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Don’t feel bad about being a word nerd, I am too, lol. ✋

Oh man. Did Eric strike again? Only one way to find out. Damn. Damn. Damn. And, as much as I like a possessive man, I think Ren is a bit too much.

Hmm.... This is chapter 9 and there are 20 chapters so of course this wasn’t smooth sailing and we need to know what drove Jonah to flee to Italy. Eric doesn’t stand a chance, I wonder when he’ll realize that and Chris’ “pathetic self” left a little cause for concern.

Eric is a big, stinky piece of shit. 💩 Chris got what he deserved and got off very lucky to keep Jonah as a friend. Ren deserves the chance to state his case and Jonah, for all the growing up he needs to do, should be happy, it’s time for him to move on and take a chance and cut his hair and get that picture off the fridge, lol.

Nice, LOL. Meant to mention before-I love his name: Jonah de Rossi. Then to find out his sister’s name is Stefania de Rossi? Very pretty. Bravo to Michael’s desensitization, lol!!

Alessandro and Michael- perfect antidotes for Ren and Eric (what is he telling Chris about his reasons for being ALL in Jonah’s business?)

Between oranges, olives and lemons, I’m salivating and not from the produce, lol. I’m a born and bred city girl but I think there is some farm country gene in me because living in places like that....WOW. Thank you for having Jonah visit there. WHY would Jonah want to hang out with Chris?!?! He knows he’d bring Eric, which is bad enough, to have Ren there made it worse and they all deserve Michael’s “assist” in giving Jonah a great evening; If they could’ve kept it strictly friends, J&M could’ve had a real good night together (he’s not out of your league, Michael, ) Your story synopsis gave the indication Eric might have some boundary issues but I give two fucks about him or Chris, excuse my French (heck of a wake up call for Chrissy boy, though) Good. *He gets what he gets and he can’t get upset* The fallout from Michael and Jonah’s production will be verrrrryinteresting....

Like?!?! Let’s not forget the large tattoo that starts at his neck (and I suspect stops on his heart). Dude’s in looooove. He already thinks of Jonah as his: “Yes, I got it for Valentine's Day..." And before I knew it I blurted out, "Oh. From your partner?" He shook his head. "No, for him. The dove represents his name." "Ahh, so it's really a dove." Then I snickered. "Your boyfriend's name is Dove? Really?" "Yes." Jonah really is clueless, smh, I bet his eyes are light violet, lol!!

Mine means “God is gracious” ☺️.

They’re perfect for each other, lol. I bet their first time sex will make him forget Eric’s name, lol!! I am intrigued how Ren knows so much about Jonah enough to be so deeply in love with him and Jonah didn’t even know of his existence.

“Somewhere during my flight to Catania, while writing my journal, I had realized no matter where you run, there you are.” TRUTH⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️ I’m liking Ren and his intense focus on Jonah, “Run baby run. When I catch you…“ 😁 Since we’re backtracking, I’m thinking Jonah’s latest flight involves Ren, somehow. Living amidst an old orange grove sounds heavenly and impulsivity should be considered a minor sin if it isn’t tempered with maturity. Much as I like Jonah, seems like he’s author of that minor sin right now, lol.

As engaging as you are making this situation, I don’t think it’s cool that Chris and Eric are dating; I was shocked in the previous chapter that Chris was even consulting Jonah on whether or not his dance moves would interest his long term ex boyfriend (even if it might have been Ren behind the provocation) Unless Chris got some type of previous okay from Jonah (and that is a very shaky permission slip) he should consider himself lucky they are still friends....or maybe this will change as the story progresses. If I were Jonah, I wouldn’t be running away, I’d be cutting people out (and they’d be Chris and Eric shaped).

That thought crossed my mind, too.

This is a very engaging story; No doubt little Tristan’s father is Peter and he’s pining over losing Big Tristan. What a precious soul for Little Tristan’s biggest Christmas wish to be for his father and not for himself. Peter has some explaining to do, something tells me he’ll get the chance to do it.

What a rich chapter of revelation. ”Each one must give as he has decided in his heart, not reluctantly or under compulsion.” When I read these words, I marveled over their beauty and that lead me to the thought of how special the book it came from is-not because it is the literal word of God but because it is the word as it was received by the devout....whether given to him on tablets from a mountain or through whispers in times of sorrow, comfort and joy. It’s open to manipulation but there is a clear thread of right and wrong that rings through and true. And that was before I saw your passage: “But, I don’t think anyone can speak for what God thinks—not even a preacher—but everyone seems to think they have the right. Lots of things in the bible don’t make a lick of sense to me, not if I know God like I think I do. For sure there’s comfort in some of it, but men wrote that book… not the Lord hisself.” Then. THEN, there was this: “It wasn’t all a dream. I did do that.” “Did what?” “I kissed you… when I thought you were dead.” I KNEW IT❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️ LMAO❣️❣️❣️❣️ Thank you for the confirmation Coy’s confession of his kiss to Boone also showed how one’s realization of who they are takes different paths....some know right away....others come to a latent recognition after a search of the soul that may involve denial and suppression. The conversation between these two was overdue and gives Boone faith a smidge bigger than a mustard seed for the future he wants. There are worse things than sharing a bedroll to keep loneliness away....maybe the day will come that it is more than that but for this night, it’s enough. 🍻 What will the dawn bring for our intrepid explorers? How much longer until Larskspur? Will Coy and Boone find what they’re looking for when they get there? *Tune in next week to find out in the latest, exciting installment of....Sidewinder* 🐍

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🤨 Uh Huh....

The heart wants what it wants and their ain’t much that can be done about it. Loving someone is never shameful, even if they never know or don’t return your feelings, so it saddened me that Boone felt shame mooning over Coy (even though Coy was showing him the moon-had to inject some humor, even if it was corny) While Boone took that dunk in the river, it seems like Coy was the one baptized anew, he is more adventurous as he comes across as a new person or as Boone referenced, the person he was before his brother held him down and back. Grouse? Sounds more appetizing than rabbit, though there are feathers. Randoms: I love trees and vegetation so enjoyed the boy’s trek through the woods....Hoping Boone’s nightmares lessen if they don’t disappear now that they’ve revisited the “scene of the crime”.... Will the boy’s grouse dinner “taste like chicken”? What other idyll await in this Garden of Eden? What is that “something behind the man’s eyes he couldn’t get a fix on”? *Tune in next week to find out in the latest, exciting installment of....Sidewinder* 🐍

These type of details flesh out stories and characterize the environment, showing how they can serve as protagonist or antagonist to the main characters.

The skinning of the rabbits, though obviously necessary, grosses me out. There are chickens who’s necks need to be wrung and feathers plucked, the dismantling of a whole cow, pig or deer for hides and meat....I think if I lived during frontier times I may have become a vegetarian, lol.

Blue has to get credit for his part in the rescue....one could also say (as Coy pointed out) that Blue also should get the blame for the accident so maybe it’s a wash? 🤷‍♀️ 😄 I like to think under the great canopy of stars these two explorers sleep under every night, there is a twined or conjoined set....one that gives off more blue light, one that gives off more green, that together shine brighter than they ever could apart; That will guide them to a place of promise for the future.♥️♥️ That was my fanciful way of saying I’m very happy Coy and Boone are back together, lol. I know the stars change with the seasons but I wish for that dual star to be their guide and guard on their journey because like your bible quote and my romanticizing, these two are simply better together and I dare to say that Coy may be made more like Boone than either of them know, even if he’s only made that way for Boone. Even if he isn’t, friendship like theirs is more like kinship and is a rare blessing, even today. 🍻 Larkspur ahead!! What direction (geographical and otherwise) will our intrepid travelers take? Will the rest of their journey be drama free? Will Blue and Boone kiss and make up? *Tune in next week to find out on the latest, exciting installment of....Sidewinder* 🐍

I loved reading of Jihan bonding with the worthy members of the Miran family as well as the loyalty his own family and network show him, yet dread stayed in my stomach anticipating what the evil trio has planned. It seems the next chapter will tell what treachery awaits. I can only hope for unknown reinforcements to thwart and fully expose all who need to be so that they can be punished accordingly.

True love wins over miscommunication, meddling families, bigger penises and clueless exes. ♥️♥️ Nash wasn’t the only one tied up in Knotts with this story; Beautifully done. Thank you for sharing Mrsgnomie, your characters are compelling.

I agree.

Hi Gary: Sorry it took me a couple of days to pen a comment. You titled this chapter “Faith and Angels” and it fits-Coy and Boone are angels of faith to each other, the surest, steadiest bond either have ever had; It was that faith in their bond that had Coy follow Boone to work out their relationship (and inadvertently save Boone’s life) 🙏 Boone’s lack of family ties made obvious how important his connection was to Coy; He might even have believed he loved Coy more in every way, since Coy had roots and isn’t “made like him”. Though the equality of their affection can be debated, I don’t think Boone can doubt now how important he is to Coy and it’s not because he’s all he has left. I give props to Sheriff Willard and his matchmaking skills, for that is clearly what he was doing (clear to me, anyway, lol) The journey ahead will be better because they’re together and interesting because there is discovery and exploration ahead (and I ain’t just talking about the landscape). Nice job, 🍻 Does Coy have romantic feelings for Boone? If he does, will he talk about or act on them? What other challenges await our intrepid duo? *Tune in next week to find out in the latest, exciting installment of....Sidewinder* 🐍