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  1. Brayon
    I've noticed something about this thread. The vast majority of posters are Authors, like myself. I hope we didn't run off normal members from this thread. (Also, I am firm believer, that to be a good writer, you have to a good reader. I read a lot, in both Digital and Paper formats.)
  2. Brayon
    Thanks, Agent D.
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    A well written and beautiful tale. Love that is eternal is found one Christmas Eve, and persists.
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    Chapter 1

    Brayon commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A very beautiful Christmas story, and I love the twist of the immortals.
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    Thank you, deville!
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    Thank you, Parker.
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    Goodbye Daddy

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Goodbye Daddy

    A very good poem, tim. Lots of emotion in this.
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    Thank you, jp. It was a lingering meh mood I was in. I'm glad you liked it.
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    “You’re no son of mine,” the large man said, with barely contained rage. “I do not have a fucking faggot for a son. Now, get out of my house!” Dexter ran from the house, as his father moved to grab a baseball bat. He snagged the bag, he had prepared ahead of time that sat on the porch and ran to his brother’s car. Dexter hopped into the backseat of the convertible, and yelled, “DRIVE!!!” “NEVER COME BACK... NEVER COME BACK!!! YOU’RE EXILED!!!” His Father yelled as the car rocketed
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    Maple Drive

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Maple Drive

    Loved it, tim. Excellent story, and a great use of the word list prompt. Sad story, but its true about moms.
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    Thanks, Moggie. I actually didn't realize the whole trust factor, until you and tim pointed it out.
  12. Brayon
    Thanks, tim. Needed a kick to the creative juices, and found a list of One Word Prompts, in the Writing Prompts forum. I used an Random-Number-Generator and it landed on "goodbye." My meh-blah mood shows in this one, but it did its job.
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    The city park was quiet, even at this time of year. It was a small park, barely an acre, with concrete picnic tables, underneath equally garish concrete shelters, and only one playground area. An early cold snap had come and had driven people to the warmth of indoors. Those that were in the park this day, were locals, who just came for a few moments with family before they carried on. Except for one. Julian sat at one picnic table and shivered slightly. The cold breeze blew across his smal
  14. Brayon
    A very beautiful poem, tim. A fitting tribute to fallen soldiers.
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    I thank you for reading, and for the comment. It is appreciated. I am glad you are enjoying the story.
  16. Brayon
    I try to interact throughout the site, and I try to support those that have helped me, or supported me. most of the time, I click the react button, and choose an emoji that fits. It's easier to do that when my hands are shaking to much, or in a lot of pain, and cant type that well.
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    Was only planing a prologue, 6 chapters, and an epilogue. I like Devin, Brandon, and Shad'ler, but I have Aeris, William, Chad, Eros, Garric, who needs a little TLC too.
  18. Brayon
    Thank you, Sam. Gonna write about 3 more chapters, and going to focus on them. So, more will be out soon.
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    The Half-Elven Warlock

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story in Fiction

    I rewrote the prologue. Did some clean up on it, along with some minor expansion.
  20. Brayon
    Thank you, jp. You've been really supportive of this project, and reading the chapters before I post. It's really appreciated.
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    Thanks for reading, Moggie. Yeah, something might be up with Victor. kind of wondering myself.
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    Thank you for reading! I was hoping that I portrayed the family bonding, and that they were starting to come together. I'm hoping I did it justice. Yes, Devin has a few things to look out for. Hopefully he'll be smart enough to heed warning.
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    It was Sunday, April 2nd, 2017, and Devin was bored. Both the Doctor and Healer wanted him to stay for observation, and he was stuck in an underground hospital room. After he had awakened from his conversation with the avatar of Mithras – a very confusing affair– he met his father for the first time. They barely had time for introductions before his father and brother were run out of the room so the High Priest, a doctor, and a healer could have a private talk and exam. During this, he learn
  24. Brayon
    Thank you, tim. I'll take you up on that offer.
  25. Brayon
    No, you are not the only one. After, I read one comment, I went back to read over my stories to spot if some of the comments were from certain people, because I thought I was the target of that post. I believe tim said it best: Amen, Brother. Like you told me last night. "Rules are made to be broken." And that to look for creative ways to express stuff.
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