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I was thrilled that Dawson reached out to Chase, it shows his intent to try and keep in touch; It’s easy to do now....time will tell if they are able to maintain contact. I think they will, even if it may be infrequent with all that Dawson and Brent will be doing and Chase, too. Real life gets in the way of the best of intentions but I sense a dedication to this friendship that may stand the test of time. Chase and Hank’s conversation showed progress-they didn’t end up in an argument and Hank even apologized, which shows growth past his perspective. I was looking forward to Chase and Stacy having a nice evening together; I for one didn’t appreciate Carlos and Trey crashing the evening, especially at Hank’s behest; To me, that indicates they and all their collective friends did take sides and the side was Hank’s. Chase showed his new maturity in making amends with Carlos, I personally would’ve told him to fuck off. I might have kept some kind of contact with Trey but Carlos and the rest of them can go blow bubbles. It’s understandable that Chase missed them, (as he would, thinking they were real friends) that exile would’ve made me realize otherwise. Chase’s guilt is still present, even with the strides he’s made....I think it’s why he accepted the ostracism-he felt it was appropriate punishment. The only reason I approve of Hank trying to do damage control is because he’s the one who actually damaged Chase’s reputation with their crew; Had he listened to Chase that evening or subsequently, things wouldn’t have progressed the way they did. This was a chapter of movement but there is still a lot more miles on this trip. Hank isn’t in my bad book but he isn’t in my good book either. 🤷‍♀️

I LOVE these names❣️❣️ Giovanni especially (I wanted to name my daughter Giovanna).

What a lovely wedding. So is Theo is past spy or a current spy? That’s quite an interesting thread you wove in.

This was a distressing development but at least you put them in a best case scenario about it.

This would have been a wonderful ending. I’m curious to see where next you take them.

LOL!! So I guess that’s a “no” on the intentional Elsa name.

Oookaaayyy. I had to try, lol.

I changed up the commentary but it’s still complimentary. 😊 You’re getting as fast as Gary in reading these, lol.

Your eloquence never fails, what a beautifully broken down review. I highlighted this part because I had “Frozen” on the mind too, I was going to ask if that was the inspiration and decided against it....since it is out there, what say you, O great Wordsmith? Did this sojourn to the tundra make this tie in irresistible?

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I was pleased and this was a pleasant surprise. Dawson is a good man and he deserved this ending....so it seems, does Brent. Those two seem like they can do anything together; Perry never stood a chance. Regarding Perry, slick personalities like his who are all surface and no substance are a wonder to me-are they really that good at fooling people or are they really that good at finding the right people to fool? To hear Brent tell it, he already had doubts about Perry even when he was confessing his feelings to Dawson; To see the two personalities interact, I have to wonder what it was that drew and kept Brent interested. Brent did mention his strong powers of persuasion, I imagine that can talk people into almost anything. You had me going, Gary....there was no clear indication initially if Brent would tell Dawson to stay or go (Brent’s got a pretty good poker face). As I stated earlier, I’m very happy for these two. Dawson being definitively ruled out as a love interest for Chase makes the future more intriguing; A reunion with Hank is definitely out of the question for now, then again there is nothing that says Chase has to be with anyone right now. Thank you for the double chapter, I look forward to seeing where Chase is next week. (Tomorrow? Friday?) 😊 🍻 Blessed safety to everyone. 🍀

I’ve already stated how much I loved WLM v4. You have improved upon perfection, Dayne; This chapter rocked!! I can’t wait for each update but understand the “distractions” of life. Take your time; I’ll be waiting here like a hooker at Fleet Week 😁. It’ll be worth it....especially when the results are this stellar. The best to you and your loved ones. Stay safe.

Woo Hoo❣️❣️ Seeing chapter 5 update made my day❣️❣️ I’ve liked the improvements so far. Blessed safety to you and your loved ones. 💛

I see a corona side effect are going to be hella long comment pages, lol. There are worse ways to spend time....🤷‍♀️

You have written two engaging characters with a lovely chemistry, I’m enjoying watching them fall in love. Blessed safety to you and I look forward to future chapters.

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Lol. Her soliloquies were usually spot on, too.

So painfully, sadly true. 💔

Yeah, the call to Ray is highly suspicious to me, it’s what makes me wonder how long and far down bitter Betty boulevard he’s going to go before he seeks healthier ways to deal with his pain.

LOL!! Ya know... Perhaps he’s trying to make the holes in other places match the size of the hole in his heart. 🙁 💔 He wouldn’t be the first to look for love in all the wrong places; My sympathy only goes so far because of what he did to Chase. Rightly or wrongly, Hank is a big boy and can make his own decisions, so is Kevin. Kevin was supposed to be both Hank and Chase’s friends and it’s the disrespect of that that has me calling him Kevhoe. If I’m cheated on, my beef is with my partner, who is supposed to be committed to me....unless the other party is a family member or friend-with two commitments betrayed, then it’s time to open a can of whupass on EV-ER-RY-BO-DY. 🤬

He doesn’t need my help, LOL!!!!

Kevin is definitely hurt; People handle their hurt in different ways. Kevin could spiral out from this and become vindictive....it may not be his rock bottom. I hope it’s a hard lesson learned, for his sake.

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