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Laura S. Fox

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  1. Laura S. Fox

    Perfect Shot

    Ah, then it's up to Heath to convince him otherwise. The man will try, it's all I'm saying!
  2. Laura S. Fox

    Perfect Shot

    As I said in another comment, honesty will be one of the main themes of this story. It will appear in more than one occasion, and at key points. Thank you for noticing! As for not being that much fun for Aidan ... let's say that he will still enjoy himself.
  3. Laura S. Fox

    Perfect Shot

    Well, that's certainly the case! Aidan will truly be a challenge for Heath, and in more ways than one! Thank you for commenting!
  4. Laura S. Fox

    Perfect Shot

    Yeah, that's true. They don't even realize how much alike they are in that respect. The whole story will be about honesty as one of the central themes, I believe. Thank you for your good wishes, Mike!
  5. Laura S. Fox

    Perfect Shot

    Thank you, Tony!
  6. Laura S. Fox

    Perfect Shot

    Any other Aidan than this one, though, or Heath would take issue with you!
  7. Laura S. Fox

    Perfect Shot

    I hope you'll like the next just the same, Wes!
  8. Chapter Twelve – Perfect Shot He walked over to Heathcliff and his companion, and, for a couple of seconds, he just stood there, not knowing what to do. It was surely foolish, to act on instinct like that because truth be told, he wanted to dance with Heathcliff, too, and there was no turning back. Heathcliff’s companion seemed to be the first to notice him standing there. “Can we help you with something?” the guy asked, frowning slightly. Aidan licked his lips and swallowed. He wa
  9. Heh-heh, you will see next time what kind of dancing that will be. I think it will be a big, and hopefully nice, surprise.
  10. I understand how that can be a problem.
  11. Well, look at the bright side. At least, you're not told the opposite, which would be that you look like you're wearing a scowl all the time. I had people telling me, once they knew me, that they were afraid to talk to me, lol! I suppose we can't truly control how our faces look like. If we were aware, we would be way too tense.
  12. Thank you! Especially for encouraging Aidan since he needs it a lot
  13. Aww, so sorry! I promised it will get better, and from that moment onward, a new chapter in their lives will begin!
  14. OMG, that's so sweet! It's totally spot on! And you can't believe how right you are about Heath being a big softy! You will see it next time when Aidan asks him for a dance! As for Michael, he'll be the guy who will have all the fun watching from the sidelines! He's Heath's bestie And also a great guy! As for Aidan feeling like this about men taking interest in him, that's all because of a particular type of sheltered life that didn't allow him to 'experiment' too much. I hope it will all become more clear as the story progresses. Thank you for commenting, and posting a cute gif!
  15. Hmm, very good question Aidan will feel like .... No, no, no,I won't give spoilers!
  16. Ha, ha, I didn't even realize that it could do that! And I call myself the author of this story!
  17. Aidan needs help, definitely. Heathcliff can be just so overbearing sometimes. I hope you'll like the next chapter!
  18. I think you'll like how they dance a lot, Wes
  19. Next time, you'll get to accompany Aidan and Heath in their fun and maybe they'll have room in the car to take you with them!
  20. Hey, hey, hey, long time no see I'm glad to see you on board, or, should I say the Aidan and Heathcliff ship? You did a great job hiding yourself :)) But I'm so grateful to find you here!
  21. I do think that people tend to have problems estimating their true value in their young years. They depend so much on what other people think of them because there's no proper measuring stick for that. So that was what I wanted to reflect through Aidan's behavior. As you well pointed out, Michael tells Aidan he knows his stuff, yet Aidan isn't that sure of that. Thank you for commenting, as always
  22. Chapter Eleven – A Risk Worth Taking “A night to remember,” Aidan mumbled to himself as he took the package just delivered by his door, and went inside. He inhaled once and then exhaled. He hoped Heathcliff wasn’t in the mood to make fun of him, by sending him something like knee-high socks and pom-poms. At first glance, there seemed to be no pom-poms. Good. He could breathe normally. So Heathcliff had opted for normal clothes, by the looks of it. What the hell was that guy thinking
  23. Thank you! Both for your vivid imagination and for reading my story!
  24. Oh, damn, it would have been something ... But I might disappoint you, I'm sorry! It's just that Heath needs some time with the preparations and that will take a little more than a single chapter (the next). But, oh, it would have been such a coincidence! And your choice of gifs is too damned spot on! I have a grin on my face I need to get rid of or people around me will think I'm a little crazy!
  25. You're right on all accounts, my dear But, as with anything that's new, they will take some time to get there (both of them, or I'll have no story to tell, ha, ha)
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