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Thanks Wes! Glad you liked it!
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Ah, I was expecting you to have more questions, lol. Well, I'm glad you're enjoying the naughty bits And yeah, I think there's reason to be worried. The only tidbit I'd like to leave here, about Aron and why he stayed married to Alex, is something related to Aron's personality and what formed him as a person. (And I guess now this sounds even more mysterious) The pain Carter felt ... it was in the shoulder of that arm he dreamed about breaking away from his body ... I feel like I should have made it more clear. As for the rule, I'd like to keep this in the realm of a story with just one touch of magical realism. The rest of the characters, save for only two others, obey the same rules as our world. Meaning that they could never believe a body switch is possible. At best, Carter in Alex's body will just end up being treated like he must be institutionalized. Just like no one would believe Alice's adventures if she were to tell them to her parents, for instance. Thank you, dear godmother, for sticking with me on this crazy journey. I just have to say that it will only get crazier from this point forward. Hugs!
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Cue: drum rolls ... and bingo! It looks like we have a winner! (I'm not going to say anything more )
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Chapter Seventeen – All That Matters Aron had made him walk into the house in nothing but his sneakers, commenting something on how nice he looked with jizz pouring down from his ass, and he had had to just take the guy’s word for it. Now, under the hot spray of the shower, and Aron’s wandering hands, he was starting to doubt whether the fact that he had given in like a whore was for the best or the worst. Points in favor of this being the best thing ever: 1. He could not rememb
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The Grass Is Always Greener?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Grass Is Always Greener?
I lol'ed hard reading this comment! Well, Carter doesn't do that well in the thinking department when it comes to men, it seems! What could he do? Kick Simon out? Hey, that's not polite! :)) Simon wants to say thanks for appreciating the harness! He did spend some time picking it! When you have no one to talk to, it's easy to pick conversations with parts of your body. Only it's not a foot, like in Alice's case! I didn't see that Star Trek episode, he, he. And, finally, you're giving a bit too much credit to poor Aron! That would be another movie! Thanks for the funny comment, like always! -
The Grass Is Always Greener?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Grass Is Always Greener?
Ah, you do sense something about Aron's choice of words, but it's not exactly what you think As for Alex being different, that again, is something that will become clearer along the road, as more details on Alex's pesonality will be revealed. Yes, please take a look at that dream! I know it's little to work with, but at the same time, I'm afraid I gave away too much! (And that really does make little sense, now that I think about it ...) Thanks for commenting! -
The Grass Is Always Greener?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Grass Is Always Greener?
He, he, Wes, glad you enjoyed it so much! And, I gotta say, OMG, another friggin' cute avatar! -
The Grass Is Always Greener?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Grass Is Always Greener?
The 'ha ha' reaction is for the first line of the comment. He, he, Carter will have to wrap his head around it and eventually choose what's right. He'll get there, hopefully, before he's old and grey. Carter's parents have a role, and somehow, you're dotting the i in this situation. But there will be some time for that, too. Thank you! -
Yeah, it's all a tangled mess now, indeed ... It is mostly Carter's doing, and I blame it all on him, lol! He'll have a lot of work to do, but, of course, he would just make a bigger and bigger mess, until he realizes what he has to do. Ah, I just hope you'll keep up with the shenanigans of this character! He's a bit of a case, what can I say? Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. And I promise you'll get even more pissed off with the characters during the next chapters, lol!
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Simon is silly, and Carter is a bit stupid, he, he, I'm not going to defend them! But it all comes from somewhere ... you know what they say, even the road to hell is paved with good intentions! PS Love the fighting emojis!
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He, he, that's a little evil, don't you think? I'm afraid my plotline will disappoint you if this is your wish! But I have so much in store for this story! I can only say that it would get crazier and crazier! (Plus, don't you want to know if Aron would still like Carter without a supermodel's body? ;))
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The Grass Is Always Greener?
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Grass Is Always Greener?
Ah, dear godmother, you're not the only one wanting that ... Aron will make it somewhat clear, in a conversation I have already written down on my notes, about all his motivations regarding Alex, their marriage, and everything entailed by their relationship. I hope that, when the time comes, it will all make sense. It will happen sometime down the road, and in-between, as always, I can only promise that a lot will happen, of course! Ah, poor Simon! That's the kind of reaction I wanted people reading the story to have! A threat? Yeah, I guess he is. It is up to Carter to solve the situation, and we both know now how much Carter cares about making things right. But he has his convoluted ways of doing that. Seriously, nothing is straight with this boy! Lol, pun intended. Carter's dream is a little breadcrumb trail ... I will add to it, every now and then (and not because I'm evil, I promise). Thanks for commenting, Hugs! -
Gay For You. Or Something.
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Gay For You. Or Something.
Hey Tim, thanks for commenting! Well, Carter is starting to realize ... a few things, but, trust me, when he'll fully understand, he'll do it in his own style. Don't blink, ha, ha! It will be like a split second! -
Chapter Sixteen – The Grass Is Always Greener? There was no possible way to reason with the guy, nor did he take hints. Simon was like a stupid dog that needed a lot of training. After closing the door a few more times in his face, and a few others telling him to just go home already, Carter had had to open the door wide and try to have a conversation with the guy. “Do you have any idea how this looks? The neighbors will see your car parked in the driveway!” he pointed the finger at Simo
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Ah, ah, why didn't I think about laundry? Poor Simon! He, he ... Well, yeah, Carter needs more practice and he is just going to get it! Although, hint, hint, he might not settle for just being a bottom, after all. Ha, ha, that one with mom really cracked me up! Yeah, I think that must be ... And it should have been such a sad moment ... As for the hug magnet, he really did that to himself, didn't he? Now he has to live with the consequences! Thank you for a hilarious comment!
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Ah, definitely! I was thinking of some specific situations, and the men I was talking about were probably more experienced with life in general, hence my conclusion. But, yes, I can easily imagine the kind of situations you are talking about!
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Yeah, your description of what happened is right on target. Carter felt vulnerable, so he let down some walls. Glad you liked it! And yeah, even if he thought his folks don't care to come see him in the hospital, the reality is totally different. But the relationship between Carter and his parents plays a role in how he shaped as a person, and also I hope it will offer some answers as the story progresses. Plus, we both know by now that we cannot rely on Carter completely to offer a clear representation and interpretation of reality. Ah, I'm so thrilled people love Mark more and more. You're clearly right in your observations! He is the perfect assistant, just not the kind Carter thinks and is too blind to consider the possibilities. Being the scattered brain that he is, that shouldn't come as a surprise. He's a clear case of not seeing the forest from the trees. And that reminds me of a cartoon I was watching years ago, with King Arthur and Merlin the Wizard, that was really quirky and funny. The two had to fight some creature - I think it was the two-headed fire-breathing bull of Valencia, but I may be wrong - and the scene was like this: Merlin: Look, sire! Over there! Arthur: Ah! A sparrow! Merlin: No, behind that sparrow! And, of course, behind the sparrow, there was the two-headed fire-breathing bull of Valencia! That's Carter for me! It won't be the last time he's looking in the wrong direction! Ah, Simon ... He is not a pod person, the poor thing! He's just a little silly! And Carter will have to take care of him. Many hugs, my dear godmother. It's a real pleasure to read your comments.
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Ah, awesome! Your guess is a bit remote from what I wanted to say with Carter's dad's reaction to Alex (with Carter inside), but still spot on. Carter's dad might not know about his son's attraction to Aron (or guess it), but he does see Alex for who he is, that being someone who gets away with a lot of things just because of his looks. From my experience, men have a more acute sense when it comes to seeing beautiful people for what they are. Women are just easier to impress by a pretty face. I saw it happening in front of my eyes, lol! So, yes, you were right, Carter's dad didn't react like that because he recognized his son in the other. Carter's parents tend to be quite rational and they would not think of something as crazy like that! Even if it's true!
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Oh, your feelings are spot on! Well, Simon is sort of naive, so Carter feels the need to handle him with care. How that will work out will be one of the points I want to make about Carter's character. Alex would be as cruel as you say, and just play with Simon. Ah, you'll love Mark even more, I think. And I hope the revelation about him will be worth the wait. Thank you for your nice comment!
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Oh, Carter will get his chance to find out if he would still have a chance with Aron under other circumstances. But there are still plenty of adventures to experience until then. Thank you for commenting! Cheers!
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Ha, ha, don't worry, Carter will make up for all his mishaps in due time. Now, I don't want to disappoint anyone in regards to Carter's parents, but it will be someone else who'll have a short - and I mean incredibly short - glimpse of who really is now in Alex's body. It will be some time into the future, and you'll understand why at that particular given moment (hopefully for me, as the writer who comes up with this plot). I'm glad you like Mark! He plays an important part in the story! As for Simon ... yeah, your description of him is pretty much accurate.
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Chapter Fifteen – Doors And Walls It was late in the evening when he finally went home. He had taken the car and driven aimlessly for hours, trying hard to ignore the mess in his brain. Like a burglar, he sneaked into the house. Maybe Aron was already asleep and he wasn’t going to offer any explanations now. He took off his shoes and began to walk slowly through the living room. Maybe he was just going to crash on the sofa. The sound of a door opening and the light flooding the room
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He, he, I just hope I'm not going to start disappearing and only leave a grin behind. Thank you for enjoying the ride. There is more of this story, so buckle up!
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Ah, you're on to something here ... But it won't be Carter's mom who'll catch that glimpse. That person is very important to Carter, but you cannot guess who it is at this moment, as I haven't yet provided enough information for that. Anyway, good guess!
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Ah, Wes, I bet you only want to be a famous screenwriter!
