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Laura S. Fox

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  1. Hearst worked on two lanes, but he only needs to use one By not signing the NDA and recording the talk with Angus, he did have a plan B. But I thought the brother turned lawyer was too good an idea to ignore.
  2. Oh no, and we sooo care about Angus's feelings
  3. My bad, here it is:
  4. I will humbly accept that award And yes, you're right. We're on the last leg of this journey. Now all that's left is to figure out the (happy) ending... Jk, I already did.
  5. Chapter Fifty-Two – Almost Famous Angus was red like a lobster and looked like he had lost his voice. Jamie was still under the impact of having met his brother for the first time in fifteen years and had turned into a complete mute, as well. “We have a solid case, Mr. Boyd,” Nolan continued, adjusting his shades while continuing to grin like a Cheshire cat. “I mean, what could you possibly mean by this? Contestants agree to all conditions of the production and waive any claims against
  6. You are so right about him being the key Thank you for your nice comment. I love having my characters do surprising things, but also while keeping them in character! Hence Danny's worry felt natural to me, because, hey, you don't meet your future in-laws for the first time in your life every day! Also, so true those last few words
  7. I had to google that!
  8. Truer words have never been spoken... Average Joe no more, welcome Extraordinary Joe! I mean, Danny!
  9. Oh, you're so right about that first line! And he'll do so much more!
  10. I didn't think of that!
  11. And now I recall how one of the readers on another story of mine made me into a meme - or adapted a meme to me and my propensity for cliffies. If memory serves, it went like this: Reader: how many cliffhangers are in this story? Laura S. Fox: yes.
  12. Too bad I didn't think of that! He is using something else in the next chapter, though... Love the bit about priorities.
  13. He doesn't need that old thing anymore
  14. Thank you, Chris!
  15. And I prepared the surprise battle in chapter 24 - I just posted - for a long time A little bit of more adventure will follow, and of course, you'll be able to read about some naughtier adventures, too. But later! A witch is not to trifle with...
  16. And I believe that Danny's role just became a lot clearer with the new episode I just posted...
  17. Wow, thank you so much! I have great fun writing certain bits...
  18. Chapter Twenty-Four – The Hour of the Witch Danny wobbled as they landed and Ryder caught him as he transformed into his human. Jack yelped to express his dismay at having been left to drop like a sack of potatoes, but it was short-lived. The young clairvoyant had other matters to worry about more pressing than a rough landing. As did he. Danny’s eyes went to Vince, who looked like he was in pain. His clothes were in tatters, burned at the edges, revealing his naked skin to the moon. H
  19. Thank you, Doha!
  20. Okay, okay, let me warm my hands to write a proper reply. Emotionally unsafe space... wow, that's harsh but not untrue. We have our expectations of love shaped by how we grow up and the sort of relationships we witness. That's one of the reasons why I opted for the present-past structure of chapters, in the hope that readers will end up understanding and 'forgiving' Lyn. However, I like to believe that by the end of the story, Brad's friendship for/with Lyn will mean something Of course, since I'm not showing you all the cards... you have no reason to believe that, but watch for my show of smoke and mirrors, like usual. And Lyn should assume responsibility for how he is, since he's an adult now - at least partially. Someone might upend his views... He-he, love this line 'it's not strategy - it's chemistry'. Oh, it so is. Lyn recognizes it in the moment, even if he reverts to his usual hang-ups as soon as it's over. But in the moment, he is a part of it, he lives it. And he really thrives when he's together with Alexander. The boy needs a mirror, not gonna lie. Although... it would be so beautiful (right?) if he could see himself reflected in Alexander's eyes. Alexander won't stop; he will continue in the same vein, advancing slowly, carefully, understanding more now of his own feelings, as a grownup, not a young man. I feel tempted to say so much, but I must stop, since spoilers are said to be a terrible thing Welcome back! I hope you had a wonderful time! (save for the sunburn - that's painful)
  21. Oh, wow, what a characterization for Brad! But it applies And... well, well, well, someone is either looking over my shoulder... or has one hell of fine-tuned nose for detecting clues... That's all I'm going to say! Nothing more! And Alexander's path... oh, man, there's quite the story there. I will disclose it, of course, but only when the moment is ripe! (You're so astute on your observations on Lyn, too)
  22. So true, so true...
  23. Alexander might love that comparison!
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