Story good but messy all over the place so just like dat Dimp vanishes and what is dis language nobody can speak and understand but only the characters I can't even enjoy it ,it's just driving crazy cos I don't understand anything
I love the story line but trying to let us know each persons perspective by putting their names before it comes makes it so difficult to read and are u British or somn too much love love business but I love it though apart from all dat
I ve read a lot of werewolf stories just finished Running with the pack well dis is practically the worst one I ve read u make them all weak no wolf can challenge an alpha and I ve always known there is an Alpha,Beta and omega and then de pack what is a dormant dat can challenge an Alpha unheard of am very disappointed but I love de story line but not de characters