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    Sweet and Sour

    Another great chapter, tim. The opening made me chuckle. It's such a normal response to being away from normal routines, that it's familiar to the reader. How Donny handle the CA workers, was excellent. After dealing with DCF workers on several occasions, with different issues, most caseworkers are nice but you'll get one eventually that is unfriendly. More than once I wish I was Donny in those meetings. What the partners are doing for Lous is terrific. It goes to show that Lous is great at what he does. I'm glad the partners decided they didn't want to lose Lous. I could use a Tupperware fully of Snacky Stuff right now.
  2. I just looked at it. It does seem like a good recipe. Just one quick question...
  3. I know the signs well enough, that I need to dip-out for awhile before this Manic phase takes hold. Going to go meditate for a while, and then schoolwork. Back later, and may everyone have a great day.
  4. Traitorous Mind - Hits very close to home. Your words sum up how I feel at times. Both poems are excellent, tim. I get the visual from Traitorous Mind immediately with just the first few words. Shards reminds me of someone who is longing for someone and harkens back to two of your earlier poems, A Walk on the Riverbank and Forevermore.
  5. #739 is talking to me... added to the ever-growing list of prompts that I have no real time for.
  6. I don't know if someone posted this before. I vaguely recall it. But I need some of this Irish Whiskey.
  7. Eggs and Bacon... mmmmmmmmmm
  8. That is odd. I haven't heard of it before.
  9. It is a good word, my Brother. I need to remember it, as there are some Gormless people around here. Now, no more posting before coffee, and will be headed out shortly to visit mom.
  10. Splendid, Dandy, Bright Eyed and Bushy Tail.
  11. Ceiling Cat says Good Morning.
  12. Basement Cat says good night.
  13. *Goes and cries in his beer* Damned if you do, Damned if you don't.
  14. PSA: Man-Buns are just hideous. Give me a pair of scissors.
  15. Our backup goalie is doing awesome.
  16. That it is. I predict there will be at least four fights in 3rd. I wouldn't expect less when #3 Boston plays #1 Tampa. One thing I might agree with the idiot announcers, my boys are tired. They played last night in New York. But damn it! I want them to have an 11 game winning streak.
  17. *Looks at Tampa Chronicles 4, and sees the first six chapters are in Boston.* *Thinks about scrapping the chapters, and starting over*
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