Ivor Slipper
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I'll second @Flip-Flop These leepers sound more like party poopers than party poppers. 🙂
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It's better than that because each 'episode' isn't interrupted by advert breaks. 😃
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Blueberry jam? We didn't have to wait long for Browbeat to appear and add his sense of fun - He's a poet and sure does know it. 😀 Charlie & Co have so many resources to call on now surely nothing can go wrong???
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So you're saying Browbeat is in the story!
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North to Alaska! Oh sorry, it was West. Or maybe North by Northwest? I think I'm in danger of getting my Hathways confused with my Hitchcocks. 😀 https://youtu.be/RO6IU9RpjS8?si=aG8NhLBhm_caHxko Intriguing start. I'm ready to be spirited away...
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A Chicago deep dish eh? Don't think Thomas will be up to eating much though. However, I think the afternoon session will be interesting.
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Roll on Monday! See you in court. 🙂
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I wonder if things are happening just in time for Ben? 😀
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That was somewhat of an over reaction Ben!
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Perhaps Ben is bi?
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I suspect the car might contain the 7th cavalry. 🙂
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Late arrivals are always appreciated. He could well have wanted a private showing! 😉
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One door closes, but there seems to be a chink of light ahead in the form of an epliogue and maybe a sequel. Definitely things to be looked forward to.
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Departure plans put into action and running smoothly - so far... 🙂
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A very neatly packaged ending to a thoroughly enjoyable story.
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It seems everything is falling nicely into place for Danny & Jake, but I suspect there will e a problem or two before they hit the road to Nimbin.
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Danny';s preparations seem to be going well, although he hasn't found his passport yet. It now seems Nate isn't going to be the only person he'll miss when he leaves - there's also a not so little brat 🙂 All he needs now is to have an accident on his bike and the money will either be found or stolen.
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I rather feel for Nate who seems to be the loser in this triangle.
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Jake made the right decision to leave town. But he has taken a big risk in writing that inscription in the book, one that could prove to be a bad decision if, or when, someone other than Nate should chance to read it.
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Love the last sentence. As for the rest of the chapter, an illustration of what a solitary gay young man could expect in such a location at that time.
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As one of the pair is called Thommo, what's the betting the other is Dennis?
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Fragment 16: Exploration
Ivor Slipper commented on ColumbusGuy's story chapter in Fragment 16: Exploration
I think I read somewhere a while ago, that new stories/chapters only appear every 5 minutes. If so that might account for what you experienced. -
Fragment 16: Exploration
Ivor Slipper commented on ColumbusGuy's story chapter in Fragment 16: Exploration
That's left us hanging in the lunar atmosphere, so to speak.🙂 Hope we don't have to to hang around too long. -
An inspirational scene captured on film. Seeing a Polaroid of yourself naked must have been truly a revelation for both of them. Perhaps helping Jake with his sale at the market may help them explain their sudden wealth - assuming he manages to sell a few pictures.
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How long will Danny be prepared to wait? Perhaps after the photo session Nate may be 'inspired' to come to his rescue?
