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I actually cried.

It appears that you keep switching between first person and third person, not only within a paragraph but even withing a sentence. This makes it difficult to follow the story.

The Prologue and Chapter 1 are identical.

My memory fails me. What is OBR?

I do not know what places in this story are real and which are fictional. (I believe Thomsponville is fictional.) As I read, I try looking at a map of Australia via OpenStreetMap at [https://www.openstreetmap.org] I am able to find many of the places named. However, I find Macquarie Harbour on the island of Tasmania and Port Macquarie where the plot-line describes Macquarie Harbour. Is this intentional, is this your mistake, or is OpenStreetMap in error?

In my old age (82), my memory is sometimes not great. Please tell me, what is the "project" that is being built? Alternatively, direct me to the book and chapter where that is explained.

Yes, indeed continue. However, I have been waiting a long time for continuation of other of your stories, for example "Discovering Home" and "Shoulder Season". Also, is there a follow-up book to "And A Child is Born"?

“But that’s not fair!” When my daughter was quite young, she would often say that. I broke her of that habit by replying "Fair is where they give pigs blue ribbons."

I was somewhat disappointed by the lack of romance between Jexon and Marcus. No, I was not expecting sex. I generally avoid "suck and fuck" stories, which do not turn me on. If two people love each other enough to become permanent life partners, however, I would expect some hugs, more words of endearment, and other forms of affection. The most romantic passage involved them sitting in separate chairs and watching a sunset. ☹️

Ahhh! Much, much better. And thank you for the explanation. :)

I enjoy the overall story very much. However, this chapter is not readable. Words near the end of a line are broken and continued on the next line. Can this chapter be reformatted and reposted?

I much prefer Leonard Cohen's performance of "Hallelujah" over Wainright’s. De gustibus non est disputandum.

Is this a rewrite of the first book "Do You Ship Us"? Is it a side story? Or is this going to be the third book of the series?

No, I am not getting older. I am already old, and my memory is not always great. Please tell me in which book and which chapter of "The Tampa Chronicles" the event happened that Jeremy is now being charged with assault. I want to reread about the entire event, so please do not summarize it here.

Silver necklace chains? I thought silver was extremely toxic to lycans and other were creatures.