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    Chapter 52

    chris191070 commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 52

    The house sounds amazing and Tony managed to shock his friends, when he told them he bought it and for how much. I like that he invited his brother, sister and her girlfriend to live with with them. Now let’s find this mysterious squatter.
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    Let's join Detective Saggio who has left the force to become a PI. He spends the first few months doing very little. Then he has a Gentleman come to see him, as he thinks there is a target on him. You'll need to read this discover what happens in this story.
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    Well, that was an interesting case for Detective Saggio, the PI. Shame about the copper losing his leg. Darryl got what he deserved, for his murders.
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    Yeah, a new story/ investigation from the great Detective Saggio.
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    Prologue

    chris191070 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Prologue

    Well, you have me hooked
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    Chapter 22

    chris191070 commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 22

    Apart from the phone call with a bit of dirty talk. This was a tame chapter for our horny threesome.
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    Take care. I hope you feel better soon x
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    Chapter 8

    chris191070 commented on Geron Kees's story chapter in Chapter 8

    There are many unknowns taking place here. Getting in may be easy, but can they get back out.
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    Well where does one begin in reviewing this awesome story from @Lee Wilson. We meet Stephen, a teenager who has been picked on his peers from when he started school, so nearly eight years. Unfortunately his parents move to a new town and Stephen is faced with the prospect of starting a new school, in a few weeks time, of course he will not know anybody or so he thinks. This is where the real action begins, Stephen makes a new friend in Michael, but things are not easy for the boys and there families. They meet a whole load of tormentors, who set out to cause misery, pain and must more. You really need to read this awesome story to discover more. Lee has already promised more to come in Book 2.
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    The perfect ending to a truly fantastic story. I look forward to Book 2 and more of Stephen and Michael, along with there friends and family.
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    What an awesome story, totally unexpected.
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    Grandmother

    chris191070 commented on lomax61's story chapter in Grandmother

    I love Grandma Bridge
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    That's alot of reading.
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    Chapter 51

    chris191070 commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 51

    Aaron and Tony are definitely fresher, than some of the other guests. Well Mike seems to have impressed Carol. With this walk, I figure Tony is about to share his and Aaron's secret about the house.
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    Chapter 14 S3

    chris191070 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 14 S3

    How people manage to eat that much for thanksgiving
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    Troy completes his move and getaway from Luke.
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    Casper is training Eliot in more than one way. I think Mason is in on the plan.
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    Track 13

    chris191070 commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Track 13

    The band as a whole need to get rid of Chris, the manager. He's really manipulating Ryan, but what better way for him to do no work promoting the band.
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    Chapter 10

    chris191070 commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Moving is the worst part, when you have a new house. Joe seems interested in Linda.
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