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You are the cutest. I was a nerd too but more geared toward English; Math was actually my weakest subject. I waaas being sarcastic, only because the action in the chapter made the read so fast. I personally like a chock full chapter....you’ve yet to disappoint in anything I’ve read of yours, this chapter may be the only one I jokingly took issue with, which is a testament to how good your story is.

WHAT?!?! C’mon Ethan!! This has to be the shortest chapter you ever wrote, lol!! Your twists and turns are excellent (and credible). More please....

Need more....

I loved this chapter for a couple of reasons: Story wise, I see better how this trio can work. It is nice to see them gelling as their own family unit, each getting something vital to themselves out of the union. The other reason I love this chapter is the introduction of Morgan; This is the second story I’ve read in as many weeks that includes a transgender character and I lauded the previous storyteller for including this often overlooked (and still largely misunderstood) aspect of human sexuality. Morgan’s situation differed from the other character I read about but the comparison brought home the point how varied and unique each individual case is; I applaud your exploratory open mindedness in this story as a whole. 👏 Approximately 12 more weeks until the calendar turns another page....here’s an ☂️ to help you weather your storm and a 🌈. They have a wealth of spiritual meanings associated with good luck, transitions and new beginnings. Wishing you and yours the best.

We’ll see if it is Alistair being misunderstood or Alistair previously participating in some entitled, spoiled rich kid cruelty that he’s now remorseful about.

What type of a twisted person would set up so elaborate a ruse?!?! This is devastating.

“How I Accidentally Slept With My”...Pen Pal? ...First Love?

May the tide of “none of it very good” turn into “much better” soon. This was an informative and progressive chapter in that I was able to understand TC’s mindset more and I’m finally starting to see this threesome as viable. You know, I consider myself a possessive lover; When my heart and body are involved, I don’t like to share and that’s what I was thinking when I was reading this chapter; Then I thought that love multiplies, it doesn’t divide and that I really can’t say that I would rule a situation like this out if I really cared about the people involved....but it would be a stretch. I wish you good blessings, kbois.

Okay, kbois-san.

I was actually wondering about the lead in their overall relationship; I was thinking TC was “running the show”, so to speak, with feedback from David here and there, as David doesn’t have to or want to dominate someone all the time-it really is a need for TC.

It was indeed foregone that Sinclair would pass the “Lyssmus test”, 😄 (great pun, btw). Hell, I’m ready for some play and I’m not even Sinclair, lol!! I take it it will not be full on “activities” as it seems there are still some explanations and understandings to get out (I’m still waiting for TC’s explanation of the training process for submissives). I’m liking the dynamic developing between David and Sinclair, I just wonder if it will confuse Sinclair since he seems to need and respond to the stricter guidelines under TC. I take it TC is the lead in this, mainly because David doesn’t have the need for dominance outside of sex?

I love this!! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Well, there was definitely chemistry between these two before whatever happened happened. Is it “How I Accidentally Slept With My...Rapist”?

You’ve already shown TC to be sweet, loving, loyal and deeply caring, it’s just his desire to have an absolute say over his partner’s life that chafes. Granted, it is a consensual agreement, it’s just an eye opener how absolute a variation of this lifestyle can be. I hope your headaches weren’t migraines, they are a part of my life, though fortunately not as severe as before. 🤕🤢

Yeah, I could NEVER be with TC, lol. But for the sadism part, David is much more flexible. I hope you’re feeling better and I‘m looking forward to the meet and greet.

I’m caught up on this interesting, engrossing tale. Fergus, like most self involved, self deluded people, is his own worst enemy; His posturing, from the way he dresses, to the way he rules, speaks of strength born from insecurity and fear-that type doesn’t have have deep roots if you know where to pluck. Real strength never needs to yell or have attention drawn to it, it is simple and recognized by it’s mere existence. It’s a shame Jimmy is so hungry for a pack, as glimpses into his past make me suspect he is an alpha in his own right; His attraction to Sawyer makes me long for them to be a pack of two, yet I suspect this story will have a lot of brutal challenges before our lovebirds get a happy ending (if at all). Fergus’ lust (I dare say love his self hate won’t allow him to recognize) for Jimmy will make his sadistic path to bring Jimmy into his pack even more so if he senses a rival. I fear for Sawyer’s safety and well-being, while looking forward to the HOT first time sex he and Jimmy will have , lol. 🔥💥

I’m glad you’re getting there. Thank you also for understanding my meaning: while I wrote “TC topping for David”, I did in fact mean David topping TC.

I hope your headaches have eased. And the world turns....🌎 There was something I meant to touch upon in the previous chapter: How did TC feel topping for David? I know it was the result of a bet they made, I was surprised it was even a consideration for him, as he strikes me as an absolute top. Would that be something he'd let David do again? (I know it's not even a consideration with Sinclair, lol) Another thing I meant to touch upon was the issues both TC and Sinclair had with their fathers, yet another thing to bring them closer. "Triad? Three-way? Don’t even suggest throuple. I hate that term. Good for TV but not for real life.” I wonder where that perspective came from? 🤔 Feel better. 💐

Intriguing setup. I look forward to reading more.

So Jonah proved he’s good at his job by finding an overlooked discrepancy, his direct supervisor does the wrong thing in covering it up and Jonah has to look for new employment?!?! Either relationships between co workers are allowed or it isn’t, that gray area is a cop out. Reporting chain and confidentiality be damned, Jonah did the right thing all around....in trying to follow protocol, he didn’t even want to tell Brian and he has to pay? That’s pretty fucked up.

I think we have access to that gut check but we’ve been taught to rely on more external factors for our decision making process or more “head over heart”. I’m realizing as I get older that gut check is actually an ideal blend of both.

So, lol, I was going along on the ride this chapter is....tee-di-dee, staying open to the process until: “He put down his knife and fork and hung his head. “I’m sorry Sirs.” he said. “You are sorry for what Sinclair?” TC asked gently. “I should have waited for both of you to start eating before I did.” he answered. “That’s right, thank you for realizing what you did. Part of your submission will be to defer to me and David. You’ll need to remember to wait in situations such as this, especially when we are here or at David’s house. If we go out somewhere with other people, it will be different. You’ll learn that things that we will see as submissive, others will see as you being polite.” TC explained.” SCREEEEEEECCCHHHH!!!! 🛑 I had to get out of the ride for a minute, LOL!! I realize that there are many variations on this theme, (as there are in all relationships)....I got back in, fastened my seatbelt and got back on the road, recognizing that this path is one I can observe but likely would not be able to participate in myself. Looking forward to TC’s explanation later on. It was a good chapter kbois, albeit surprising. It definitely moved things along between the three to the point that sex will not be held back much longer; THAT will be interesting to observe.

I envy you the sunset. Sunsets and stars and sunrises are my thing-Do you get to see a lot of stars where you are? I’m still wrapping my brain around this arrangement; Just from the way things are presented right now, it would seem like TC and Sinclair could be a full time D/s couple, almost exclusive except for David but how would that be fair to David? Doesn’t he deserve his own relationship as well? To me, right now he feels like a third wheel.

Hail no!! 🤣 The three of them (couple +one) might be a viable fix but when TC and David shared subs in college the emotional baggage they now have between them didn’t exist. Dr. Charlotte wanted them to get back to their roots with this exercise, maybe she suggested this as way to lay breadcrumbs to a viable alternative for them....I seem to be short sighted on this path to progress. 🤷‍♀️

Yeah, I’m have throuple adjustment issues myself, though I don’t think it will stay a threesome for long....