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You're welcome AC. You're one of the best, and your work shows the professional level you write at.
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The Drop in Centre
Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
tim, let me read a preview of a new story he's writing. It's fantasy based, and he did a snippet of it as a Status Update the other day. Let me just say, if tim were to publish it, I would go sell a pint of blood to buy it. That was just part of one chapter he shared with me. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Morning everyone. Hope everyone is having a good day. Peace, love, and joy. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
I am going to head off, and try to get more than 3 hours of sleep. Sleep well everyone. -
The Drop in Centre
Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Sleep well, my Brother. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
*grumbles, hisses, and spits* They lost. grr. That tightens the number of wins they need out of the remaining games, to have to most games won in a season. I think they have to win all every game of the rest of the season. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
I'd be on the hunt for little pinholes, nanny-cams, and stuff stuck in vents. Also, this 3rd period, Lightning is now down by two. 4-2 currently. And five fights, and players sent off for game misconducted all within the last 5 mins. -
The Drop in Centre
Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Their plan to come to Tampa, looks like it's falling to pieces. Can't get the private funding they need to put up for Federal and State funds and tax breaks. And St. Pete is acting like they don't want them, and submitted two plans for revitalization in the area. One where the Trop is still standing, the other, with the stadium torn down. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Would you like the Rays, when their contract is up? They suck too. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
But... Isn't Hockey like Canada's national sport? In all seriousness, I get that. I'm not a huge fan of Football. Well, American Football. A. The Buccaneers suck. B. My dad tried to force it on me, before he went complete asshole. I'll watch the Superbowl for the commercials and the half-time show, but don't care about the game. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
The EU is. They passed a law to ban DST, and now the member nations have to approve/ratify/something I'm not sure, for it to go into effect. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
I wish they would friggen act like it. Down 4 to 1 going into the 3rd. Not a happy, A, right now. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Steven Stamkos aka Stammer (#91) was also awarded a Silver Hockey Stick for becoming the Lightning's Franchise career leading goal scorer. 191 consecutive sold out home games. And our goalie just got a penalty 37 seconds into the game. LOL -
The Drop in Centre
Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Same here. Muhahahahhaha EDIT: Damn it.... Can't quote again. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
You know what this means.... Puck drops in 15 mins. Last Lightning home game of the season, and the awarding the President's Trophy tonight. Lightning vs The Capitals #GoBolts -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
When this song pops up on your random playlist, you've just got to share it. -
The Drop in Centre
Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
I sent this to tim and BB. Depending on your frame of mind is how you see it. As a Gay Man, cudious for not judging your brother if he was gay or not. As a Writer, yeah Harry Potter has some plot holes so big, I can drive a battleship through them. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
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The Drop in Centre
Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Oh, that other sport with the same name. Like we all know, there is only one true sport, and that is Hockey. I still find it funny, that the Canadians I know, don't like hockey. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
But it's not Football season. 😝 -
In his style of writing, be it poetry or prose, @Mikiesboy has a way to tug at your heartstrings more so than other Authors. This story is full of emotion from beginning to end, you'll laugh, you'll cry, and you'll get mad. The humanization of the lead character, and through his eyes the others, makes them all relatable, and makes you invested in their life. The series as a whole is a must read.
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The Drop in Centre
Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Sleep Well, my Brother. Sweet dreams. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Hard Cider is really delicious... Angry Orchard is my fave. Also, Sleep well, Wayne. -
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Brayon replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Sleep Well, miss molly -
To Everything There Is A Season
Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in To Everything There Is A Season
The only drawback of Beta Reading, is knowing what's going to happen as the story is posted. Reading the comments that are posted on each chapter, and wanting to respond "wait to you see what's coming," and then stopping your self so you don't spoil it for others. tim, my Brother. You did a fantastic job with Changes, Again. You let us back into world of Donny and Lous, and how they deal with helping a teenage boy that needed someone desperately. It was artfully crafted, had its high points and its low points, and ran the whole gambit of emotions. On several chapters I sent back, were the words, "Damn Onions," as you touched me so much it made me cry. I've said it before, you have a knack of not pulling on the heartstrings, but to yank them with the force of a Titan. The one thing, that Changes and Changes, Again, I loved was how this was Louis' story. It was his story of going through life facing situations he wasn't ready for, and persevering through them. The human element was in this story. That's what I loved the most. You made all the characters relatable, in both stories. Not many Authors can get to that level, and you did it masterfully. I could go on, but you've read all my comments on all fifteen chapters. Excellently done.- 71 comments
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