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Laura S. Fox

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  1. We will definitely see how that goes!
  2. Alexander, for reasons of his own, keeps his cards close to his vest. Keep an eye on him
  3. So much truth...
  4. Well said. You guys keep your eyes open. Especially during memory chapters. Lyn is too plagued by his anxieties to interpret things correctly (hence the unreliable narrator).
  5. I've notice - from other readers - that's quite the popular opinion
  6. Alexander is... okay, I don't want to give spoilers, but I believe people will notice anyway. He's not the type to change much.
  7. O-ho-ho, that unresolved tension... you have no idea how right you are. Lyn lives in the present, but I'm giving you guys windows into the past so you can spot, sometimes maybe just from the corner of one eye, the truth of the events that transpired. That door won't close again. Ever again.
  8. In a nutshell, that's how he presented himself! I won't defend him!
  9. Lyn is basing a lot of his reactions to Alexander from now on his old insecurities regarding Alexander from then. There's a solid reason why I chose this particular structure, alternating between present and past, so the contrasts can be easy to spot. But there will also be clues Which, I hope, will serve to make the present make all the more sense. Lyn thinks he knows Alexander well. Maybe not that well
  10. Chapter Six – [Memory, Freshman Year, November] – Temptation The Two Treatises of Government were in danger of becoming three or even four, as his tired eyes tried to focus on his reading. Lyn stole a few glances around and pushed his laptop an inch away and his chair back. If he rested his forehead on the back of his hands, just like this, he’d be fine in a minute. The full-ride scholarship had been a blessing so far, but there was no one else who knew better than Lyn that his careful
  11. It's inevitable. They just don't know it yet
  12. Ahem. We'll see.
  13. Definitely not 'Average Joe' - Danny will learn things about himself in the process of, well, everything. Pembroke will have his own role in this.
  14. I'm afraid your wait will be for nothing.
  15. Danny is... important, but he's not exactly a wolf However, his touch on Ryder is nothing ordinary. Those sensations mean something even beyond the fact that they were mates. And now that I read this scenario, I regret that I didn't think of this twist...
  16. It's all my fault! My mind keeps running on several lanes at once... hence their overthinking!
  17. Nothing will beat that! Sex with a mate is everything, as they say these days!
  18. It's all good then!
  19. That will be quite the evolution
  20. They are totally made for each other. And the actions will speak louder than words!
  21. He's definitely in denial! For now. But the action will pick up, and he'll have to see it! Thanks for the nice song!
  22. Oh lol, when she started to sing suddenly...
  23. Taste test!
  24. Danny is one of a kind human! (or maybe there are others, according to Jack's theory)
  25. I'm happy you liked it! The Moon Goddess is one their side, and she will definitely help
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