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The only drawback of Beta Reading, is knowing what's going to happen as the story is posted. Reading the comments that are posted on each chapter, and wanting to respond "wait to you see what's coming," and then stopping your self so you don't spoil it for others. tim, my Brother. You did a fantastic job with Changes, Again. You let us back into world of Donny and Lous, and how they deal with helping a teenage boy that needed someone desperately. It was artfully crafted, had its high points and its low points, and ran the whole gambit of emotions. On several chapters I sent back, were the words, "Damn Onions," as you touched me so much it made me cry. I've said it before, you have a knack of not pulling on the heartstrings, but to yank them with the force of a Titan. The one thing, that Changes and Changes, Again, I loved was how this was Louis' story. It was his story of going through life facing situations he wasn't ready for, and persevering through them. The human element was in this story. That's what I loved the most. You made all the characters relatable, in both stories. Not many Authors can get to that level, and you did it masterfully. I could go on, but you've read all my comments on all fifteen chapters. Excellently done.

Thanks, 🙂

Evening. Been a little absent today... when you have five term papers to write... ugh. Got an A in my last class. So, all but one class is an A, and the one outlier is a B... so far. I'm doing fucking awesome. Yes, I'm bragging. My therapist says, I need to be more positive about myself. I hope everyone is doing great.

The last two chapters, @Mikiesboy will be posting today are my absolute favorites.

I did one based on a fantastic prompt by @AC Benus , on one of his O. Henry short story prompt postings. An Upstanding Man. Go check out AC's prompts, and his stories. He's a fantastic wordsmith.

Sleep Well, Mac. Ditto on everything you said.

Excellent work as always, my Brother. It's been an honor and a privilege to work with you on Changes, Again. From chapter 1 to 15, it's been a great story. Your fans will love it.

Notice... @Dodger hasn't posted in here yet, to try and dissuade us from guessing him. With as many times as we've said his name. Hmmmmmm

@MacGreg Take two aspirin and a shot of whiskey, that should help. Or just skip the aspirin and just chug the whiskey. Hope you start feeling better. 🙂

Congrats!

I know who it is now... It's @Dodger

I have no friggen clue, who this is. I can't even hazard a guess.

Sleep well, everyone. I'll be on nightwatch again.

Joke Time: What is Gumby's favorite part of a baseball game?

Morning DiC'ers. An official have a good day, and I hope all is well with people. I'll be around, maybe.

Sleep Well, Mac. It was a nail biter. I was worried when they were up 4 to 2.

Sleep Well, my Brother.

Back later. This is going to be a good game. Two top teams in the league squaring off. Also, it's Jon Copper's 6th anniversary as Head Coach of the Lightning.

10 mins till the Puck Drops. Tampa vs Boston. My TC boys would arguing right now. LOL I still need to find myself a Puck Buddy. I'm the only one here that loves Hockey in the family.

We get paid $15.00 a day for the first three days, then it goes to $30.00 a day for the duration of the trial. Also, if you fail to show up you're held in contempt of court.

Most companies I worked for here in FL, paid for your Jury time. Disney would do it at full pay rate, but no overtime, and suspense of Park privileges for the duration.

It's going okay today. We got the Toddler, he's in a happy mood today. 🙂 Sorry to hear about your difficult customers.

Yes. From Black Desert Online - Remastered. I was given a 30 day pass, liked the game, and it's currently on sale for $5.00 (starts at $10.00 with higher buy-ins for cosmetic items), which my cousin paid for. Buy once, play forever. They have a cash shop, but its all cosmetic items, nothing that gives an advantage.

Pssst. New Avi.

Sleep Well, Mike.