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Well, it is not really a cliffhanger, but it leaves many possible directions of travel. I do not like loosing Charlie, but it didn't really surprise me. Now the brother, that did come out of nowhere.....

If the author likes cliffhangers so much, I will build the gallows right over the edge ...... Next chapter quickly please.

Greg is beginning to understand just how powerful and adept his new world is. I am sure he will also learn that power of this level breeds corruption of a similar level. This is why armored vehicles and 24/7 bodyguards. I think this ride is just beginning to pick up speed. I am hanging on tight!! Great work!

Great chapter. I loved the way Greg put two asshats in their places without raising his voice at all. People in professional positions NEED to be reminded and held accountable for proper action when dealing with customers. Greg definitely held them accountable 😂.

Another must read story in the Charlie Boone worlds. Geron has taken our adventurers on a trip to a new haunted house, with new ghosts and a whole new serving of fun! Come on up the lane and hold on while you say "Trick or Treat". You WILL get what you asked for.......... Geron has again created art with words and given us a whole new way to enjoy the holiday.

I finally got one right! Lugh just parked in a bad spot, or did he??? Without this adventure Martin, Emma and Akeeri would still be apart, so was it an oversight? Geron you have done it again, wonserful story!! I look forward to a Christmas housewarming party with yet to be imagined adventure....

I am now wondering if the doorway to the alternate world may now be UNDER the new house on the land and the entity is trying to get in to go home.....

I am thinking that the original house on the land may have had keeper also. When the house became abandoned or destroyed that keeper may have been displaced to the land around the old house. Now that there is a new house on the land the old keeper may be wanting to help. We will see 🤗.......

Assuming (Don't even....) that Charlies observation of the lack of power to the house and the probable lack of conveyance for Mildred, I am thinking a direct approach might be in the best interest of all. Just go back in and point out these simple elements and simply state that it is obvious that she has knowledge and likely ties to other relms/dimensions and ask what she is looking for help with. It might be prudent for safety to have Max or Robin on hand to assist with defense if needed.....

Oh Boy. This is going to be FUN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story with an ending that is both realistic and very happy. I wish more people could have that experience in their lives.

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This story may be @Geron Kees best work yet! As has been said by others here it tells of science and fantasy with a cast of characters that is amazingly wonderful with a few lothesum creetons thrown in to make an amazing adventure with twists and turns right up to the very end! Geron has out done himself by creating a world(s) and situations that glue you to the words and make setting the story aside, for a break or rest, almost impossible. This story MUST be read to understand and admire the exceptional gift this author has for painting amazing scenes, with words, that make it seem that you are a part of the cast and actions happening around you. Great Work Geron and keep the stories headed our way.

This was a wonderful ending to a great 5 weeks of story reading! I see many doors open for future adventures with this cast of characters. @Geron Kees will have to set up his writing studio in his Nether so he will have time out of time to write his stories. Wonderful writing Geron and I wait with intrigue for your next offering!!!

As a person from the world of radio communications is must be noted that AM is an "Absolute Miracle" and FM is "Fu#$ing Magick"! 😇

I just have to throw this out there... All this talk of sequels sounds wonderful, but we all have to remember there is only one @Geron Kees. Geron has already told us that his writing time is finite and that is why we did not get a 4th of July Charlie Boone story. That is fine as this story opens up a whole new aspect of Gerons gift of storytelling. With that said, I look forward to ANY story Geron gives us at any time!!!

I think Jamie needs another visit with Flitch. A new magik to understand electrums in detail and allow 100% manipulation, deactivation, reassignment or reversal would sure add a short circuit to Porvus' plans. It might even put a lightning bolt right up his a$$ ...

Robbie is growing up. His interaction with Sue showed that he is very aware he is loved and needs to reign in his anger. Don is simply a speed bump in the road of life and speed bumps can be removed when necessary. Robbies reflection after Nathans call shows the maturity he is gaining. Nathan is not a lifetime romance and I feel that is good. Rory could be that or just a very good best friend for life. It will be interesting to see the path @Dodgerleads us down. I look forward to future chapters!!

Such a loss to the world. Ride on in peace Carlos.

Just finished for the second time and it is still an amazing story. Gary, you are an amazing story teller. If it is not to late, I vote for a revisit to the world of Morningstar!!!

I forgot how emotion pulling this story is as the plot develops. I remember some things in future chapters that are very well crafted into the story and pull even harder. Great writing Gary. It is a joy to revisit Morningstar!!

I'm in for round two of this story. It is beginning just as good as the first time!!

Yes, he is, but in a good way.......I think.

Wonderful story! The epilogue wrapped up everything except the Brian and Tanner connection. A sequel or just another story with Brian and Tanner as the main focus might be a nice way to finish that bit and the other characters could easily be in it for support. Your stories have that "Feel Good" quality that we all need from time to time. Keep writing .

Oh My, What else to say... The reviews below really say it all. I will jump in and really encourage readers to read the Charlie Boone series from the beginning. While it is not required, the series builds from the first to the last. We are able to watch the boys grow into young men and learn some of the secrets of the Booneverse during their adventures. Geron has again outdone himself with his ability to paint a story with words. The skill used to relate places, things, feelings, emotion and general surroundings with words, while allowing the characters to interact is absolutely amazing. This story is a bit different as the guys are out on an actual paying job for their business! We learn some new things and meet some new people and *friends*. Please give this author a chance and read his works, you will not be disappointed!!