KayDeeMac
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Yes - it's a very fine line between concerned friendships and overly mettlesome do-gooders! Some issues, especially budding romances, need time to grow or dissolve on their own!
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Great chapter Wayne. Wonderful descriptive emotions of euphoria, confusion, fears and insecurities that Grant was experiencing. Reminds me of my struggles with coming out in my late 20's as opposed to my teenage years. Thank you !!
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All Cliffs All the Time
KayDeeMac commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in All Cliffs All the Time
I think you guys are having too much fun writing this story within a story!! But I'm having equally too much enjoyment in reading it! Thanks to you both. -
I love it! A soap within a soap. Great writing guys!
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Being the hopeless romantic that I am - it was a great chapter and I loved every word !!!
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Great chapter. I'm also sure Tom, and more so Kate, are going to bring trouble with a capital "T" ! Excellent writing MozLover21!
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No critique from me - I'm just enjoying the story. I am thoroughly engrossed with the interactions between Andrew and Aubrey!!! There is definitely ELECTRICITY !!!
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LMAS - Onesy!! Great story Carlos. Again, thank you!
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Damnnnn!! Don't fuck with me fella!! Glad Paco got what he deserved.
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I believe Grandpa is simply showing equal respect for his "grandsons" and total acceptance to Tony and his lifestyle by offering him an opportunity as he did with Dante! Hopefully the Russians boys will heed their grandpa's wishes. Great chapter Carlos. Thank you.
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I have to agree with Will. You are a great author and I truly love all your work! And as always, I'm definitely "hooked" on this one. Great character development.
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The Start of Spring Semester
KayDeeMac commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Start of Spring Semester
Well we are now well educated on the age of consent. Great chapter Geoff - but more drama!!!??? -
Love, Light, and Trauma
KayDeeMac commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Love, Light, and Trauma
Wow!!! Johnny has got to pull through!!! -
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO is right! Yep definitely a major cliffhanger! I hope the policeman at the door nails asshole-grandpa!!
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Another great chapter!
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Surprises and Revelations
KayDeeMac commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Surprises and Revelations
Yes the proverbial shit has hit the fan but its still going to be flying when they discover the extent of Simon's voyeurisms!!! Finally!! I am so happy Zack is back and will hopefully become a fixture in JJ's future. Mom will no doubt be there as well. GREAT chapter Geoff - Loved it!!!! -
Yep it's good that JJ has his Mom's back in the picture. Glad she left the A-hole father (Minister - What an oxymoron that is !!!!) Still a lot of "stuff" for JJ to settle but he has a good support network plus Mom now! Good story Geoff! Thank you.
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Magic to Do: A Cast Party for the Ages
KayDeeMac commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Magic to Do: A Cast Party for the Ages
WOW - never saw that coming!! I don't think suicide though - probably too much bubbly and feeling sorry for himself as JJ sang to him. We'll just have to see where Geoff goes with this! I was surprised the TV guys did not discover the camera(s)??? -
YEP ! The television installation is going to be a real "show-n-tell" !!! Bring on the drama Geoff
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I doubt the videographers could withstand the heat to actually make a porn film!! Yes Simon does have some redeeming qualities BUT, he is still very creepy!!
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Very well said Will !!
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Well Simon does possess some redeeming qualities here but he's still creepy. Hopefully he'll reject JJ's sexual "repayment" offer!
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Great chapter and I'm also amazed this is your first! It's really good! Thank you - but - let's get creepy Simon out of the bedroom!!!
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OK. Now we know a little more about Simon and how he's set-up the whole voyeur thing! It's still creepy to me though. I can't imagine what the fall out will entail once the main characters in this "show" discover they are being spied upon!!! Hopefully Johnny's grandmother's prophesy of a true soul mate will be enough to bind his continued relationship with Jason. Interesting story Geoff.
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Sometimes the comments are almost as entertaining as the latest chapter of the story. HA HA Wayne you have a great group of readers and I am proud to be among them!!! Tomorrow's "sober" morning will be a very telling experience for both Troy and especially Grant!! Time to come out of the closet Grant!! Your mother will be especially ecstatic - or should that be exacerbated !!! I know I repeat myself Wayne but, another GREAT chapter!
