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What Was Seen Cannot Be Unseen
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Was Seen Cannot Be Unseen
Ha, ha, if only. Mark's eyes are just another piece of the puzzle. As for Carter becoming more and more susceptible to male charms, that might happen, too, lol! -
I believe I saw a movie, a very long time ago, with a guy who got swapped with a woman's body, and it was pretty hilarious, starting with the point of going to the bathroom and searching for missing parts with a full bladder. I think it would be quite confusing, and, in some parts of the story, I struggled with the idea of how to best point out this type of confusion for the main character. I think I've always enjoyed the body swap thing in fiction or otherwise and that's why I wanted to write this type of story. Thanks for the insightful comment!
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Everything in this commentary is well spot on. I mainly used the 'body swap' trope here as a vehicle for experimentation. Carter, of course, will have to decide if what he feels - including physically wise - is real, or just the side effect of walking and breathing in another person's skin. The dream theory ... I can't recall right now if someone else wondered about it. You're both right and wrong, but you'll have to read the entire story for that particular puzzle to solve Thanks for keeping up with the story.
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Gay Thoughts, Gay Thoughts Everywhere
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Gay Thoughts, Gay Thoughts Everywhere
Well, I pretty much assigned Alex the 'villain' role, so I know I got one thing right as people's reactions to him were completely warranted. More of how Aron got married to Alex, and what made him do it, you will sometime down the road. He will speak about it at large -
Waking Up Is Hard To Do
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Waking Up Is Hard To Do
Thanks a lot! I hope you're going to enjoy it to its very end (which is only 34 chapters from here on out) -
Ha, ha, I like the cold shower pun! I'm sure Heath wouldn't appreciate a cold shower ever! Thank you for making me laugh!
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Hmm, yeap, that should happen Aidan is trying too hard. Thanks for noticing that!
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Yes, you are correct. Aidan should take a little breather. I'm afraid that Heath won't let him, though Thank you for stopping by, like always!
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I'm sure you'd make a good one, Wes
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Can't add anything to this ... lol!
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Yes, Aidan is! (#notmyfault) :))
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Well, that would surely be a good strategy, me thinks! And a way for Aidan to secure the promotion he dearly seeks, he-he. But, come on, there couldn't be any projects better than this :))
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Thank you! Aidan and Heath would like to thank you, too!
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Chapter Eight – (Not) So Honest Neither of them was talking, seemingly too trapped into observing the other. Heathcliff knew he was supposed to be the initiator, with Aidan being so guarded and almost on the point of running out the door. “When you say you lack experience,” he said softly, as he raised his hands to cup Aidan’s face, “how much lack of experience are we talking about?” “You know,” Aidan trembled slightly under the caress, “the usual. I mean, I’ve been in college. I did
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I had to read the Wikipedia page to understand the reference, but it was all worth it :))
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Ha-ha, I have no idea if bunnies like water or not! I hope they're not like cats! Thanks for the funny comment!
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Then it definitely helps, which why these masks are for, after all. And you're to be admired. I have total stage fright. And I mean it. My mind goes all blank. Thank God I didn't have to speak in front of an audience since I was very little and had to participate in school events.
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We do have what are called masks that we all use in our interactions with the world. And I just thought Heath, of all characters, should have them, and that the 'playboy' persona could not be the real him, or maybe part of him, but not truly him. He, he, I like how you said that he washes off the new sensation with a long shower. That's like him, too, I guess. Thank you for rooting for them. Like all my characters, they have my love. Hugs!
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I'm glad you think that way. And Aidan was, for sure, just as surprised
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You'e not at all far from the truth Heathcliff will come to that realization at some point. The question is: what is he going to do with it? Thank you for commenting!
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He-he, Wes, if you don't know me by now ...
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Ah, I feel so flattered that you enjoy my stories so much and that you think so highly as me as a writer Please comment to your heart's content! Part of what makes the experience of writing so enjoyable is that I can exchange ideas with peoole who read what I write, and, so far, GA has proven the most user-friendly experience. Other websites are not by far as functional and easy to use when it comes to commenting, replying to other comments, and overall interacting with others. So don't hesitate to tell me what you think. That really makes my day! Hugs!
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Oh, that was so cute ... how you see Aidan. And, actually, that's completely true. I think that we all tend to do that when we are young, and see ourselves bigger than we are, lol! Thank you for not hating me for my cliffhangers Readers speculating about this or that outcome always make my day. My stories are journeys between point A and point B, but there could be so many ramifications, and I only have to settle for one. People who read them can imagine anything they like, and I think that's pretty awesome! Thank you for your nice comment!
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Ah, thank you for this beautiful comment Heath has, as most people, multiple facets that make up his personality. He wants to show them to Aidan, and, as @travlbug pointed it out, he has a heart! The way he does the showing is a bit questionable, but I'm glad to see that you're on Heath's side (And yeah, he might not be that shallow)
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Phew, saved!
