unilive

“Thank you for an amazing night San Diego! I can't believe this is the last one, you were amazing, we love you and we'll miss you so much! Have a safe journey home and see you again someday!" Those were the words that Robbie had used to end the tour. We’d played the SDCCU Stadium and it had been so sad and emotional to say goodbye to the fans, knowing that it was the last gig of what had turned out to be the most incredible tour we had ever done. Now we were gathering in the dining

It really wasn't meant as a criticism, just a thought to make the story better, cause it's a good story.

Oh no sorry, I wouldn't be a good editor, but because I was so bad at it when I started writing my story, I now know how important it is lol hope you find someone who can give you a few pointers. Think dots and commas.

I enjoyed this first chapter, looking forward to more!👍 (I can't believe i'm going to say this, because I've been there before trust me, but I think the story would be better if you find an editor )

same! Awesome chapter and first kiss, I thought there'd be no sex until the very end, so it was a pleasant surprise lol I'm pretty sure life won't be all cupcakes and rainbows for these two from now on, so let's see what you have in store for them...

So Penn is gonna play hard to get, uh? Of course he will! 👍

wow, these two have amazing self-control! I mean I would have sex with Penn so many times already! lol kidding, this was a really sweet chapter, and when they do finally kiss, there's gonna be fireworks! I'm with @84Mags , loved the line “His expression—I never knew you could smile from your soul." but I think I like this one even more: the way he held me, like he was holding onto something he couldn’t live without 👍👍

Looks like Nash is falling for Penn! 😁 So glad Wayne told everyone that Paul was sleeping with Lee! He got what he deserved! 👍

Another great chapter... to quote you he-he Penn really is a good friend, but that paragraph about his own marriage, intriguing...

So am I, that's what I thought from the beginning but it seems too easy... Well not for Nash considering Penn is straight AND married...but he doesn't have kids so less guilt...

A captivating chapter! So well-written but so sad, although it was obvious Lee wasn't faithful. I'm sure Nash will find love again, but with who?

Hope it was a good surprise!

and that would be the hotel!!

I felt someone pass a blindfold over my eyes. I didn’t object, I’d found that blindfolds could be the way to really good things, starting with our island home, although this felt different to normal. I could hear Nick whispering to Rob but not the words although I did hear Rob giggle, "That's awesome," he gasped, "let's go." Chapter 30 continues ----- The two of them helped me to stand then walk and although I knew it couldn't have been far, being blindfolded made i

I like how you're writing about real life in this story, they feel like real people already with genuine emotions, and I don't think it's that slow paced or maybe it is but it's just right, it doesn't get boring and I say that because I usually give up reading a story when there are too many details, too many descriptions, it bores me... I think I kinda know what will happen in this story because of something you've said to me a while ago now and I look forward to finding out if I'm right...

@Bard Simpson That's what I understood too, "that they only occasionally dabbled in troilism and that was not enough to be called 'regular'." And it's true, they don't, they enjoy exploring and playing together but if I count the number of times they've done it, it's about 4/5 times, and now that you've read chapt 18, Rob does say to Sam that he can count them on one hand. and Shadow Dweller, I'm not sure you should say that, what happens in the recent chapters might come as a shock lol Bard Simpson, I'm surprised ( and relieved) you liked this chapter, I was under the impression that most readers didn't like this chapter much because of what Mark did, and they were mad at him for doing it... well I loved writing this one so tbh, I didn't care whether readers liked it or not, I wouldn't have written it differently.

true, I'd love them to record another album...😎

and how long do you plan on sending your witchy vibes my way? just so I know how many more chapters I'm gonna have to write 😅😅

@Bard Simpson yep @ShadowDweller definitely loves U-N-I, perhaps even more than me, if that's possible 😅 and if the story keeps going, that's because I've received a lot of encouragement and help.

Nice! I admire how well you develop your characters and your dialogues, you got a great imagination 😀

"Tonight's the night," Rob quietly sang the title of the old Rod Stewart song as we watched our friends prepare to leave, making me giggle. Nick had already sent me a text to tell me he'd re-configured our temporary rehearsal space to re-create our on-stage set-up as best he could; he'd been delayed in doing so due to our extended music-making the night before. He'd be driving us to where Rob's paragliding session would begin and I was under strict instructions to start reeling in

I'm sure it'll be good!! Plus you should try new things and do what feels right for you. I've actually posted U-N-I here not long ago, I didn't think it was good enough before but after revising it several times, I thought why not...plus I had the new chapters to post

I had fun reading all the comments on this story and the story itself - again! You have a great 'fanbase', which is not surprising cause you're a great writer. This story really is fun and captivating! Can't wait to read the next one now.

well, looks like this is where I'll be reading your new story I hadn't looked for you here lol

I'm still on lockdown so yeah, Nick gets to stay! One more chapter before the big finale lol