Jump to content

Ivor Slipper

Author
  • Posts

    4,597
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by Ivor Slipper

  1. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 3

    Good to know the oceans on Benteen do contain a fish similar to the anchovy!
  2. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 3

    An interesting justification by Til for orx hunting as opposed to whale hunting. Jem & Nico are very definitely on the way to becoming a pair.
  3. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 2

    It seems that some of the animals on both sea and land may be starting to act together in order to try and counter the threats they face from their predators. I'm sure this voyage of the Vespris is not going to be plain sailing.
  4. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 2

    When I read that I had to stiffle a laugh 🙂
  5. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 1

    Mr MacAfee should surely be in charge of security, while Miss Frees seems aptly named for a voyage to the frozen north.🙂 An extra terrestrial version of Moby Dick seems feasible in answer to @weinerdog's speculation, although I'm sure it is going to be a lot more complex a tale than that..
  6. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 24

    A well written chapter with Ollie ranging from joy to despair in a few short hours before finally moving back up the happy scale.
  7. Pleasant ones I hope! Glad you enjoyed even though I know you prefer a different type of saddle.🙂
  8. Hi @ColumbusGuy No idea why I never responded to this comment at the time, so apologies for that. Only just came across it now because someone else read and left a comment. Glad you enjoyed. As for Barry, hopefully he will learn how to put the brakes on his actions and not end up in chains.🙂
  9. Thanks BB. Pleased you enjoyed.
  10. Excellent story of two young men overcoming the odds and now setting off for a, hopefully, happy life together.
  11. Matt and Luke’s stumbling upon the graves of three members of the Adams family was poignantly written @Mark Ponyboy Peters. I found my damn allergies activated yet again. The reverence with which Matt and Luke observed the scene and Luke’s promise to himself he would return to the site again one day was very moving. I very much endorse your statement @Summerabbacat Just wonder if Luke will be tempted to try and trace what became of the father.
  12. Looking forward to seeing Tim & Guy's 'special place' 🙂
  13. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 20

    True, but can Ollie really ask for more?🙂
  14. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 10

    Boy, trouble sure seems to follow Pete around!! Turns out he's not bad at soccer either. 😀
  15. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 18

    Things are moving rapidly - and seemingly all in the right direction.
  16. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 5

    If so, presumably a gay monster?🙂
  17. Ivor Slipper

    1.

    The first step is always the hardest.
  18. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 7

    All the ingredients for the main course, but nothing for the dessert? I suspect Pete & Mitch can whip something up in the kitchen while the grumps are finishing the wine.😀
  19. There could prove to be a rocky road ahead. 🙂
  20. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 17

    Things appear to be progressing nicely for everyone.
  21. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 12

    It would seem that the Pellegrino is being uncapped and is about to sparkle, thanks in no small part to Marco's hand on the container. A happy conclusion with (hopefully) the promise of more to come. Not only for them, but also for us, the readers.
  22. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 11

    Exactly! Marco has always tried to act as the bridge to lead Cosmo to a better place.
  23. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 11

    I echo @weinerdog - words can't do this incredible chapter justice. I do think though that for Elisabetta such an end was inevitable. She will definitely have left her mark on Ravello. Very tough on Giorgio, but I believe her mind was made up to go out in a blaze of glory and nothing he might have said would have changed that.
  24. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 10

    I almost didn't respond simply because this interpretation of the situation left me speechless....
  25. Ivor Slipper

    Chapter 10

    A beautifully written chapter
×
×
  • Create New...