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Chapter 7 - Dear Future Husband
FanLit commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Dear Future Husband
“....I was standing in the room looking for a pair of underwear when I heard the deepest voice ever. It was like sand and gravel covered in dark molasses. I always enjoyed his voice; it was rich and meaningful but his morning voice—wowee. I don’t think words ever sounded so delicious.“ “....You say it like it’s a bad thing. You better keep talking.” I abandoned the search for clothes for the chance to savor the last fleeting moments of Mr. Morningvoice.” “....Penn laughed, which was also incredibly sexy in the morning, then rolled on his stomach and buried his face in the pillow.“ So in rereading this chapter (because I like it so much, tee hee) this exchange jumped out at me: was Nash naked listening to Penn’s sexy morning voice and did Penn react to Nash’s nakedness?!?! 😮 🤞🍆- 36 comments
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Chapter 7 - Dear Future Husband
FanLit commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Dear Future Husband
❤️ Great chapter. Exactly all that needed to happen. What world do Lee and Paul live in that they thought this could stay quiet and what the fuck is up with Paul, period? It seems like more than spoiled, entitled behavior but then again, that’s enough. (I didn’t know he was married?!?!) I wish Nash had split up his and Lee’s bank account but his thinking might be, he doesn’t have the most money in it so no biggie. “A problem shared is a problem halved”. Whew 💨 I’m so grateful for Nash’s new support system, which is 1,000 times better than his old one. Is this it now? Can Nash start to heal or will Lee show him who he truly is? (Please, if there’s a fight, Nash needs to whoop some ass 💪) Even if there is more to come (😳) this chapter made me very happy.- 36 comments
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In this world, there’s only one “Nan”. Grandma Lily seems more elegant than Nan so I think another name would fit.
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The Tracy reveal is going to be big. I can’t imagine any way that will go down well with Blu. Btw....did I miss how Jonathan is Blu’s bio son when he didn’t have sex with a woman?
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You saw what Ma said but I high five you for the effort, lol. (Well, high ten) 🙌
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Chapter 6 - Little Bit More Than Friends
FanLit commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Little Bit More Than Friends
“Once and for all their beautiful town will be fag free or they would die trying.” “The idea of their faith living on for many more years excited both men. They just might have to find a choir or church boy to enjoy themselves when they got back.” Do they want to kill Nessay because they are jealous he can own up to his homosexuality....because what exactly would they be doing with a choir or church boy, play Uno?!?! It’s been a while since I read this, nice to revisit. -
There isn’t a pouty lip emoji but that’s what I’d put here, lol.
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If that’s a request to post faster....I second that. ☺️
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If that’s a request to post faster....I second that. ☺️ This is supposed to be a response to Bard Simpson, oops.
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The Empress’s childhood no longer holds as an excuse, she is Empress and instead of shoring up her husband and “their” court, she consistently undermines him and keep things divided. (Even though I’m no big fan of Kiyan) Her father’s death in her stead for her perfidy wasn’t enough? Soon her actions will be such that it won’t matter that she is empress and mother of the next ruler; She has met her match in Jihan. The only satisfaction I will have for Renai Countess if she chooses to do the Empress’s bidding is her falling of one of the cliffs at Silver Shore. It took me about 36 hours off and on to binge read this story so I am now caught up and ready for more, 🙂. lilansui has a wonderful hand creating chemistry between her couples and their family and friends as well.
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Do you have a medical background? I don’t remember if you previously mentioned it but you are quite proficiently detailed when it involves the aftermath and aftercare involved when you put one of your characters in peril; All the questions I would have had as a parent and reader were covered; If you aren’t, you have excellent research skills. The cohesion of the five dealing with their individual and joint concern over Lyssa was wonderful to witness; I shudder to think how much harder attitudes and disharmony would have made this on everyone. David and TC do have some things to iron out in their relationship, both consciously and subconsciously....that doesn’t negate how absolutely instrumental TC’s support is for David right now. (I’m still trying to decipher the approval TC gave of David’s meal choice at the sports bar-was that just TC being TC, where he would be extra alpha in a time of crisis?) Even though Lyssa was the victim of the accident, the road to recovery will be long for everyone, as they were all wounded in their own way by this and will be focused on being the best support system for Lyssa going forward. (I hate thinking of Lyssa’s reaction to Emily’s death ☹️) While I was reading about the family’s visitation to Lyssa, my thought went to how were they allowed in two at a time and where were their PPE, forgetting you probably wrote this story long before the world changed, lol. Thank you for the welcome distraction a good read provides and please stay safe. 🙏
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Chapter 6 - Trying to Cope
FanLit commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Trying to Cope
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Chapter 6 - Trying to Cope
FanLit commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Trying to Cope
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Chapter 6 - Trying to Cope
FanLit commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Trying to Cope
“Penn took a bite of Pho and sucked the noodles down. “But there are more important things happening here. The job has always been an escape; my excuse to run away. I’ve done it for so long that it’s all I know. I decided it was time to change my investments.” ....”Sounds like I’ve been making the wrong investments,” I murmured. Penn looked at me questioningly but I pushed forward. “What kind of changes are you making?” “Hmm, mostly where I’m spending my time and who I’m spending it with.” Naive Nash. Naive, sweet Nash. I guess it’s hard to recognize you’re an investment when you feel like shit. I’m so glad he told Penn what was going on, I still don’t get Lee’s game and what the fuck does Paul have a right to be pissed at Nash about?!?! He’s been fucking Nash’s slut husband (be careful Paul, what some one does with you, they’ll do to you; then again you deserve whatever your jealous, vengeful ass gets-if you sleep with dogs, you’ll wake up with fleas) and won because Nash is out of the picture, hurt and humiliated....unless that’s not all he plans to do. Nash explaining why he’s doing the lunch and counseling with Lee makes sense from his perspective; At the same time, Lee isn’t owning accountability for anything he’s done and Nash doesn’t deserve the torture of keeping up appearances. Lee is the big breadwinner, how bad will things go for him to look like a hoe, even in their small town? I don’t think Lee was ever who Nash thought he was (“I never liked Lee. I didn’t like him when we were kids and I don’t like him as an adult.”) we all know love is blind. Now that Penn knows, things are going to be different. I just wish the other shoe of crap to be thrown at Nash will drop already. I wish you posted daily....twice daily. 😊- 33 comments
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Aww C’mon!! Lyssa?!?! You’re a meanie but a well written meanie. (That’s why I can only put that I read this, this development did not make me happy.) 😟 I love the interaction between the four adults, how TC and Mike respect Renee and David as co parents and friends and that David and Renee both appreciate their moving on with other people; Having grown, responsible Owen turn back into David’s little boy when he saw his father made something get into my eye (damn allergies) So....are David and TC the only ones not aware that they are in love with each other? Their emotional intimacy is such that they should hopefully be able to find a middle ground, as the D/s world for these two extend beyond sex. 🤞
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Chapter 5 - The New House is No Home
FanLit commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 5 - The New House is No Home
I suspect the Knotts brothers knew something about Lee and his extramarital activities or something else he’s been sneaky about; I’m thinking Lee is not quite the “nice”, “innocent,” “gentle” husband Nash thought he’s had all this time. I’m sure if the Knotts Bro’s and Co. got wind of the break up, they’d kidnap Nash and keep him in the bosom of their circle; Then again I’m afraid whatever Mrsgnomie has planned might alienate them from Nash, too. 😕.- 26 comments
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Chapter 5 - The New House is No Home
FanLit commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 5 - The New House is No Home
I’m thinking Penn.- 26 comments
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Chapter 5 - The New House is No Home
FanLit commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 5 - The New House is No Home
Fuck you, Lee. Back stabbing bitch. Lee has already proven he can’t be trusted; Nash is being naive in giving in to Lee’s demands to wait six months and keep things quiet. Lee and his lover are clearly planning something, something not good for Nash. I only hope that he realizes something is up before that and blows them up but I’m thinking that’s not how you’ve planned it, lol. Even knowing that Lee was going to prove a faithless prick, I was still so upset reading this. I wonder if Paul is using Lee or if they are equally complicit in whatever they’re planning. So now the fall has started. I wish you posted daily....twice daily.- 26 comments
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The Knotts brothers know something about Lee....if they like Nash as much as they do, they should tell him; Either way something is going to come out to break Nash and Lee up. The interest the Knotts brothers have in Nash is so intriguing, it seems more than just genuine like; I wonder if they will support him when the shit hits the fan. Whatever you have coming for Nash makes me sad, he seems like a really nice guy.
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This was a surprisingly nice start to TC’s visit with his parents (though it isn’t over yet 😉); I’m glad David was there as support/buffer. I hope if TC does have the heart to heart with his parents, it works to better his relationship with them (and maybe alter his perception about what kind of future he can have with David). Thank you for my you learn something every day tidbit-a group of stingrays are called a fever.
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Feel free to post often. ☺️
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Is Lee faithful? What is with the Knotts’ determination to have Nash socialize with them so much and without Lee? Is Ryan playing matchmaker? I'm very intrigued....
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TC and David are coming to that fork in the road, I’m wondering how divergent (or convergent) their paths will be. I also know that TC and his father will butt heads; That might prove detrimental to being flexible with David, as it’s his father’s heavy handed attitude that birthed TC’s dominant nature. I’m from the Northeast and did college for a couple of years in Southwest Georgia. Summer is my least favorite season so guess where I didn’t stay? Lol. There isn’t enough inducement to make me willingly deal with that heat and humidity on a regular basis. The winters were decent....even got some 30 degree mornings a time or two.
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Blu reminds me of Nan when he’s dealing with Sage.
