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So, lol, I was going along on the ride this chapter is....tee-di-dee, staying open to the process until: “He put down his knife and fork and hung his head. “I’m sorry Sirs.” he said. “You are sorry for what Sinclair?” TC asked gently. “I should have waited for both of you to start eating before I did.” he answered. “That’s right, thank you for realizing what you did. Part of your submission will be to defer to me and David. You’ll need to remember to wait in situations such as this, especially when we are here or at David’s house. If we go out somewhere with other people, it will be different. You’ll learn that things that we will see as submissive, others will see as you being polite.” TC explained.” SCREEEEEEECCCHHHH!!!! 🛑 I had to get out of the ride for a minute, LOL!! I realize that there are many variations on this theme, (as there are in all relationships)....I got back in, fastened my seatbelt and got back on the road, recognizing that this path is one I can observe but likely would not be able to participate in myself. Looking forward to TC’s explanation later on. It was a good chapter kbois, albeit surprising. It definitely moved things along between the three to the point that sex will not be held back much longer; THAT will be interesting to observe.

I envy you the sunset. Sunsets and stars and sunrises are my thing-Do you get to see a lot of stars where you are? I’m still wrapping my brain around this arrangement; Just from the way things are presented right now, it would seem like TC and Sinclair could be a full time D/s couple, almost exclusive except for David but how would that be fair to David? Doesn’t he deserve his own relationship as well? To me, right now he feels like a third wheel.

Hail no!! 🤣 The three of them (couple +one) might be a viable fix but when TC and David shared subs in college the emotional baggage they now have between them didn’t exist. Dr. Charlotte wanted them to get back to their roots with this exercise, maybe she suggested this as way to lay breadcrumbs to a viable alternative for them....I seem to be short sighted on this path to progress. 🤷‍♀️

Yeah, I’m have throuple adjustment issues myself, though I don’t think it will stay a threesome for long....

Fuck. I almost stopped reading after the info on Sinclair-my first thought before I even finished was “Fuck, he’s perfect for TC”, which doesn’t fit into my agenda at all, lol. BUUUUT, I do know I’m in good hands, story wise. This chapter (which I will have to go over again) has taught me to manage my expectations because I don’t think what I want is going to happen....then again, it might. I am going to reset to neutral and just go along for the ride.

Maybe Tristan’s injuries will be enough to shake Sasha out of his pique and the two of them can get this romance on the road. I am enjoying this story very much, by the way. Thank you for sharing.

Answer for you, kbois.... I trust you to tell a good story. Por que? (I tried to get the upside down question mark in front of “Por” without success) Sorry I forgot to attach this to your comment. 🤭

“I don’t know Lucy....” This scenario is fraught with problems but they are problems that need to be addressed if they have any hope of being in each other’s lives, period. The next chapter will tell the tale....⛓

Yoooo....😳 NONE of those are cool ( though option 7 is plausible within the confines of the story) 🥺 😧

Hoping all is well (because that’s most important) 👋 🙏 Missing updates on this wonderful, engaging story.

It was a good, necessary discussion. I’m pleased and surprised at the openness each had during this first talk, all the cards got laid on the table. I think TC and David belong together, I’d like to see them back together but it’s not possible with both of their dominant tendencies. Navigating a friendship while you’re in love with a person you’ve chosen not to be with is a toughie....I’m going to have a problem with them getting involved with other people, lol so I can’t imagine how either one of them will feel if/when that happens. GOOD chapter.

“He knew she was going to comment and wasn’t surprised when she finally asked “So what was going through your mind while you were being a voyeur?” “I wasn’t a voyeur, I was observing.” David had corrected. She had countered with “Did you get sexual satisfaction observing another Dom working with his sub?” She caught him when he blushed and said “Not during the scenes, I masturbated afterward.” “Then you were a voyeur.” she replied in her clipped British accent, an amused smile lighting up her face.” That was my big laugh this chapter, (po-tay-to/po-tah-to, indeed 😆) David’s friendship with Dr. Charlotte and his reunion with Lyssa and Owen were moving; As a side note, I love both the twins personalities-very much a yin and yang thing going on with each being perfect as they are. The scene is now set for the much needed conversation between David and TC; It was a saddened expectation I had reading David’s conclusion on what he wants going forward but I’m not sure TC is on that same page and then again, the heart wants what it wants, lol. I view David as the more disciplined between the two of them, so he might stick to his guns....we’ll see.

You can let the story of what happened to Mark be a small side story if you don’t want to add it here. I understand why this feels done, as you’ve left the boys (excuse me, men) in a good place in their lives. Mark’s issue will be intriguing because for all that could’ve happened to him with the childhood he had, he’s lived a very fortunate existence, well earned but fortunate. If Mark’s incident involves James, I hope he’s dead.

Well you’ll have to write more, as we need to know what happened to Mark. Thankfully, he’s clearly recovered from it but inquiring minds want to know: I’m not certain which would be worse, a physical or mental attack. We’re waiting for you to share....”Rob” 😉

I’m still holding my opinion on Nick; He’s already not “just a quick fuck”; I’m wondering how far things will go and hope it doesn’t endanger Mark and Rob’s relationship. Boundaries, guys....you’re a couple, not a throuple.

“Again, there's no Covid-19 in their world!!“ ⬆️ That right there is reason enough to read this story, *Sigh*

Nice progress for TC. LOVE his relationship with Owen and Lyssa, he is clearly as important an adult in their lives as their parents and Mike; I wonder how things will work with him and them if he and David aren’t able to get back together. Can TC and David just be friends? Is that what they want from each other? Looking forward to hearing their first conversation with each other, as well as the deets from David’s trip.

I started to and then felt it was better to start from scratch, lol.

In rereading this, I realized I forgot to pose a question originally: who was responsible for taking the pictures and video of Rob and Mark kissing? Were The Sun’s paparazzi that intrusive, or was it obtained elsewhere?

I thought Dr. Charlotte was going to be a psychologist....not only was she a psychologist, she’s a sex psychologist!!!! LOL!! It’s good David wont have to wait to get back stateside for treatment, that he won’t be all pent up; Dr. Charlotte was a true gift to David. 🎁 Looking very forward to David’s next stop. Nice chapter, kbois.

I like TC. I like TC and David together (their connection is amazing) but in the name of love TC made some bad choices, more than David, in my opinion.

When you have the mindset of your way or the high way, you leave no room for compromise; When you don’t bend....you break. While David was shattered by what happened, it was TC who was broken by it. TC and David fell for each other back in college but that romance was thwarted by their tendencies; David looked at it with realistic regret, TC was angry at David back then and never really let it go. (TC’s childhood created an inability in him to compromise on the absolute submission he expected from his partner) When they got back into each other’s lives again, TC was on a mission-to be with David; He knew to be with David, he’d have to break him; It was never with malicious intent of course, TC genuinely believed him being in charge was best, he took David’s flexibility as a sign that he could make a total submissive out of him....when David wasn’t getting with the program, he punished him for it. TC’s love for David was an emotion he couldn’t control so he had to control David. I’m glad TC is getting help and support, it’s particularly sweet it’s David’s family and friends that have rallied around him, they are now his family and friends, too. Our two lovebirds still have a lot of work to do, individually and then together (maybe?)

That was part of the commentary of the person who said you needed an editor. If I noticed an error in your work and wanted to bring it to your attention, I would inbox you, not post it here. 😊

While I notice a grammatical error here and there, you do very well. Interesting the one mentioning you needed an editor didn’t edit their own comment: “At leastNash is trying to make admins,” should be “At least Nash is trying to make amends”

Good for Penn. He needed an adjustment in the way he thought of his life and Nash. At this point, I want them both to be happy, even if it means they won’t be together BUT two weeks in Hawaii?? Well lol, we’ll see what happens; Should there be a reconciliation, their relationship will be even better than it was before. Nice development Mrsgnomie and I look forward to the next chapter.