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LOL!! So I guess that’s a “no” on the intentional Elsa name.

Oookaaayyy. I had to try, lol.

I changed up the commentary but it’s still complimentary. 😊 You’re getting as fast as Gary in reading these, lol.

Your eloquence never fails, what a beautifully broken down review. I highlighted this part because I had “Frozen” on the mind too, I was going to ask if that was the inspiration and decided against it....since it is out there, what say you, O great Wordsmith? Did this sojourn to the tundra make this tie in irresistible?

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I was pleased and this was a pleasant surprise. Dawson is a good man and he deserved this ending....so it seems, does Brent. Those two seem like they can do anything together; Perry never stood a chance. Regarding Perry, slick personalities like his who are all surface and no substance are a wonder to me-are they really that good at fooling people or are they really that good at finding the right people to fool? To hear Brent tell it, he already had doubts about Perry even when he was confessing his feelings to Dawson; To see the two personalities interact, I have to wonder what it was that drew and kept Brent interested. Brent did mention his strong powers of persuasion, I imagine that can talk people into almost anything. You had me going, Gary....there was no clear indication initially if Brent would tell Dawson to stay or go (Brent’s got a pretty good poker face). As I stated earlier, I’m very happy for these two. Dawson being definitively ruled out as a love interest for Chase makes the future more intriguing; A reunion with Hank is definitely out of the question for now, then again there is nothing that says Chase has to be with anyone right now. Thank you for the double chapter, I look forward to seeing where Chase is next week. (Tomorrow? Friday?) 😊 🍻 Blessed safety to everyone. 🍀

I’ve already stated how much I loved WLM v4. You have improved upon perfection, Dayne; This chapter rocked!! I can’t wait for each update but understand the “distractions” of life. Take your time; I’ll be waiting here like a hooker at Fleet Week 😁. It’ll be worth it....especially when the results are this stellar. The best to you and your loved ones. Stay safe.

Woo Hoo❣️❣️ Seeing chapter 5 update made my day❣️❣️ I’ve liked the improvements so far. Blessed safety to you and your loved ones. 💛

I see a corona side effect are going to be hella long comment pages, lol. There are worse ways to spend time....🤷‍♀️

You have written two engaging characters with a lovely chemistry, I’m enjoying watching them fall in love. Blessed safety to you and I look forward to future chapters.

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Lol. Her soliloquies were usually spot on, too.

So painfully, sadly true. 💔

Yeah, the call to Ray is highly suspicious to me, it’s what makes me wonder how long and far down bitter Betty boulevard he’s going to go before he seeks healthier ways to deal with his pain.

LOL!! Ya know... Perhaps he’s trying to make the holes in other places match the size of the hole in his heart. 🙁 💔 He wouldn’t be the first to look for love in all the wrong places; My sympathy only goes so far because of what he did to Chase. Rightly or wrongly, Hank is a big boy and can make his own decisions, so is Kevin. Kevin was supposed to be both Hank and Chase’s friends and it’s the disrespect of that that has me calling him Kevhoe. If I’m cheated on, my beef is with my partner, who is supposed to be committed to me....unless the other party is a family member or friend-with two commitments betrayed, then it’s time to open a can of whupass on EV-ER-RY-BO-DY. 🤬

He doesn’t need my help, LOL!!!!

Kevin is definitely hurt; People handle their hurt in different ways. Kevin could spiral out from this and become vindictive....it may not be his rock bottom. I hope it’s a hard lesson learned, for his sake.

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I like the fancy way you said horny, LOL!!

Yeeeeaaaahhhh. 🙄 (you know what this means now, right?)

Well said.

I too, think he’s always been attracted to Hank and decided to act when the break up happened. ”Go big or go home” made him look like a stalkerish hoebag. Timing, man!! BUT.... Kevin’s still coming from a place of his own hurt, it was wrong of him to think being with Hank would have cured that, for so many reasons. I can’t believe I’m sympathetic to Skank....maybe it’s because he got what he deserved for doing what he did. 🤷‍♀️