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I had forgotten I had read it before and reading it again I realized how bad I felt with the way the detective to save another's life put Jaydens life in danger he sent him to the home of known criminals with know protection or care about what happened to him just so he could win his case I didn't like that I won't testify to save anyone if that is how am treated what if his Auntie or cousin had shot him it was not fair the way they treated him even though it worked in the end did really like it
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I had forgotten I had read it before and reading it again I realized how bad I felt with the way the detective to save another's life put Jaydens life in danger he sent him to the home of known criminals with know protection or care about what happened to him just so he could win his case I didn't like that I won't testify to save anyone if that is how am treated what if his Auntie or cousin had shot him it was not fair the way they treated him even though it worked in the end did really like it
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Am sorry that's what u thought I meant I stayed on this site cos of ur story I loved it that much I always say I would watch it if it was a movie cos its a block buster ,its the waiting for the next part that I don't like this are stories I don't want to put down want to keep reading yh great stories always
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I always thought I finished this story are u going to finish it soon? It's really a great story one of my all time favorites on this site
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3rd time reading still think it will be a great sci-fi movie
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I like it but I prefer the first one this one is too tame thank u
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This is the PG version of the first one huh?
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I love it never said I didn't I love all ur stories read aspects of dawn twice and going to read it again it was the first story I read when I joined this platform u made me stay with ur stories so kudos to u
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Oh no anyway great story wish it would have ended though
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I lot of characters at once though difficult to keep track of everyone so far cool
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Thanks for the story beautiful Hopefully the next one will be Harlen finding love
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Finally I was going to ask but decided to keep reading so cool
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There is no justified reason for been a pervert I don't see what is sexually attractive about a kid I don't understand I think they should receive what they give if u rape children u get to be raped as well something really drastic needs to happen to them to make them stop
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This chapter made me cry and .I was so angry I hurt ppl who sexually abuse minor I wish they would tie them up in a room and give me just 5 mins with them they won't come out the same
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Wow I thought it was over and I had read it all a very welcomed addition
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I was totally hoping they did end up together but well it's cool
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Two wrongs don't make a right and so far as there is karma there was no need for what they did it is cool that he has graduated now and doesn't have to bother seeing his school mates again and Alyssa should be ashamed of herself
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Am happy he broke up with Alyssa she was not a good person and a hypocrite
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Jack is a shitty friend he doesn't deserve a friend like Damon one night would not have changed anything u don't throw 16yrs away like that what if he is murdered would he be able to leave with himself am a Christian proud one but I can't do that to anybody no matter who he is it's really horrible
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Great story with a good moral lesson like it thanks
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I have always loved ur stories ur stories was what first introduced me to this platform and I enjoyed it so much I stayed
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Great story but a bit confusing at times u can't tell which characters POV we are on but interesting though
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Driving myself into his Bowels , not the kind of word I associate with sex makes it sound weird not sexy at all hahahaha Bowels haven't heard it in ages
