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So, what is 17 all about?
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I might have missed the explanation. Why is there frequent use of "seventeen" and "seventeenth"?
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If a gay uncle is a guncle, does that mean a gay aunt is a gant? Or is she a gaunt?
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The item about the free online calculus book is real. My daughter is an internationally recognized expert on open text books, which are available online for free. Instead of professors publishing text books and collecting royalties, they are paid a stipend to write their books and put them online. Students can download them or just read them online. Other professors can download them and rearrange the contents to suit their own teaching plan, as long as they give credit to the original author.
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I read in a prior chapter that several of the documents binding Liam to Marina were signed while Liam was 17 years old. He was not yet an adult at that time. Such documents are not valid. Why has this not been raised in court?
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Chapter 12 - What Should We Call It?
lEAFMOLD commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 12 - What Should We Call It?
You wrote: And underneath it all, whether I wanted it or not, something inside me was shifting. Not replacing Kevin. Not erasing him. Just… making space. Room for a new presence in a life I’d convinced myself was already full enough with memories and routines. I have two grandchildren, a grandson from my son and a granddaughter from my daughter. My grandson overheard me tell my granddaughter that I love her. He get very belligerent. However, he calmed down when I explained that love is elastic; it expands to cover everyone with whom I am close. -
Chapter 3 - Coincidence
lEAFMOLD commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Coincidence
"At night, he started coming to me in dreams." Yes, if we love someone who dies, they live forever in our hearts and dreams. My father died about 75 years ago, but he often still appears in my dreams. The same with my mother, who died 15 years ago, and with my son, who died 12 years ago. Sometimes they are all together in my dreams, sometimes only one is. When they appear, there is no kidney failure (my father), no Alzheimer's (my mother), and no lung cancer (my son). Instead they are all healthy. When I awake, I am not sad. It is comforting that I had a little more time with them. -
Is this a rerun of an old story? Somehow, I recall reading a story with this same title several years ago.
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In 1972, July 4 fell on a Tuesday, not a Wednesday. Just the same, this is a very enjoyable story.
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Is this very much the same as the story posted several years ago? Or have you made some significant changes? I was already into "The Next Stage" and remember much of it.
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Please refresh my aging memory. In what chapter was there an attempt to kidnap Bryce?
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Chapter 19 - An Uncertain Future
lEAFMOLD commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 19 - An Uncertain Future
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The Prologue and Chapter 1 are identical.
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My memory fails me. What is OBR?
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I do not know what places in this story are real and which are fictional. (I believe Thomsponville is fictional.) As I read, I try looking at a map of Australia via OpenStreetMap at [https://www.openstreetmap.org] I am able to find many of the places named. However, I find Macquarie Harbour on the island of Tasmania and Port Macquarie where the plot-line describes Macquarie Harbour. Is this intentional, is this your mistake, or is OpenStreetMap in error?
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In my old age (82), my memory is sometimes not great. Please tell me, what is the "project" that is being built? Alternatively, direct me to the book and chapter where that is explained.
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Yes, indeed continue. However, I have been waiting a long time for continuation of other of your stories, for example "Discovering Home" and "Shoulder Season". Also, is there a follow-up book to "And A Child is Born"?
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I was somewhat disappointed by the lack of romance between Jexon and Marcus. No, I was not expecting sex. I generally avoid "suck and fuck" stories, which do not turn me on. If two people love each other enough to become permanent life partners, however, I would expect some hugs, more words of endearment, and other forms of affection. The most romantic passage involved them sitting in separate chairs and watching a sunset. ☹️
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Ahhh! Much, much better. And thank you for the explanation. :)
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I enjoy the overall story very much. However, this chapter is not readable. Words near the end of a line are broken and continued on the next line. Can this chapter be reformatted and reposted?
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A Lazy Day by the Pool
lEAFMOLD commented on Late to the party's story chapter in A Lazy Day by the Pool
I much prefer Leonard Cohen's performance of "Hallelujah" over Wainright’s. De gustibus non est disputandum. -
TC4 — Chapter 8: The Others
lEAFMOLD commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC4 — Chapter 8: The Others
No, I am not getting older. I am already old, and my memory is not always great. Please tell me in which book and which chapter of "The Tampa Chronicles" the event happened that Jeremy is now being charged with assault. I want to reread about the entire event, so please do not summarize it here. -
Silver necklace chains? I thought silver was extremely toxic to lycans and other were creatures.
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You wrote: "Dave and I each had a multigrain bagel with cream cheese, locks and capers". What did they lock with the locks? Or did you mean lox?
