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  1. Freerider
    This was short and sweet. Organised mono-theism has a lot of negative influences.
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    Capriccio

    Freerider commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Capriccio

    Confidence is attractive. Rick is clearly lacking confidence. But I am wondering what more he is missing. It can't be just age, can it? He is not that old anyway. The way he can't get anybody even slightly interested in him makes me wonder.
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    Idee Fixe

    Freerider commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Idee Fixe

    Now why would he do that? Hmm, this intrigues me 😉
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    Idee Fixe

    Freerider commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Idee Fixe

    Where I live they wouldn't even answer a phone for ten bucks 🤣
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    I don't know much about writing poems, but I do know that I liked this one very much!
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    a handsome and available neighbour boy? 😉
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    Walk The Plank

    Freerider commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Walk The Plank

    Poor naive N’than.
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    Small World

    Freerider commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Small World

    I especially liked The Earth. But I am afraid the last line is a prophecy
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    Now that we have cleared that, I can say that I don't agree with you that the relationship was damaging/poisonous. Both boys were new to this and mistakes are being made. Not with ill intent, in my opinion. Go Nathan! (sorry @droughtquake )
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    And you should It seems it all depends on the definition of "toxic"
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    @NimirRaj. Thanks for the explanation. My understanding of a toxic relationship was more of an (physically) abusive relationship. And I was wondering what I had missed.
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    @NimirRaj. Please remind me: what was toxic about the relationship between Robbie and Nathan?
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    Dodger it is amazing how your writing style always draws me in immediately. An interesting new story 👍
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    1982, I would say
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    The Gambit

    Freerider commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Gambit

    No you haven't. Your readers are relating to the characters. Some characters we love to hate
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    Aiden's immediate understanding of Dustin's "it is just sex" seems a bit out of character for him. Or are these just words? He surely can't be in agreement with Justin's little speech and just consider this to be only sex.
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    Deflection

    Freerider commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in Deflection

    Of course not 😜 I'm just stating what he should do. He won't, I know 😎
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    Deflection

    Freerider commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in Deflection

    Aiden is really stupid. He is nice to ppl that use him and fights ppl that care about him. He needs to re-evaluate his behaviour and choices, and soon!
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    Yes, this was at most a 12 feet offence 😎
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    Aiden is pissing me off too! I don't understand the blaming of Justin. He did the right thing, although he should match his reaction better with the offence perpretrated.
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    Cutting Class

    Freerider commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in Cutting Class

    Not?? 😳 🤪
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    Chapter 129 Deja Vu

    Freerider commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 129 Deja Vu

    That may be true for you, but luckily for many others it isn't. I, for one, am still looking forward to every chapter!
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    Expectations

    Freerider commented on northie's story chapter in Expectations

    So you are telling me that the funny, kindhearted man we know on this site does not exist in the real world? I don't believe that. You seem to have respect and compassion for everybody...and that is not like Eric at all. Even though the conversation with your aunt may not have been your brightest moment, I am sure there was no ill intent. But Eric may still surprise us... or not and he is just an *sshole
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    Chapter 8

    Freerider commented on TheZot's story chapter in Chapter 8

    This was very vivid. It brought tears to my eyes. A boy and his dog ❤️
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    They'll just tell him when to breathe in and when to breathe out. He'll be all right 😂 Interesting character this Jo!
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