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Brayon

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  1. Ok, back to Beta Reading... on my second pass, and currently on page 8 of 14, and leaving comments.
  2. tim gave me the honor of reading the final chapter a while ago. I agree with AC, two and done. It's a fantastic story, and to quote someone who gives me great advice (and slaps me upside the head at times), "You don't want a story to go on too much. You should have a reason to write a sequel, and then end it."
  3. Yeah, I can see where people would. LOL.
  4. Lot's of goodness in this chapter. I think I've left a shyte-ton of comments, of just how much different parts are making me Fanboy Squee.
  5. Your face when: Beta Reading @Mikiesboy Changes, Again, Chapter 14, and you realize it's made your day a little brighter.
  6. Slightly better day. Mom says Hi to everyone. I'll be around some today, got some schoolwork I have no choice but to do today, once it gets unlocked. In the meantime, off to Beta a Chapter.
  7. There was a store near where I lived as a kid and just gave them away. I took a few, set them on their side stacked, and then bound them with wire for a makeshift shelf.
  8. This chapter had it all. A rollercoaster of emotions. Fantastic chapter, tim. We met Kyle early in the story, and while we only see him there and he's mentioned here, he leaves a lasting impact. It's heartbreaking to see Maxy upset like that.
  9. I forgot what was in this chapter.
  10. Hand it over so I can cut it up. Almost as bad as bags of milk. LOL
  11. When I was Beta Reading this chapter, I had to look up what "gotchies" were. I got it by context, but wanted to make sure. LOL. I love how tim drops that sort of stuff in. Makes it feel really authentic.
  12. I'll be back later. Got some stuff to work on.
  13. It only took me 45 seconds to open it from my email. 😝
  14. I was just thinking, how tim's response reminds me of what Mac would post.
  15. I did say that pic is truthful at times. 😢
  16. Welcome to the GA family, Mike! Congrats on the Classic status.
  17. I found this pic over the past couple of days. Can't remember when. It can be truthful at times.
  18. Thanks, y'all. You're making me tear up here.
  19. Yes... yes, he did. A little after I left GA last night, four hours. Up a bit, then another seven hours.
  20. Thanks, Mac. Hopefully, you won't see my name on the "who's online" list the rest of the night. I'll catch everyone tomorrow.
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