at Jonathan's home? Won't they make too much noise? They have to go back to campus and bring the riding crop. Jonathan should hit Drew with the riding crop if he makes any more advances.- 72 comments
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Good Guys Do Date Bad Boys, After All
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good Guys Do Date Bad Boys, After All
A wonderful reunion at Jonathan's family estate. Jonathan went to a ride on his favorite horse. He was met by Drew and then Maddox. Jonathan and then Maddox told off Drew. The air got tense. Drew's plans whatever they were had been stymied. Jonathan prevented his suitors from fighting. Drew rode away to leave the estate. Maddox and Jonathan are going back to the house. Maddox wants to make love with Jonathan wearing his riding boots and hat--kinky? Jonathan told his parents about his true BF and the video and leaving Sunny Hill. They fully backed Jonathan and offered to take legal action, Rusty helped drive Maddox to the estate and stayed behind in the house. He might be seeing the parents. Rusty could be nervous enough to sing opera for them since he wanted to fit in with high class people. Drew was really upset and said Jonathan was done with him yet. We will find out what Drew does shortly.- 72 comments
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The Wolf and Papa Bear
scrubber6620 commented on astone2292's story chapter in The Wolf and Papa Bear
What a warm, fun retelling of new outcomes of two fairy tales. The bear and the wolf are turning into sexual partners and friends. Goldilocks is terrible homewrecker. The Big Bad Wolf was reformed by kindness to take care of Grandma and Little Red Riding Hood.- 47 comments
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Gosh, Will is just 17 and is learning and learning fast about sexual partners and what he likes and does not like. Jeff told him about wolves , like Cam, and the thrill of the chase and the new. Will showed that he is a good, kind hearted, supportive friend of friend of Jeff who worried and is under great stress. Will is becoming stronger. Jeff explained to Will..... “Maybe,” he said. “Look, you chose to go after that type of dude. You’re the one who likes the wolves.” I thought about that for a bit. “I don’t like wolves,” I said. “I like guys who think they’re wolves but really aren’t.” “Like me,” he said, as if that was a big epiphany. “Like you,” I agreed, then we drifted off back to sleep. Mark, I love how you are developing Will into a more aware, thoughtful person with a healthy outlook. Will shows he can be generous and likable to JJ, Susannah, Zach and Jeff. He understands the guys. Susannah is still a mystery to him. He will find out more about her next weekend.
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