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  1. Brayon
    Thanks, Butcher. I'm happy you enjoyed the story, and thank you for leaving feedback.
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    Thanks, Chris. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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    Thank you very much, tim. Your help, feedback, and putting up with my BS is always appreciated.
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    Is that the stuff made from the Devil's Lettuce?
  5. Brayon
    Back Later... Grumpy and Pissed-off does not make for good posting.
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    I was told not to do Melatonin, due to the meds I'm on. But I am almost to the point of trying anything, doctors be damned.
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    It was 5:00 am when I finally fell asleep. UP at 9:30 am. WTF! I'm around somewhat. Or will be when the fog lifts.
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    Rudolf Steiner was a man stuck in a rut. As a thirty-three-year-old gay man, he felt like love had left him years ago, and he had resigned himself to die alone and unwanted. Rudolf spent his days working as a middle manager in a call center, a corporate drone with no hope of advancement. He made enough to keep himself comfortable in his one-bedroom apartment, with a bit of savings, and lonely dinners out on occasion. Tonight, was his weekly dinner out, but his usual spot was closed for healt
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    MaryGary Sue

    Brayon commented on Comicality's blog entry in Writing World

    A quote from the Article: " "Infodump," "Mary Sue" And Other Words That Authors Are Sick Of Hearing." I feel the same about the term Gary Stu. As the internet meme goes, "KILL IT! KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!!" Don't even get me started on other terms, and rules, that get my goat.
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    Sleep Well, Mike.
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    Thanks, Mike. From what I was looking at, Via Rail seems 1000X's better than Amtrak. I like trains, but I agree. My perfect vacation would be a cross-country car trip... in a Tesla Roadster. I would drive till I need to recharge, and that's where I would stop for the night.
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    I have a couple of questions for my Canadian Brethren. For story research: 1. How is the service on your Canadian Rail System? More specifically, the line called The Canadian which goes between Toronto and Vancouver. 2. Is the prestige class worth it? 3. Whens a good time of year to travel between Toronto and Vancouver? That's mainly it. Unless you have better ideas for a Canadian Vacation.
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    I hate you all! Had to make a grocery run, and they had Pillsbury Cinnabon Cinnamon Rolls on sale... yes, we got a tube. Well, I don't really hate you, my waistline will. LOL
  14. Brayon
    It had to be ate... I sniffled some with the last bite.
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    Chapter 11 of Changes, Again, has been read. Comment added. PMs sent off. Uncle home from taking my Mom stuff, and the grandkid that's staying here for spring break is up and fed. I will see everyone later, as I need to pretend I'm trying to keep myself fit, but in reality I'm burning off the cheesecake I had for breakfast. Don't judge me. Nothing beats a nice slice of cheesecake and a hot cup of coffee. Then third read through of chapter 15, and I start the comments for tim.
  16. Brayon
    Another excellent chapter, my Brother. You know how I feel about the story as a whole. The humanizing elements you use when discussing Louis are fantastic. I like how he felt a little envious, and he told Don about it. I like how Don handled it as well. Taro was a good choice. Having Louis switch office locations was another humanizing element that stood out to me, and when he admits that parenting is going to be tough on him. That stood out to me as well.
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    Morning DiCers. Thanks for letting us know. I haven't really interacted with him, but he's been friendly when we did.
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    I want this house! https://www.zillow.com/homedetails/4090-Loomis-Ave-Boca-Grande-FL-33921/45376203_zpid/ Spending my Millions I'm winning tomorrow night. LOLz. Seriously, window shopping, and looking for houses for a story.
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    Joke Time: What does a Polar Bear eat at a barbecue?
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    Enjoy Dinner, my Brother.
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    Holy, Unicorn-Glitter-Farts, Batman... (aka Happy Tears.) I needed that chapter.
  22. Brayon
    I'll think about it, Mac. That's all I can promise right now.
  23. Brayon
    If you need me, I'll be around later. Going to go Beta Read the final chapter of tim's Changes, Again. I've read it once already, but this is the official read through.
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    I would, but I can't. I knew two of the people that were killed. I'll read what you guys do, but no, nothing from me. It would turn in to something, not appropriate for what AC wants.
  25. Brayon
    Sleep Well, my Brother.
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