Ivor Slipper
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A very neatly packaged ending to a thoroughly enjoyable story.
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It seems everything is falling nicely into place for Danny & Jake, but I suspect there will e a problem or two before they hit the road to Nimbin.
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Danny';s preparations seem to be going well, although he hasn't found his passport yet. It now seems Nate isn't going to be the only person he'll miss when he leaves - there's also a not so little brat 🙂 All he needs now is to have an accident on his bike and the money will either be found or stolen.
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I rather feel for Nate who seems to be the loser in this triangle.
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Jake made the right decision to leave town. But he has taken a big risk in writing that inscription in the book, one that could prove to be a bad decision if, or when, someone other than Nate should chance to read it.
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Love the last sentence. As for the rest of the chapter, an illustration of what a solitary gay young man could expect in such a location at that time.
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As one of the pair is called Thommo, what's the betting the other is Dennis?
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Fragment 16: Exploration
Ivor Slipper commented on ColumbusGuy's story chapter in Fragment 16: Exploration
I think I read somewhere a while ago, that new stories/chapters only appear every 5 minutes. If so that might account for what you experienced. -
Fragment 16: Exploration
Ivor Slipper commented on ColumbusGuy's story chapter in Fragment 16: Exploration
That's left us hanging in the lunar atmosphere, so to speak.🙂 Hope we don't have to to hang around too long. -
An inspirational scene captured on film. Seeing a Polaroid of yourself naked must have been truly a revelation for both of them. Perhaps helping Jake with his sale at the market may help them explain their sudden wealth - assuming he manages to sell a few pictures.
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How long will Danny be prepared to wait? Perhaps after the photo session Nate may be 'inspired' to come to his rescue?
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If the boys agree to Jake photographing and painting them, how they are going to explain their sudden wealth to their parents? As was said $50 was a lot of money back in 1975.
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Maybe Jake was planning ahead in removing Nate's shorts from the bonnet of the van? Nate won't want to come busting in on them in the nude, so there is bound to be some noise when he can't find them. But, having said that, I don't have the feeling Jake is that devious.
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Danny & Nate's explanation for the appearance of Jake is a good piece of invention at first sight. However, it can only be effective for a limited period if Jake is supposed to be 'working up and down the coast'. It is, after all, only a small town and any writer would have found out enough about it in a few days and then move on to the next town. I think you need a Plan B boys.
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Enjoyed the story and look forward to future developments. Thompsonville, here we come!
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Based on what she said at the funeral 'She looked at us, “Please take care of him. He’s a good boy.”', I can't see how it can be bad tidings. That line rather rules out the thought that she might be thinking of trying to get custody.
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An there was I expecting Tim's parents to come home early and catch them in flagrante...
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Is Tim about to discover the show must go on, come what may?
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Thank you @flesco! It's always pleasing to receive comments on stories and to know that someone has truly enjoyed the tale I've written.
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What a way to end a beautiful evening! However, as the question was whispered i suspect the voice inb the dark is not Dad's.
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I suspect the musical will prove to be a snowystorm. 😀
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Thank you for commenting. I'm pleased to know you enjoyed reading the story. i don't have any plans for further stories about Tris & Ty, but i do have other stories you could try...🙂
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'Some like it Hot' - and that was definitely a hot coming together! At least Ben only winked - for now! 😁
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The latter also being part of 'learning to deal with it' 🙂 Of course some post spanking attention also helps in that respect...
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I'm pleased to hear it stood up to second reading - thanks.
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